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Sure, which order you two reply in doesn't change anything for me. :) Unless you want to do a mini collab? Which would mean I'd just have to wait on Natty and you'd be free to continue on without waiting for me?


The first part of my post was going to have Kieran answer Mailsi so if you want to collab on that for however long they got to talk before they were interrupted by Coach Stewart we can.
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@VandyGezz.
What are you? A walking dictionary?

...
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Wait, that's what your character should be!

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The first part of my post was going to have Kieran answer Mailsi so if you want to collab on that for however long they got to talk before they were interrupted by Coach Stewart we can.


Sure can do.
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Okay, posted. I reckon with my next few I'm gonna experiment with third person. Not liking the way this post turned out (not that it was much to begin with).

Also, @Tyler, screw your problems. You and Freddie can have them back. I wanted to punch Mars in the face, goddammit.

Oh, and hey, @Vandy.
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@FacePunchWhichever you think is best. I can work with either. But I can't post Mailsi until both Natty and King Kindred do. Just so you know.


Honestly, feel bad for hindering you guys so go ahead and post! I'll just have Casey kinda leave the conversation when Kieran arrives due to Casey being an overly jealous shit and just not interact with you guy!
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Honestly, feel bad for hindering you guys so go ahead and post! I'll just have Casey kinda leave the conversation when Kieran arrives due to Casey being an overly jealous shit and just not interact with you guy!


Like FP said, there's no rush. It's not a problem.

Plus, I'm stuck on Kyle right now and he's just not working with me. The little turd. Uggg.
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Like FP said, there's no rush. It's not a problem.

Plus, I'm stuck on Kyle right now and he's just not working with me. The little turd. Uggg.


Fair enough! Well I have a free period tomorrow at school first thing so I'll try and hammer something out then!
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@Blue Demon This what you had in mind?


| NAME: |
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-a·bil·i·ty
əˈbilədē/
noun
plural noun: abilities
1.
possession of the means or skill to do something.
"the manager had lost his ability to motivate the players"
synonyms: capacity, capability, potential, potentiality, power, faculty, aptness, facility;

skill
skil/Submit
noun
the ability to do something well; expertise.
"difficult work, taking great skill"
synonyms: expertise, skillfulness, expertness, adeptness, adroitness, deftness, dexterity, ability, prowess, mastery, competence, capability, aptitude, artistry, virtuosity, talent
"his skill as a politician"

e·quip·ment
əˈkwipmənt/
noun
the necessary items for a particular purpose.
"office equipment"
synonyms: apparatus, paraphernalia, articles, appliances, impedimenta;


| LIMITATIONS AND WEAKNESSES: |
-lim·i·ta·tion
ˌliməˈtāSH(ə)n/
noun
plural noun: limitations
1.
a limiting rule or circumstance; a restriction.
"severe limitations on water use"
synonyms: restriction, curb, restraint, control, check

weak·ness
ˈwēknəs/
noun
the state or condition of lacking strength.
"the country's weakness in international dealings"
synonyms: frailty, feebleness, enfeeblement, fragility, delicacy; More
a quality or feature regarded as a disadvantage or fault.
plural noun: weaknesses
"you must recognize your product's strengths and weaknesses"
synonyms: fault, flaw, defect, deficiency, weak point, failing, shortcoming, weak link, imperfection, Achilles heel, foible


| SAMPLE POST: |
-Coming in the 2016 edition.


| NOTES: |
-This might just be the worst joke I have ever come up with. Oh well.


EDIT*
Hey Grenade.
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@Blue Demon This what you had in mind?


Yes. Yes. 1000 times yes.
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I should be home tonight with my laptop. Hopefully I can spit out a post before I head to bed.
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Okay, posted. I reckon with my next few I'm gonna experiment with third person. Not liking the way this post turned out (not that it was much to begin with).

Also, @Tyler, screw your problems. You and Freddie can have them back. I wanted to punch Mars in the face, goddammit.

Oh, and hey, @Vandy.


No, no. I insist.

@Blue Demon This what you had in mind?


| NAME: |
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| ABILITIES/SKILLS/EQUIPMENT: |
-a·bil·i·ty
əˈbilədē/
noun
plural noun: abilities
1.
possession of the means or skill to do something.
"the manager had lost his ability to motivate the players"
synonyms: capacity, capability, potential, potentiality, power, faculty, aptness, facility;

skill
skil/Submit
noun
the ability to do something well; expertise.
"difficult work, taking great skill"
synonyms: expertise, skillfulness, expertness, adeptness, adroitness, deftness, dexterity, ability, prowess, mastery, competence, capability, aptitude, artistry, virtuosity, talent
"his skill as a politician"

e·quip·ment
əˈkwipmənt/
noun
the necessary items for a particular purpose.
"office equipment"
synonyms: apparatus, paraphernalia, articles, appliances, impedimenta;


| LIMITATIONS AND WEAKNESSES: |
-lim·i·ta·tion
ˌliməˈtāSH(ə)n/
noun
plural noun: limitations
1.
a limiting rule or circumstance; a restriction.
"severe limitations on water use"
synonyms: restriction, curb, restraint, control, check

weak·ness
ˈwēknəs/
noun
the state or condition of lacking strength.
"the country's weakness in international dealings"
synonyms: frailty, feebleness, enfeeblement, fragility, delicacy; More
a quality or feature regarded as a disadvantage or fault.
plural noun: weaknesses
"you must recognize your product's strengths and weaknesses"
synonyms: fault, flaw, defect, deficiency, weak point, failing, shortcoming, weak link, imperfection, Achilles heel, foible


| SAMPLE POST: |
-Coming in the 2016 edition.


| NOTES: |
-This might just be the worst joke I have ever come up with. Oh well.


EDIT*
Hey Grenade.


This is just the right amount of edgy for Wraith's RP.
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@GreenGrenade

I'm gonna have to respond to your post in like, over 10 hours, sorry!
Damn British GMT timezone!
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I can just imagine some poor kid picking that thing up in the library and getting cussed out by a sentient talking book.
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@Blue Demon This what you had in mind?


| NAME: |
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| ALIAS: |
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| AGE: |
-187 years


| ABILITIES/SKILLS/EQUIPMENT: |
-a·bil·i·ty
əˈbilədē/
noun
plural noun: abilities
1.
possession of the means or skill to do something.
"the manager had lost his ability to motivate the players"
synonyms: capacity, capability, potential, potentiality, power, faculty, aptness, facility;

skill
skil/Submit
noun
the ability to do something well; expertise.
"difficult work, taking great skill"
synonyms: expertise, skillfulness, expertness, adeptness, adroitness, deftness, dexterity, ability, prowess, mastery, competence, capability, aptitude, artistry, virtuosity, talent
"his skill as a politician"

e·quip·ment
əˈkwipmənt/
noun
the necessary items for a particular purpose.
"office equipment"
synonyms: apparatus, paraphernalia, articles, appliances, impedimenta;


| LIMITATIONS AND WEAKNESSES: |
-lim·i·ta·tion
ˌliməˈtāSH(ə)n/
noun
plural noun: limitations
1.
a limiting rule or circumstance; a restriction.
"severe limitations on water use"
synonyms: restriction, curb, restraint, control, check

weak·ness
ˈwēknəs/
noun
the state or condition of lacking strength.
"the country's weakness in international dealings"
synonyms: frailty, feebleness, enfeeblement, fragility, delicacy; More
a quality or feature regarded as a disadvantage or fault.
plural noun: weaknesses
"you must recognize your product's strengths and weaknesses"
synonyms: fault, flaw, defect, deficiency, weak point, failing, shortcoming, weak link, imperfection, Achilles heel, foible


| SAMPLE POST: |
-Coming in the 2016 edition.


| NOTES: |
-This might just be the worst joke I have ever come up with. Oh well.


EDIT*
Hey Grenade.


Yes
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@GreenGrenade

I'm gonna have to respond to your post in like, over 10 hours, sorry!
Damn British GMT timezone!


Unacceptable. You don't need sleep. No one needs sleep. Who needs sleep? Not you.
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Well, I'm out of ideas how to fix what I wrote.

Anyone want to offer some constructive criticism?
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@Blue Demon Well. I feel the most obvious piece of criticism being that you didn't post anything.

Other than that, its looking great.
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@Blue Demon Well. I feel the most obvious piece of criticism being that you didn't post anything.

Other than that, its looking great.


I didn't want to post it if no one was going to comment. :D

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@Blue Demon A little short, but pretty good otherwise. I'd post it, personally. Especially if you can't think of anything else to say/do/whatever.
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You didn't think it was disjointed, choppy and had poor flow?

Because it reads like a massacre.

P.S. I'm not trolling for complements. I really want good constructive feedback.
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I didn't want to post it if no one was going to comment. :D



Only thing I should note is that the Suicide Squad were dropped inside the research facility whereas the All-Stars are dropped a few kilometers out.
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