Expllo

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Zane620 said
Yu was in the back ground putting on his Lieutenant armband, he was still surprised he was able to make it this far mostly in a squad such as this one. Putting on his Headband so his hair didn't blow around in his face due to how long it had gotten, he would have cut it, but for some reason Ayashi seemed to like it quite a bit so he left it that way. once he finished putting his headband on he walked over to the crib and smiled at the child, before walking over to Ayashi who was petting the cat. He kissed her on the cheek, then scratched the cat behind the ear. "Good morning.....well you know what I mean." Yu said chuckling referring to Amaya.

She giggled when Yu walked up and kissed her on the cheek then scratched Meowgi behind the hair, when he spoke she looked over at Amaya, "Yes yes it is," she said with a soft laugh, "She has allot of energy....But she's getting older, and I could leave her with someone as I'm almost fit to go on missions again. It was nice taking a break from it all, caring for her, but I am still third seat and need to do my job. Of course she comes first." She let out a small breath and gently leaned against Yu, her head against his chest.

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Never watching that shit again ;_;

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Zane620 said
And we saw it Expllo is deducing as we speak, I also noticed you got a fetish for tall people XD

I already did it, and indeed.

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AbigailTenshi said
Too long. Plus Hasayo doesn't even care soooooooooo doesn't matter how I say it.

I don't give a flippity fruit snack, your wording made it seem like two people were in a relationship which would confuse others and not just Hasayo.....Despite him not caring.

Zane620 said
Hes right you know

Like most of the time.

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DeathstrokeSW said
By the SWA, I meant my girl might re-form it. And here is mah girl. *does hand signs for summoning Jutsu because I've been playing a Naruto shippuden game all day*

Well, I really don't tend to give a shit about History's and the thing's I do have problems with are misunderstandings or nit-picks....Whatever it is here, I'm not sure.

She thinks her mother abandoned her at birth? I don't see the logic from what else you wrote:

She couldn't have thought that considering her mother left a month before her father died, and afterwards became a thief. So obviously she stuck around for atleast a while O.o and if she was so quick to go after her daughter when she went missing, why didn't she help when her daughter wasn't doing well and had no one looking after her? Surely the mother would have gotten word of her lovers death and would have tried helping her daughter?

Abilities:

1. Mist generation: the Kubikiribōchō generates mist and fog, reducing visibility and allowing the user stealth and terror tactics. (3 post use, 4 post Cooldown)

I guess that's fine, unless someone has a problem with the cooldown/PDs?

Butchering Blade: Kubikiribōchō's blade glows with its user's Reiatsu and it unleashes a massive strike (1 post use, 5 post cooldown)

A strike as in an arc of energy, or...???

Increased Strength by 10 percent (4 post use, 4 post cooldown)

So....Does it help her attack be stronger, more durable...??? Depending on that I'll get to the cooldowns.

Frozen fog: the Fog suddenly becomes a circle, and turns the opponent within the circle to ice. (1 post use, 4 post cooldown)

As freezing someone completely would be too OP and would be capable of killing anyone, I say at least freeze the bottom half of them as in up to the ankles or legs. Also would suggest a longer cooldown.

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AbigailTenshi said
A couple couple also means two people and it takes two to make a baby, they don't have to be in a relationship to be a couple of people that had a baby oxo What was I meant to say? Three people had two baby's, one of them on their own? Yeeaaah, kinda not possible dude oxo And Hasayo doesn't even care XD He'd prefer that stuff to be replaced by barely holding each other's hands xD

Yeah, couple does mean two. But when referring to people it means they're in a relationship, not the literal definition, therefore you can't use it in that way. What you could have said was Yu and Ayashi had a baby, and Aya had Viole's baby by crystal. Seeeeeeee?

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AbigailTenshi said
Well I don't think Aya could have a baby on her own without Viole soooooo oxo

Couple means together Abi '_' they weren't.

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Axel said
Two? Who's the other couple besides for Aya and Viole?

They...They weren't.....

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AbigailTenshi said
Well, two couples have had babies, some mess up stuff is gunna happened and character developments have happened, alot of it xD So you only missed a little bit xP

Two? Viole and Aya were a thing? O.o

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