[OOC] The Corrigan School for Advanced Learning and Development (A DC School RP)

[King Kindred]

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Sure, which order you two reply in doesn't change anything for me. :) Unless you want to do a mini collab? Which would mean I'd just have to wait on Natty and you'd be free to continue on without waiting for me?

@Blue Demon

The first part of my post was going to have Kieran answer Mailsi so if you want to collab on that for however long they got to talk before they were interrupted by Coach Stewart we can.

[Blue Demon]

@VandyGezz.
What are you? A walking dictionary?

...
..
.

Wait, that's what your character should be!

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The first part of my post was going to have Kieran answer Mailsi so if you want to collab on that for however long they got to talk before they were interrupted by Coach Stewart we can.

@King Kindred

Sure can do.

[GreenGrenade]

Okay, posted. I reckon with my next few I'm gonna experiment with third person. Not liking the way this post turned out (not that it was much to begin with).

Also, @Tyler, screw your problems. You and Freddie can have them back. I wanted to punch Mars in the face, goddammit.

Oh, and hey, @Vandy.

[Natty]

@FacePunchWhichever you think is best. I can work with either. But I can't post Mailsi until both Natty and King Kindred do. Just so you know.

@Blue Demon

Honestly, feel bad for hindering you guys so go ahead and post! I'll just have Casey kinda leave the conversation when Kieran arrives due to Casey being an overly jealous shit and just not interact with you guy!

[Blue Demon]

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Honestly, feel bad for hindering you guys so go ahead and post! I'll just have Casey kinda leave the conversation when Kieran arrives due to Casey being an overly jealous shit and just not interact with you guy!

@Natty

Like FP said, there's no rush. It's not a problem.

Plus, I'm stuck on Kyle right now and he's just not working with me. The little turd. Uggg.

[Natty]

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Like FP said, there's no rush. It's not a problem.

Plus, I'm stuck on Kyle right now and he's just not working with me. The little turd. Uggg.

@Blue Demon

Fair enough! Well I have a free period tomorrow at school first thing so I'll try and hammer something out then!

[Vandy]

@Blue Demon This what you had in mind?

| NAME: |

-Web Ster's

| ALIAS: |

-Dictionary

| AGE: |

-187 years

| ABILITIES/SKILLS/EQUIPMENT: |

-a·bil·i·ty
əˈbilədē/
noun
plural noun: abilities
1.
possession of the means or skill to do something.
"the manager had lost his ability to motivate the players"
synonyms: capacity, capability, potential, potentiality, power, faculty, aptness, facility;

skill
skil/Submit
noun
the ability to do something well; expertise.
"difficult work, taking great skill"
synonyms: expertise, skillfulness, expertness, adeptness, adroitness, deftness, dexterity, ability, prowess, mastery, competence, capability, aptitude, artistry, virtuosity, talent
"his skill as a politician"

e·quip·ment
əˈkwipmənt/
noun
the necessary items for a particular purpose.
"office equipment"
synonyms: apparatus, paraphernalia, articles, appliances, impedimenta;

| LIMITATIONS AND WEAKNESSES: |

-lim·i·ta·tion
ˌliməˈtāSH(ə)n/
noun
plural noun: limitations
1.
a limiting rule or circumstance; a restriction.
"severe limitations on water use"
synonyms: restriction, curb, restraint, control, check

weak·ness
ˈwēknəs/
noun
the state or condition of lacking strength.
"the country's weakness in international dealings"
synonyms: frailty, feebleness, enfeeblement, fragility, delicacy; More
a quality or feature regarded as a disadvantage or fault.
plural noun: weaknesses
"you must recognize your product's strengths and weaknesses"
synonyms: fault, flaw, defect, deficiency, weak point, failing, shortcoming, weak link, imperfection, Achilles heel, foible

| SAMPLE POST: |

-Coming in the 2016 edition.

| NOTES: |

-This might just be the worst joke I have ever come up with. Oh well.

EDIT*
Hey Grenade.

[Blue Demon]

@Blue Demon This what you had in mind?

@Vandy

Yes. Yes. 1000 times yes.

[Heathen]

I should be home tonight with my laptop. Hopefully I can spit out a post before I head to bed.

[Tyler]

Okay, posted. I reckon with my next few I'm gonna experiment with third person. Not liking the way this post turned out (not that it was much to begin with).

Also, @Tyler, screw your problems. You and Freddie can have them back. I wanted to punch Mars in the face, goddammit.

Oh, and hey, @Vandy.

@GreenGrenade

No, no. I insist.

@Blue Demon This what you had in mind?

| NAME: |

-Web Ster's

| ALIAS: |

-Dictionary

| AGE: |

-187 years

| ABILITIES/SKILLS/EQUIPMENT: |

-a·bil·i·ty
əˈbilədē/
noun
plural noun: abilities
1.
possession of the means or skill to do something.
"the manager had lost his ability to motivate the players"
synonyms: capacity, capability, potential, potentiality, power, faculty, aptness, facility;

skill
skil/Submit
noun
the ability to do something well; expertise.
"difficult work, taking great skill"
synonyms: expertise, skillfulness, expertness, adeptness, adroitness, deftness, dexterity, ability, prowess, mastery, competence, capability, aptitude, artistry, virtuosity, talent
"his skill as a politician"

e·quip·ment
əˈkwipmənt/
noun
the necessary items for a particular purpose.
"office equipment"
synonyms: apparatus, paraphernalia, articles, appliances, impedimenta;

| LIMITATIONS AND WEAKNESSES: |

-lim·i·ta·tion
ˌliməˈtāSH(ə)n/
noun
plural noun: limitations
1.
a limiting rule or circumstance; a restriction.
"severe limitations on water use"
synonyms: restriction, curb, restraint, control, check

weak·ness
ˈwēknəs/
noun
the state or condition of lacking strength.
"the country's weakness in international dealings"
synonyms: frailty, feebleness, enfeeblement, fragility, delicacy; More
a quality or feature regarded as a disadvantage or fault.
plural noun: weaknesses
"you must recognize your product's strengths and weaknesses"
synonyms: fault, flaw, defect, deficiency, weak point, failing, shortcoming, weak link, imperfection, Achilles heel, foible

| SAMPLE POST: |

-Coming in the 2016 edition.

| NOTES: |

-This might just be the worst joke I have ever come up with. Oh well.

EDIT*
Hey Grenade.

@Vandy

This is just the right amount of edgy for Wraith's RP.

[Wade Wilson]

@GreenGrenade

I'm gonna have to respond to your post in like, over 10 hours, sorry!
^{Damn British GMT timezone!}

[Vandy]

I can just imagine some poor kid picking that thing up in the library and getting cussed out by a sentient talking book.

[Mixtape Ghost N]

@Blue Demon This what you had in mind?

| NAME: |

-Web Ster's

| ALIAS: |

-Dictionary

| AGE: |

-187 years

| ABILITIES/SKILLS/EQUIPMENT: |

-a·bil·i·ty
əˈbilədē/
noun
plural noun: abilities
1.
possession of the means or skill to do something.
"the manager had lost his ability to motivate the players"
synonyms: capacity, capability, potential, potentiality, power, faculty, aptness, facility;

skill
skil/Submit
noun
the ability to do something well; expertise.
"difficult work, taking great skill"
synonyms: expertise, skillfulness, expertness, adeptness, adroitness, deftness, dexterity, ability, prowess, mastery, competence, capability, aptitude, artistry, virtuosity, talent
"his skill as a politician"

e·quip·ment
əˈkwipmənt/
noun
the necessary items for a particular purpose.
"office equipment"
synonyms: apparatus, paraphernalia, articles, appliances, impedimenta;

| LIMITATIONS AND WEAKNESSES: |

-lim·i·ta·tion
ˌliməˈtāSH(ə)n/
noun
plural noun: limitations
1.
a limiting rule or circumstance; a restriction.
"severe limitations on water use"
synonyms: restriction, curb, restraint, control, check

weak·ness
ˈwēknəs/
noun
the state or condition of lacking strength.
"the country's weakness in international dealings"
synonyms: frailty, feebleness, enfeeblement, fragility, delicacy; More
a quality or feature regarded as a disadvantage or fault.
plural noun: weaknesses
"you must recognize your product's strengths and weaknesses"
synonyms: fault, flaw, defect, deficiency, weak point, failing, shortcoming, weak link, imperfection, Achilles heel, foible

| SAMPLE POST: |

-Coming in the 2016 edition.

| NOTES: |

-This might just be the worst joke I have ever come up with. Oh well.

EDIT*
Hey Grenade.

@Vandy

Yes

[GreenGrenade]

@GreenGrenade

I'm gonna have to respond to your post in like, over 10 hours, sorry!
^{Damn British GMT timezone!}

@Wade Wilson

Unacceptable. You don't need sleep. No one needs sleep. Who needs sleep? Not you.

[Blue Demon]

Well, I'm out of ideas how to fix what I wrote.

Anyone want to offer some constructive criticism?

[FacePunch]

@Blue Demon Well. I feel the most obvious piece of criticism being that you didn't post anything.

Other than that, its looking great.

[Blue Demon]

@Blue Demon Well. I feel the most obvious piece of criticism being that you didn't post anything.

Other than that, its looking great.

@FacePunch

I didn't want to post it if no one was going to comment. :D

POS

Kyle Lancaster

Thanks to Julian, Kyle arrived on time, clean and feeling slightly better. He changed into the approved uniforms and waited. He stuck close to his friend's side and tried not to physically flinch when he spotted Blondie again. And no, he didn't but Julian between them. If he was already there, it doesn't count. As John Stewart talked, and pointedly mentioned Kyle, he couldn't help the uncomfortable twist in his stomach.

Kyle was going to die. He held his breath as teams were read out and nearly cried out Yes in joy to find he wasn't on S'tann's team and was with Julian. Since this was his first time he followed the others as they went to the waiting room. It was almost exactly as some of the older kids described it. Kyle shifted on his feet nervously.

When a guy started speaking, Kyle assumed it was Aiden. Since it wasn't Kieran. He clearly listed out their objective and goals. He frowned a little as Julian got the task of deleting some drives and he was assigned to hostage duty. Kyle wanted to say something, maybe ask to switch places when the timer ran out and the door opened. In all that time Aiden didn't stop talking.

Any objections team?

Maybe Kyle would have voiced his if everyone didn't spill out into the open room and into the cold. Despite the fact they were in-freaking-doors. Even the stones themselves seem to radiate the chill that permeated the facility. A faint thought ran across his mind making him briefly wonder if they could freeze to death. But it was quickly pushed away as he watched everyone somehow know where to go.

Everyone had started to split off into different directions and vanish. Kyle sighed, his breath puffing out in front of his face. He was so going to die. He closed his eyes, took a deep breath then went to go to where the hostages were.

[FacePunch]

@Blue Demon A little short, but pretty good otherwise. I'd post it, personally. Especially if you can't think of anything else to say/do/whatever.

[Blue Demon]

You didn't think it was disjointed, choppy and had poor flow?

Because it reads like a massacre.

_{P.S. I'm not trolling for complements. I really want good constructive feedback.}

[Lord Wraith]

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I didn't want to post it if no one was going to comment. :D

POS

Kyle Lancaster

Thanks to Julian, Kyle arrived on time, clean and feeling slightly better. He changed into the approved uniforms and waited. He stuck close to his friend's side and tried not to physically flinch when he spotted Blondie again. And no, he didn't but Julian between them. If he was already there, it doesn't count. As John Stewart talked, and pointedly mentioned Kyle, he couldn't help the uncomfortable twist in his stomach.

Kyle was going to die. He held his breath as teams were read out and nearly cried out Yes in joy to find he wasn't on S'tann's team and was with Julian. Since this was his first time he followed the others as they went to the waiting room. It was almost exactly as some of the older kids described it. Kyle shifted on his feet nervously.

When a guy started speaking, Kyle assumed it was Aiden. Since it wasn't Kieran. He clearly listed out their objective and goals. He frowned a little as Julian got the task of deleting some drives and he was assigned to hostage duty. Kyle wanted to say something, maybe ask to switch places when the timer ran out and the door opened. In all that time Aiden didn't stop talking.

Any objections team?

Maybe Kyle would have voiced his if everyone didn't spill out into the open room and into the cold. Kyle watched everyone split off into different directions and sighed, his breath puffing out in front of his face. He was so going to die. He closed his eyes, took a deep breath then went to go to where the hostages were.

@Blue Demon

Only thing I should note is that the Suicide Squad were dropped inside the research facility whereas the All-Stars are dropped a few kilometers out.