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@BladeSS4 Alright, despite some issues in the bio (it says his mother raised him but he was raised in a foster family?) I'll accept it on account of knowing that your IC is typically a bit better than your CS's.


Thanks, I moved him over to the character slot after editing that first part. He was raised with a step mother, that first part was accidental error. Sweet, he will be the second male character. Lol

Here we go again. Another back story this one got a bit darker then I intended it to get but I hope it is 'simpler' but it is very obvious I am not very good when it comes to coming up with a backstory, but I changed it from what it was I hope it works now.


@BladeSS4 I mean we have Neurovoid's character who has also got a Sharingan. Having an Uchiha would be acceptable if they arrived as refugees during the recent war. But you can give him a regular surname, that's up to you.


I could make a regular surname or just make him part of being a refugee family, then I would have to completely redo his backstory or well a part of it. I start on the rework and just go with the refugee thing and make it a bit more simpler instead of making it more complicated then it has to be lol
@BladeSS4 I believe that the Hozuki hydrification techniques can actually be learned by anyone though, not just Hozuki. It's just a hiden?


I don't think its even that tbh. Looking it up it doesn't say it is, it just says it is the signature of the Hozuki so I guess anyone could learn it. It sort of sounds like the uchiha fireball jutsu and that anyone could really use it. I think if a Hozuki clan member used it I would think it would be easier but I don't think it matters with who is in the clan. If it doesn't really matter, then Hozuki is just really a name or a prominent canon clan.

I guess it really isn't important to keep him as a Hozuki other then it is just a name of clan that uses a lot of water Jutsu that anyone could really learn on their own. So do you want me to change his name because I can I just didn't want to call him an Uchiha because I felt it would be unique I guess to have someone who was of that bloodline but didn't have their name.
“If you're hoping for some easy cash, you seriously chose the wrong girl to mug,”, hearing this from the girl who was running around outside the village. Tashiro wasn't really surprised by her reaction of the girl anyone around these parts are desperate for money. The moment he saw her grab the handle of her weapon Tashiro says, "Whoa there, I don't mean you any harm I was just curious of who was running so close to the village. I am just out here to do a bit of training myself."

Tashiro had hope he could make this a less threatening situation trying not to make any threatening gestures or movements. This was something he was sort of use to when talking to people from or near Gobi. Everyone is on edge a bit when talking to strangers and yet Tashiro couldn't blame them as he too would be questioning someone he didn't know if they walked up to him. It was the same reason he was curious of who was running near the village.

Quickly thinking Tashiro comes up something more to say to help the situation in a friendly manner, "I am Tashiro by the way, I am sorry for interrupt whatever you were doing as I said before I was just curious of who was running around outside of the village. So there is no need for weapons...or jutsu..." Tashiro trailed off at the end he wasn't sure if she was a shinobi but her overall appearance gave it away but he wasn't sure so he trailed off once he figured he was saying too much to someone he didn't really know.
@BladeSS4 It still doesn't really explain why her mother was allowed to stay. Also I don't really understand why you went for the Hozuki clan specifically since you don't really use their jutsu or anything. You don't have to edit it in but maybe you can give me an explanation here?


Well it was a toss up between Hozuki and Yuki clans, it was mostly to give him the water nature from clans that are water users. Yeah, not a really good reason but I figured he could learn some of the jutsu the Hozuki clan can use later on. Just right now this is just his own personal jutsu he learned on his own or through his time through school. I figured it would be better this way since he is a Genin he could learn new things as he goes though the rp.

As for his mother I could have her thrown out of the city but I figured making her a servant would be just keeping her as a resource, I mean she might not be able to use jutsu but she can clean floors and do other chores for the kage, but I can change the history to get rid of her I can but I didn't see the need to have it that way but I can change that if I must.
Alright I tried to fix most of what you had issues with. Let me know if this works now.

Tashiro Hokori



Staring at the ceiling while lying in bed Tashiro just staring and thinking, "How long have I been awake for two hours? Or maybe it was just an hour." He shook his head and reached over and slapped his alarm right before it could go off and then sat up. The first thing he does is yawn and then wipe the sleep from his eyes not that there had been any.

Quickly getting up, he goes the bathroom and showers up and then gets dressed. Dressing up in all black like he normally does, putting on his long coat almost last. Walking into the kitchen and like a very normal site it was bare his mother who he lived with was already gone. It's not like he expect much from her as he barely knew her. He had a year to get to know his mother but yet he hasn't learned much. She was a doctor to the village and she was almost always busy and never home. Just like when Tashiro grew up he still had expected as much. He opens the fridge to look for food and to find a note on the door to remind him to pick food up later that was left by his mother. Letting out a sigh it seemed he needed to go out and find himself some food and fend for himself.

He almost headed out the door before grabbing his sword then holstered the sheath across his back then went outside of his home. As he walks through the door way he reaches back inside and grabs a key then locks the door just as he left. His mother had her own key so he didn't have any problems locking up when he left the apartment. He walked out of the village and looked to go catch his own food and to do a bit of training.

Just as he was leaving he noticed someone running, looked like someone else had the same idea he had or was just doing their morning work outs. Either way it caught Tashiro's attention and he was curious of who it was and decide to go find out as he started to head out towards the female who is running about to try and figure out who it was.

Here yeah go, my character. Still not very good at making a good backstory for a character so it might be a bit of a cliché. I hope it works though.


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