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Zane620 said
You suggesting Hype get sarcastically praised XD?

Keina thinks Hype is cool e3e

Zane620 said
Witht that logic everyone would be seated XD

Pretty much xD

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Zane620 said
Hype: Ah we meet again. The look in your eye was the same the day i first saw you.... -stares at wall-

Keina: Dude, that's so deep -giggles-

AbigailTenshi said
I'll reply tomorrow since it's 4:23am o3o Need sleep

Night o.o

The 100 - Currently Accepting Mischievous Teens

Huh, so two characters who people really don't like....My character was going to be a sociopath, maybe assumed to be a psychopath if people saw that other side of him. Essentially be the Murphy of the RP, but I think I do those characters enough as it is good thing I had a plan B character. Aiming to have a CS up by either tomorrow or the day after.

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Kenta sighed at her words, "Rio you can't expect two unseated level seeming Shinigami to keep up with a Lieutenant of Squad Two, it just doesn't work that way. Just ease up on them alright?" Kenta said as he looked behind him once more then to Rio once again, "Seriously, from the look on Nohime's face she lost control. Like she does when she see's men...As for Keina, I mean, obviously she was shocked by what you did. Hard training is good, but...Not too hard. And this is coming from the guy who tore himself up day and night, in and out." He sighed and rubbed the back of his head, "There's just...Something I have to go take of alright? I won't be gone too long, but it will be a while before I get back. Mostly because of the travel, that's al-...A-Are you alright Rio?" he asked as she reached a hand to her head.

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Zane620 said
Celebrate all you want Hype be alone with people looking them in the eyes XD

Hey! He has Tabo...Keina...The walls xD

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Mhm e3e

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AbigailTenshi said
o3o

I saw that then refreshed e3e

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Kronshi said
4: He's not a genius, he's just good with puzzles and chess and stuff like that, if you asked him what 4 times 18 was, he would be at a loss

But...He's good at computer programming, something that requires atleast that basic level of math if not more ಠ_ಠ

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Celebration ಠ_ಠ

The 100 - Currently Accepting Mischievous Teens

It's not my roleplay and I try to stray away from being a background gm, but if I can add my opinion....

This is an RP where the characters have been in space for most of their lives, using a term like 'average street rat' really doesn't fit. Not to mention there may be advanced technology, but I doubt there would be any blade remotely close to the one in your picture. I honestly doubt guards and the council would just let anyone carry around a sword, let alone a great sword.

Another thing, how could someone fifteen years of age take on twenty gang members and kill each one of them? I think there should be a mention of how that could happen. But killing in the act of self defense? Would that really get someone locked up? You claim it's because of his reputation but....If they knew about that then he would have been locked up beforehand, hence even the smallest crimes can be punishable by death. Those under eighteen get locked up and sent to earth...So why wasn't he locked up beforehand? Also a bio is there for a reason, could extend it by telling how exactly he became so good with blades and computers, that one is just a suggestion.

Minor things that I'm not going to bother writing eight paragraphs about: Why is his eyes read? Why the fuck is he fifteen yet looks like he's in his twenties? Why do you have that goddamn unicorn? ಠ_ಠ

Yeah, I'm not the type to criticism everything in someone else's RP...But I couldn't help myself this time around.