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Forum: Advanced Roleplay
Hello there, @The Elvenqueen.
Quick question, you mentioned in the opening post that the RP would have three episodes, following rebel infantry, imperial agents, and mercenary pilots. Did you mean that you wanted everyone to make a Rebel for the first part, an Imperial for the second part, and so on?
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Discord Hall of Fame™ continues with @Peik's superior prose and @Stormflyx's superior Australian mathematics.
Well done, @POOHEAD189. Just two minor notes before our good captain is approved.
1. Since the main Alliance task force rendezvoused with the Scarlet Moons at the beginning of the RP (three months after Endor), we can say Cleo arrived a month earlier with a smaller unit. This gives him some time to integrate.
2. I assume his Mando armor is the basic configuration, without a jetpack or built-in weapons?
1. Since the main Alliance task force rendezvoused with the Scarlet Moons at the beginning of the RP (three months after Endor), we can say Cleo arrived a month earlier with a smaller unit. This gives him some time to integrate.
2. I assume his Mando armor is the basic configuration, without a jetpack or built-in weapons?
How's it going, @Zarkun?
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Forum: Advanced Roleplay
Alright, @POOHEAD189, your guy looks very promising. However, there's a bit more you have to do, before we accept him.
Other than the above, your character is well-constructed. Keep up the good work!
- The image is not very helpful in terms of appearance, since most of what we see is Cleomenes' helmet. I'd like you to replace it with a Zabrak face, if possible.
- Related to the above, I need more written details on appearance. What does he wear when not in combat? In what way does his movement "command respect"?
- Expand the section regarding Cleo's service with the rebellion. Was he a sympathetic mercenary or part of their main forces? Scarlet Moons wasn't with the Rebel Alliance until very recently, so how did Cleo find them?
- Where and how did he defeat a Madalorian? Also, having a full suit of Mando armor without being a Madalorian is pretty rare. It would be more reasonable if several pieces are broken.
- Not respecting command in itself is not a weakness. What negative consequences did Cleo suffer as a result? Maybe he disregarded intel and stepped on a landmine?
Other than the above, your character is well-constructed. Keep up the good work!
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