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4 days ago
Current Man, the status bar almost showed a day-old status.
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5 days ago
Mecha anime? Bang Bang! Bravern! and GaoGaiGar, and Gurren Lagann. Gundam, of course. Macross. And let's not forget. The BattleTech Saturday Morning Cartoon.
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11 days ago
That lull when you're tempted to join more RPs, but you know you better not.
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11 days ago
If I slide my arms under him, he loves it, but if I pick him up, he hates it.
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12 days ago
My cat is curled up in my hair and snoring in my ear.
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I'm a generally chill gremlin that can be kinda particular. I grew up with plenty of electronics and video games, mostly with games like Final Fantasy, Zelda, and StarCraft. I like to blend magic and technology in my writing, bringing fantasy into space and sci-fi.

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Lemons, how long have you been sitting in here? xD I swear, every time I open this page..

Unless... We're the only page you care about <3
Lay’arra found herself awed as she cast her gaze about the filling hangar. Mechs the likes of which she’d only seen in media were docked in the same hangar as hers! They were incredible to behold this close, and the pilots were all so varied, too. She looked over her shoulder at the Violet Dragoon. Her familiar eyes could see every aging flaw. It irritated her, that her proud Dragoon should look so shabby, next to all these new mechs. At the same time, however, she had to be impressed. Getting out from Grael had been good, she just hoped she and the Dragoon could measure up.

She was looking at all the machines in the hangar, wandering slowly and aimlessly toward the other gathering pilots. Before she could get anywhere or talk to anyone, however, she heard the announcement of a commanding officer. On Grael, things weren't so formal, but she'd been participating in more of a militia than a proper military. She understood things were going to be a little different during this particular service. She was definitely late with the salute as she had to imitate those around her, and one beat slow on the “at ease.”

“Yeah, I'm in a real military now, huh..?” The Anhur took a slow breath as she breathed deeply, her tail flicking softly behind her. Mnn. She wanted to let her tail free, but she'd been scolded for her loose fur getting in the machines, before. It flicked back and forth, agitated by the confines of her suit.
Lunge, miss, Miyuki leaves, Max and Su-.. zy. Hmm. I see.

Alright, then. Back to bed to await Xalt.
It just sounds to me like you need consistency. To me, it seems like Iris choose the timeline where she roars, possibly while transforming, cuing Max and Miyuki. Suzy moves, Iris lunges, missed due to Suzy pull, Iris gets steaked.

How's that?

Edit: aah, good find. Now we just gloss over the
We can say Miyuki left as soon as Iris started to transform? The feeling I get from her was, "oh, a fight. I'm outta here." So, first sign of a fight would be transforming.

Going off of how Bunny wrote, she went with the Team Max timeline.

Max is the realty rendering perspective.
Wibbly wobbly timey whimey?

Mmn, not helpful.
cute little bandaids with anime representations of her human and fox faces on them in a polka dot pattern


That's better.

Oops, and I was a syllable short on that word, there..
@Lemons I don't think getting along will be a problem. Not those two, at least. A certain someone with a -200 relationship rating toward Velvet might complicate matters, but they're all old enough here, they can be mature about it.

... Right?

That and the, uh. Literally toxic presence Yumeiko is to Velvet. But I'm sure they'll figure that part out somehow. Writing? Gasp, chatrooms
I'm glad you like her. :3 She's got a character arc or two that I have some ideas floating around for, but we'll see what shakes out and how.
And now I will be patient.
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