GreenGrenade

Maximum Comics: Dawn of Justice | REBRANDING - PLEASE STAY TUNED

I'd like to say that I'm still here, but I've got to admit, the Flash as I had him written's lost his allure. I can't see a way to move forward with him, and while I do have a few backup options, it all depends on GM/Co-GM approval.

I'd start with pitching Sonic, what with having a CS primed and ready, but having heard @Gowi's opinion, which I completely understand, I don't think he's a viable option.

My second option would be something I'd been discussing with Wraith prior to the game's decline, that being me taking over Spider-Man duty, playing both an established Peter (which would require either a time skip or a reboot) and a newbie Miles. So, playing the "Spider-Men", in a sort-of not really teacher-student relationship. I have a CS that'll be ready with a few tweaks here and there, but again, it's all up to GM approval (and a time skip in-game).
_{Although now that I think about it, a retcon could work, if that's an option at all...}

In regards to feedback/criticism, all I can say is that after participating in three games of this style, one of them being my own, I think the primary reason for loss of interest is the lack of engagement. By that, I mean that players are given so much freedom, and the overarching plot is pushed so far to the background, that eventually everyone's left thinking, "Now what?" So, long story short, I think a way to guarantee the game lasting longer is to put more emphasis on the main plot. Retain the sandbox element, but with a larger focus on the bigger scope of things. I hope that made sense.

And with that,
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Well, if it was a joke, then okay.

Sorry I kind of jumped on you.

@Blue Demon

All good, it was a misunderstanding, and all that. Let's not dwell on it.

Anyways, what @Tyler said is probably what I would have if I put more thought into it :P. So if that's the sort of feedback you were looking for, that's what I would offer up, too.

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Actually, that will have the opposite effect. Please don't. Please and thank you for not.

@Blue Demon

It... that... I edited it. I suck at jokes.

The Corrigan School for Advanced Learning and Development (A DC School RP)

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You are all making me frustrated. Seriously. Only Wraith was helpful. And his was a technical error.

*Walks off pouting*

@Blue Demon

Well, I'm so--rry that you aren't a terrible writer. Just, like, post it. We'll all flood it with likes and make you feel better. Right guys?

EDIT: What Tyler said.

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EDIT: If anyone still wants to give their two cents, I'm all ears. :)

@Blue Demon

It reads well, in my opinion. I reckon it's good to post.

EDIT: Forgot to add a smiley face. :)

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@GreenGrenade

I'm gonna have to respond to your post in like, over 10 hours, sorry!
^{Damn British GMT timezone!}

@Wade Wilson

Unacceptable. You don't need sleep. No one needs sleep. Who needs sleep? Not you.

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Okay, posted. I reckon with my next few I'm gonna experiment with third person. Not liking the way this post turned out (not that it was much to begin with).

Also, @Tyler, screw your problems. You and Freddie can have them back. I wanted to punch Mars in the face, goddammit.

Oh, and hey, @Vandy.

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ANDY

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@Wade Wilson

I have to say, the teams were pretty damn good. And that’s not just because S’tann was on the other team (although, mostly… yeah). They were evenly spread, taking into account every person’s strengths and weaknesses. It should’ve made for an interested A.R.C. sesh. But yeah, I was mostly looking forward to seeing what S’tann would do, what with me and Nora being pyros. Oh, and punching that Balboa guy in the face. I really wanted to punch that Balboa guy in the face.

The simulation had begun, and Aiden, Aiden Roth, took charge pretty quick. I have to say, his plan wasn’t all that bad. I gave him a nod to let him know I was on board before Rick piped up, saying something about the cold negating his speed, saying that he needed heat. He asked Freddie to make it warm, but I already knew what his answer would be. The cold was our biggest advantage, and Freddie knew it.

But that didn’t stop me from thinking, “Please don’t, please don’t, please don’t, please don’t, please don’t.”

…

He did.

"The cold is our biggest advantage, Rick. We need to hold them off as long as we can. I don't think turning the field into a beach resort is going to keep them at bay. Andy, is there anything you can do to keep Rick warm whilst leaving our defences in tact?"

Fuckin’ logic. I hate it.

Rick, seeing the sense in that, turned to me. "So, you sure you can do this without roasting my ass off?"

“Nup,” I said, because honestly, I wasn’t. “But you know what they say. First time’s a good time, and all that.”^* I paused, thinking on it a bit. “I could try to raise my body temp, get the radiating heat to about thirty degrees Celsius. That should be warm enough for you to run, right? Only thing I’m not sure of is the radius. You’ll need to try and stay as close as you can.”

^{*I don’t think anyone says that.}

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Welp, shit. Timezones suck. I go to sleep for eight hours, and the RP explodes.
_{Stupid Australian Eastern Standard time...}

The Corrigan School for Advanced Learning and Development (A DC School RP)

Personally, I'm just a little disappointed with what appears to be Doomsday's design, but that's just a nitpick. Other than that, I think it's a pretty good trailer. I don't think it shows too much, because all it did was confirm what a lot of people already thought was going to happen: that Batman and Superman put aside their differences to fight Doomsday, created by Luthor, alongside Wonder Woman. We still don't know heaps of details, including the big one: the ending.

So yeah. Good trailer.