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Dan took the blank paper and instead of writing a detailed description, he just listed the more important qualities.

-Teleportation quirk: Blink
-preferably with several pockets/compartments
-rounded visor on helmet.
-relatively tight fitting

Beside his small list, he drew an admittedly crude chibi drawing of the costume he had in mind as well as his clothing sizes. He wasn't much of an artist, but he didn't want to be so vague that he ended up with some poorly put together hand-me-down of a costume. If it was too baggy it would interfere with his quirk, too tight and it would be uncomfortable.

He walked up to the desk and handed the drawing to Jerome. Satisfied with his work, he returned to his desk and tried to steal a peek at a few of the others' costumes. It was clear that at least a few of the other students had much more artistic talent than he did.
@HeroicSociopath Look, the co-gms and I really don't want this to come off the wrong way but...we feel like your character wouldn't be a good fit for this RP. It's nothing personal, just that between his powers, his personality, and the way he found himself on the ship...It just doesn't work.
@HeroicSociopath

Just a bit of forewarning, a guitar is almost definitely going to get your character killed. Or, how about this? Him playing an instrument while in prison would have probably annoyed the guards at some point. In that case, they would have likely confiscated it and thrown it in with any other contraband. Guns and other weapons are mostly allowed because of the anti-aggression field, that wouldn't keep him from playing a guitar. I guess what I'm saying is you can have a guitar, just not at the start...And that you'll likely be killed off if you're going around playing it in the jungle. (Assuming one of the less stable characters don't break it over your head first)

I'm gonna have to give a hard no to the gun-guitar though.
@Irredeemable@Raylah Him actively hunting someone on board a ship that's never going to be returning to civilized space seems kinda pointless. I mean, we're outside of even pirate inhabited space.

(just my own opinion, not saying you guys can't do what you want with that)
@The Angry Goat So, other than your unique ability we all agree that you're all set. As far as that goes though, it's going to need a bit of explaining. Like, does he have the ability to outright just manipulate metal? Is there a mass limit? How efficient is it as far as burning through mana goes? Would a mostly metal enemy be totally helpless against him? These are all questions we have to answer for balance purposes.

@Keksalot So as much as I love the bio and all of that stuff we're gonna have to say no on this one. Partly because the Ashra is relatively similar in regenerative ability (though without the added strength gain each time), and partly because the sheer overpowered potential. While I don't think this character would work in this RP, I definitely think his story might. I should also say the doomsday inspiration is pretty clear.
@The Angry Goat@Keksalot6 We are indeed still accepting.

@Rune_Alchemist Well, you just got the official thumbs up. Go on and move her to the character tab.
@HeroicSociopath I can 100% deal with the glowsticks, they have some utility. The harmonica? I guess, yeah. It wouldn't be a burden to carry and probably wouldn't be too obnoxious. If you can work on all of the other stuff, we'll gladly take another look at it.
@HeroicSociopath

Alright, so I'm just going to be upfront about this, but your character won't really work as he is now. You took a few liberties where the attunement were concerned (Life attuned magic requires physical contact, it's also not going to do much as far as some of the larger creatures go). and your character isn't very fleshed out as things are. I don't mind your character being a pacifist, that's okay, but I'd much rather they had a reason to be thrown on the ship other than mistaken identity. You're going to need an actual bio that's more than two sentences.

Then there's your "equipment." I'm going to have to say no to the bong, guitar, the drugs, and the gameboy clone. On a positive note, the alchemist ability would be plausible and is easily the best part of the sheet as things are. Other than that though, I have to mention that this is a med-casual RP and as such needs a fair bit more detail.
Still bumping this, not sure how many more to take.
Still bumping this, not sure how many more to take.
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