Hey guys, don't catch the flu. It sucks! - PSA from your friendly neighborhood Targaryen
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7 yrs ago
Our father's were evil men, all of us. They left the world worse than they found it. We're not going to do that, we're going to leave the world better than we found it - Daenerys Targaryen
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8 yrs ago
Time and space - time to be alone, space to move about - these may well become the great scarcities of tomorrow. - Edwin Way Teale
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8 yrs ago
Ever make a mistake so bad, that it hurts every time you just think of it? Ever wish you could go back in time and fix everything so you didn't hurt the one who matters most? Yeah, me too.
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8 yrs ago
Hail Hydra!
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Do not go gentle into that good night By: Dylan Thomas
Do not go gentle into that good night, Old age should burn and rave at close of day; Rage, rage against the dying of the light.
Though wise men at their end know dark is right, Because their words had forked no lightning they Do not go gentle into that good night.
Good men, the last wave by, crying how bright Their frail deeds might have danced in a green bay, Rage, rage against the dying of the light.
Wild men who caught and sang the sun in flight, And learn, too late, they grieved it on its way, Do not go gentle into that good night.
Grave men, near death, who see with blinding sight Blind eyes could blaze like meteors and be gay, Rage, rage against the dying of the light.
And you, my father, there on the sad height, Curse, bless, me now with your fierce tears, I pray. Do not go gentle into that good night. Rage, rage against the dying of the light.
@Dirty Dan It looks mostly good, just got two things.
1. As I mentioned before, No Body Flicker in combat. You can have it for out of combat, no problem.
2. I am going to have to say no on the weights. Because body weights really don't improve speed like in the anime. Furthermore, they're a drain on the user and something like that wouldn't be used in the field. I'm sorry, but I must ask you to remove those.
1. As I stated in the Interest Check, a character from Kiri would be either killed, or arrested on sight. So no, you can't be from Kiri. Be born in Konohagakure, please.
2. Summoning arrows using Chakra is very similar to the Chakra arrows technique, which is a B ranked. Meaning you will have to wait until chuunin to be able to do it.
3. Body Flicker cannot be used in combat cause it is OP. This applies to everybody (I believe Dirty Dan had it in his).
4. I'd like to know why an untrained genin was able to defeat bears in a flash, then wound up passed out. Exactly why. It sounds a little OP.
5. Please take the CS more seriously. Sorry, but 'doesn't undertsand things like porn' in a universe without computers or the internet makes no sense. 'Hakuna Matata' is a saying from a disney movie which doesn't exist. 'Swing schwing swang' is not an acceptable Skill/Abiltiy. 'Weird to Infinity and Beyond!' is a personality trait, not a Skill or an Ability. If you want a reference, please look to Ryu's CS. Please take this more seriously. Else you come off as a joke character simultaneously trying to stress how much of a badass you are. Which just reads 'I wanna be special snowflake like Sasuke.'
So I am going to ask you to please fix those, and take it more seriously. As of right now, I will have to deny your character sheet until these are fixed.
[center][b][u]Do not go gentle into that good night
By: Dylan Thomas[/u][/b]
Do not go gentle into that good night,
Old age should burn and rave at close of day;
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.
Though wise men at their end know dark is right,
Because their words had forked no lightning they
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Good men, the last wave by, crying how bright
Their frail deeds might have danced in a green bay,
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.
Wild men who caught and sang the sun in flight,
And learn, too late, they grieved it on its way,
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Grave men, near death, who see with blinding sight
Blind eyes could blaze like meteors and be gay,
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.
And you, my father, there on the sad height,
Curse, bless, me now with your fierce tears, I pray.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.[/center]
<div style="white-space:pre-wrap;"><div class="bb-center"><span class="bb-b"><span class="bb-u">Do not go gentle into that good night<br>By: Dylan Thomas</span></span><br><br>Do not go gentle into that good night,<br>Old age should burn and rave at close of day;<br>Rage, rage against the dying of the light.<br><br>Though wise men at their end know dark is right,<br>Because their words had forked no lightning they<br>Do not go gentle into that good night.<br><br>Good men, the last wave by, crying how bright<br>Their frail deeds might have danced in a green bay,<br>Rage, rage against the dying of the light.<br><br>Wild men who caught and sang the sun in flight,<br>And learn, too late, they grieved it on its way,<br>Do not go gentle into that good night.<br><br>Grave men, near death, who see with blinding sight<br>Blind eyes could blaze like meteors and be gay,<br>Rage, rage against the dying of the light.<br><br>And you, my father, there on the sad height,<br>Curse, bless, me now with your fierce tears, I pray.<br>Do not go gentle into that good night.<br>Rage, rage against the dying of the light.</div></div>
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