I really like the commenting idea. I feel like the GM’s comments for each player boosts morale.
Prisk said
The Appleberry sub-plot is phenomenal. Not only is it terrific in the sense that you play off of the information that I’ve written, but also because what you are writing makes perfect sense with what I’ve planned for the story, even if you don’t know what that is! I suppose you could somewhat guess how things will play out as the story is not complex, but you’re doing a great job here nonetheless. Kim’s hallucinations work equally well with what I’ve got planned for the story, and I’m confident that all of it will make perfect sense as the story begins to unravel (which isn’t far away now!). Lastly, the model you found and are using for Kim was excellent—it’s easy for me to picture him in my head when I read your posts.
Aww…shucks
Thank you for the complement! I was actually worried about that post, but I’m glad it worked out alright. I didn’t realize it fit so well to the story!
While I’m at it, more question time!
One, does the Non-player character sheet require a picture? Or can I just describe how they look? As with Kimberly, I tend to have difficulty finding an image that fits how I imagine how the characters would look like.
Two, did you have an official name for the regions’ alliance? As of now, I refer to it as the United Regions.