Blu

En'jer: Pharaohs of Egypt

@Hammerman The only issue I see is with the last part of her Biography where she encounters Amen. The RP actually begins with Amen returning to Thebes to assume his new role as Pharaoh. So you would need to change it so that they have their meeting before in a different city/town/whatever. As to how they'll meet in Thebes and she becoming a Vizier, we can save that discussion if Layla is accepted. Everything else looks good.

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@liferusher Is there a general plot that you will be advancing or are we just doing interactions and making our own storylines from here on out?

En'jer: Pharaohs of Egypt

I'll probably start this RP after the weekend, so those who still need to finish their CS, please do so by Monday. @Acid Hippie @Spanner

@Hammerman Tagging you because you expressed interest in making a CS but I'm not sure if you are making one currently.

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☾ Tsukihana

Tsuki listened to them intently. First, Lily had argued that Bea was invading her personal space with her tentacles after being asked to stop. Then Bea said she simply wanted to hear Lily's "song" more. There she goes again, being poetically cryptic. All the while, Tsuki downed the mountain of confectionery without a single moment of hesitation. How can he eat so damn much? Well, he is eating for three after all... Tsuki nods his head a couple of times after listening to the girls. "I get it."

"He doesn't get it." "He doesn't get it." The older two say in unison.

"Well, Big Sis, if you wanted to hear Lily's song, just ask her instead of tickling her." Tsuki advises. Of course, he didn't understand fully what Bea meant by "song" due to the way she speaks. "And Lily, it sounds like Big Sis wants to really be your friend. She's a very kind person. After all, she became my Big Sis!" Tsuki explains. "You two just need to get to know each other more. I'm sure we can all be good friends. After all, I'm having so much fun being with you two!" He smiles at them. Just then, Tsuki realizes he hasn't offered either girls any of his sweets. "Oh, I forgot. Did you guys want any-" He looks at his tray and notices that he's down to just one piece of cake. "I-I'm sorry..." He says, a bit depressed.

"Well, sharing is something friends do. You two can share!" He pushes the piece of cake between the two of them and stares at them, hoping for something to happen. He has an eager look on his face the whole time. What is he expecting to happen exactly? They were going to feed each other like best friends or something? Tsuki then stretches his arms and yawns a great big yawn. All those sweets in his system... It's like poison, he can't handle that big of dose and begins nodding off in an adorable child-like manner where he's trying his best not to fall asleep. But, he eventually caves and his head plops onto the table and his hands... One grabs Bea's breast and the other grabs Lily's breast, and he begins fondling them by instinct. This kid! "Big Sis' and Lily's boobs are so soft and fun to play with..." He says, dreaming.

Suddenly, in a poof of smoke, child Tsuki disappears to be replaced by the oldest-looking one. Yes, the one from within Tsuki's thoughts. Just what the hell is this kid...? "Ugh..." The oldest Tsuki(?) groans as he wakes up. "Huh?" He feels his hands grabbing roundish things. He gives both a few squeezes. They're soft. "What the-" He looks up to see what he was doing and... "L-Lily?! B-Big Sis?! Wait, why the hell am I calling her Big Sis???" He retracts his hands and looks at the two of them, mortified. "Crap, Crap, Crap, Crap, Crap, Crap, Crap, Crap, Crap, Crap, Crap, Crap-" Red blush starts filling up his face like a thermometer.

"Welcome back."

"Aww, I wanted to hang out with Big Sis and Lily a little more!"

@Rune_Alchemist @Hammerman

En'jer: Pharaohs of Egypt

@Blu

Eeeh...hadn't really given it much thought. Lets go with yes, simply because it has the potential to be quite powerful. The blade and the flames both must make contact with flesh. Armor will protect one against it. The rest though, one only needs to be burned by the flames.

@Rune_Alchemist

Okay I was hoping for that to be the case because without making contact, it would be extremely powerful.

En'jer: Pharaohs of Egypt

@Jinxer Everything looks good with Qar. His spells, at least compared to my character and @Rune_Alchemist's character, are a little lacking. Maybe do give him one or two offensive spells or some buff/debuff spells? You can keep his spells as is though.

@Leoven Maybe explain in more detail how Nailah came to work for the royal court? Perhaps she first held a position of treasurer or whatever (because she's good with money) before being selected to become a Vizier because going from a famous merchant to a Vizier seems a little too forced.

@Rune_Alchemist Great looking spells. Only thing I want to know is if she needs to make direct contact with flesh for the Judgment of the Sinful curse to activate.

En'jer: Pharaohs of Egypt

Oh man, I'm interested in joining this, but I still haven't got a good pic for my character yet. Only got this but it's not Egyptian at all.

@Hammerman

And now you're here too. Awesome! Time for more dessert wrestling! Anyways, it doesn't matter if the pic doesn't look "Egyptian" because you can always type out any changes in the appearance part of the CS. Looking forward to your CS if you decide to make one.

En'jer: Pharaohs of Egypt

Whew, done with my CS finally. Took the soul shield from @Rune_Alchemist. Hope you're okay with me doing so.

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En'jer: Pharaohs of Egypt

@Rune_Alchemist I won't be accepting anyone just yet but she seems like a fantastic character. I can't find any faults. From now to when I start accepting, feel free to add or change anything you wish.

@Jinxer A healer type huh? Interesting.