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@The Kid Lantern Is there any more room left?


I only joined recently and he never said anything about closing applications so I think you should be fine to apply!
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Where she was able to break the poison tails influence on the other toy dolls. when black widow tried to cure hawkeye of loki's cepter.


Uh, I don't really see how that's a skill?
These are opinions, not set in stone. some of you I PMed.
@Crimson CloverGood, Add 'weakness' and I would suggest 'psychological de-programing' to her skillset given her oigin.
@BlackPanther Good, No utter immortality, yet. And he can be killed with his own carbocanium sword. seperate abilities into 'skills' and 'powers' please. Are you going regular witty crazy or 4th wall knowing you are a forum creation and using ooc in the IC crazy?]
@Roosan Good with one limitation, a sword that 'no armor can stop or slow' might have been fine 2500 years ago, but I don't want a sword that slices through anything. since 2500 years ago was still the iron age, I'm okay with adding "no mere iron armor can stop or slow" meaning it can cut through any pure iron and deal loads of damage to steel, but not just one-shot anyone. Also 'skills and powers' along with 'weakness'
@Archmage MC I'd like to see a 'skills' and 'powers' section added with 'weakness' and we can see about origins.
@ClantyGood, no complaints, please add weakness
@PhoenixForceGood, no problems
@knighthawkNeed to add weakness
@TimeMasterXMostly good, sent a PM, add a 'skills' section.


Sorry, but what is psychological de-programming? Adding weakness now!
Zhang's eyes grew weary as she watched bag after bag circle around the conveyor belt like one of those hypnotic circles that seemed to go on forever. She looked at the small, black watch that rested on her dainty wrist. It was edging close and closer to 2am, China time that is. She looked up at a large clock hanging on the wall opposite and adjusted her watch accordingly, she was going to have a hell of a lot of jetlag, that was for sure.

Finally her suitcase slowly made its way around to her. She picked it off the conveyor belt and got on her way, explaining to the security guards that the reason she was carrying knives in her bag was because 'Batman said it was fine' was hard enough back in China, where she wasn't jet lagged, it was going to be a hell of a lot harder with the feeling of tiredness that was becoming more and more troublesome as the day went on.




It had been a few days since she'd arrived in America and, Zhang was anxious to meet her new team. She'd been informed about their recent fight, and knew about their losses. She was more anxious that she'd say something inappropriate than she was about meeting them in all honesty. She'd dressed appropriately enough for the occasion, she actually put on a baggy pair of jogging bottoms and a zip-up hoodie, rather than her usual attire of board shorts and a t-shirt.

She approached the hotel room, hesitating before she knocked on the door. She breathed in and breathed out rather heavily as a futile attempt to stop the feeling of nervousness overcoming her. Nevertheless, she put on a smile and knocked on the door. No answer. This was problematic. Being herself, Zhang simply turned the handle and took a step in, seeing the rather messy room along with a rather tall boy attempting to clean the room.
"Uh, I'm looking for the Titans?" She asked.
Interested as a witch
Thanks a lot!
Yeah, but what I mean is, writing a character into a tense situation like this which she has no emotional connection to would just make her an awkward part of the situation, coupled with her personality I think it's far from a good introduction.
Yeah, but I mean like literally I don't really know what to write haha, I mean if she just stumbles into the carnage and stuff it would be a bit clumsy
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Please for all that is holy post as soon as possible ;)


Haha, I'll try! So from what I can see a former titan has just turned against the Titans and has now been defeated in a fight? I'm not really sure where to come in to be honest

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