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AeronFarron said
Will do, thank you! For #4 she just makes a copy of her zanpakuto that she can control mentally. Since it is not her actual Zanpakuto, she can use it only for five slashes, one blast of spiritual energy (like a sticky bomb or a mine), or can partially block one low leveled Kido attack. The last option will only be seen as a let ditch effort, since taking a direct blast like that can harm her more than it protects her. After that, it is unusable for two turns.

I think a cooldown of three or four would probably be better, honestly.

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First, for all abilities there should be a post duration and a cooldown to avoid spamming, something you should add. For reference look at pretty much every other CS in this RP.
Now onto the actual abilities:

#1: So if I get this right she has an increase of speed, being able to attack multiple times with kicks and slices? If so, fine.

#2: It's pretty straight forward, so I guess it's fine.

#3: So she hits a target then shoots Spirit Energy at them.....Fine with me.

#4: Can't really picture it, but, it doesn't sound too bad. So it's fine.

All I can say is add post duration's and cool-downs then you're good to go.

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Kenji chuckled as he watch her eat the apple in a matter of seconds, something he was always impressed by. Once she shunpo'ed up to him she spoke and leaned close to him to the point their noses' touched. Once she pulled away he tackled her playfully, he held her arms above her head as he made sure not to be put all his weight on her. The branch was long and thick enough to support them both. He laughed, "Yeah, and what if I did wait here for you? And to answer your other question, yes I would like that. It doesn't have to be awkward, you don't have to cause any unnecessary damage, and the best part is that we're alone together~" Kenji spoke softly, "Now, why wouldn't I like it darling~?"

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Phobos said
Yuup

Mmmmm, Shoske~

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Mhm.

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Lady Satsuki.......You may.

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Phobos said
I have no idea what you're talking about xDYo Hasayo! What's up?

What am I talking about again? xD

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Phobos said
That lazy bastard xD

ASSHOLE I'M HERE! xD

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Zane620 said
Its been another three months since Hozumi has been missing, which of course bummed Aya out greatly and somewhere along the line she just really couldn't forgive leaf for losing Hozumi in the first place and well that's how things ended between them. After the attack, plus all the betrayals that had happened it was clear they all needed to get stronger, mostly since the real threat was their old Head Captain. Aya always did want to fight him, and now she had a legit reason to fight him. She spent most of her days training in the woods as she never had to worry about any damage she might cause, as she would if she trained near the barrack. Kenji helped her train every now and then, and would cheer her up whenever she was too down in the dumps. Of course he was still brutally honest about things, yet it was something she grown use to. And today was no different, she was off in the woods again training.

"There you are," Kenji said as he sat in a tree biting into an apple. He then tossed one down to Aya, from being around him for four months surely she would have picked up his habit of always having apples and saving one for her. It was just something he did, and never told why, but he didn't even like apples! Kenji took another bite before tossing it between his hands. Him and Aya were pretty much in the same situation, neither of them getting closer to saving those they were trying to find. Kenji had gotten into a fight with a few gang members and picked up something, but it wasn't enough to do anything major. He looked down at Aya, the only person he actually warmed up to, something he thought he wouldn't do. It was probably their same situation or something, he wasn't sure, "You come to train or just get away?....Or are you just trying to get me alone?" He winked with a smirk.

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Nic regarding your recent post it came to my attention that you're using a form of god-modding which is against the rules.

You're claiming that members of other Squads are training members of your Squad, as well as Gio, which is something you essentially cannot do. You do not control those Squads therefore have no say in what those members do unless you've gained permission from the people running those Squads, or Gio have contacted the people running those Squads themselves. Another exception being if you had a character in another Squad and got that character to help you out.....But since you didn't that's a form of god-modding because you're pretty much saying Kaizo, Shiro, and assuming Sosuke if he's still alive agreed to help out Squad five when that isn't the case. Not to mention those Squads would be too busy training themselves instead of worrying about another Squad.....Another Squad that should be Kido-based, not really should be worrying about Hakuda or Zanjutsu, maybe Zanjutsu for Zanpakuto's but Squad Five/Kido corps are mainly focused on Kido. Should keep the all-around fighting to the Squads that are mostly about all-around fighting like One & Six.

Not to mention Gio is supposed to be running Squad five, and wants to be Captain. You would think he would put in the effort to train his own Squad instead of getting other Squads to train them. Take a look at Shiro and Hikari, Shiro took his Squad on missions and worked them. Hikari took his Squad on missions, sparred with them so they can better be strategic and use teamwork. Do something worth noting.