Could you elaborate in PMs about your character's twin brother? Whether they attend the school or not?
Please use the template for custom cards. It's there for ease of use. No need to be fancy.
"You can only use this effect of "Advisor Archfiend" once per turn." at the end of Advisor Archfiend's effect is redundant, since the cost is already Once per turn.
Atheling looks okay.
Cosmocrat's effect should be: During your Standby Phase, you can target 1 face-up card on your opponent's side of the field, and pay 1000 Life Points: Destroy the target card. You can discard 1 "Archfiend" Monster from your hand, and if you do: This card's effects cannot be negated. You can only activate each effect of "Archfiend Cosmocrat" once per turn.
Might actually be on the stronger end of the spectrum depending on how you build your deck. I like decks that are better themed and would certainly appreciate a deck built around the BLS ritual monsters along with Envoy of the Beginning.
I'm also updating the OP for character creation rules; namely, I'm adding a rule that newcomers have to use the card creation template.
I've also added a Link monster custom card under the "Custom Cards" tab. It's right at the bottom if anyone wants to see it.
You might want to cover for @manapool1 if he doesn't show up by Monday. This RP's slowed down a bit and I really don't want it to go the path of others.
I'll work out a response for your character at the same time I respond to the above two. Menhir will just have to wait- maybe intrude on the duel going on in the mall to make it progress just a little faster.
And to anybody else. If there is an effect that inflicts damage to an opponent while there are multiple opponents, you can pick the opponent.
If you meant the standby thing, it means your standby and not your partners'. This applies right now and to any duel that is not a proper tag duel (proper meaning where it's 2 on 2 and both players share a field/graveyard).
A monster special summoned from the extra deck goes to the extra monster zone. This includes pendulum monsters. I wasn't aware of this when I first wrote the rule in, but some new info came out that cleared it up.
What this means though is that you just have to treat your ace monster as more of an ace since most of the time you'll only have him. I'd suggest thinking of custom cards that support Lock Rage Dragon specifically while it's in the Extra Monster Zone.
Another thing that's bothering me that I didn't notice in your character sheet when I first looked at it... Fierce Anger Dragon is listed as a fire attribute, but its picture says "Dark".
We also still don't know whether or not Ojama Country changes a Link Monster's attack to its Link number.
"O-oh. I guess I'll go f-f-first then..." Martin thumbed his duel disk as it shot five cards into his hand.
"I'll activate the f-field spell... Chaos Zone." the area warped around the mall, making it appear as if the group were going through a worm hole as swirling masses zipped in and out of existence around them. "N-next... I'll activate Soul Absorption. Then, I'll use G-gold Sarcophagus. W-with it, I'll banish Necroface until the second standby phase after this t-turn..." The sarcophagus opened and inside of it writhed a mass of fleshy tentacles around the cracked face of a doll. If there was any reason for the boy's timidity, it was likely how absolutely horrifying that card was. "O-oh. And Necroface activates his special ability... We each banish the top five cards in our decks..." he sent five cards from his deck to the banish zone. Mathemetician, Pot of Desires, D.D. Survivor, Dimension Barrier, D.D. Trainer. Just like that, four counters appeared on the field in a form resembling spiral galaxies behind Martin, and his lifepoints shot up by a whopping 2500, putting him at 307500 life points.
"I'll set one card... O-okay. You guys can go..." he said, ending his turn. Crawling out of one of the ether was a man in tattered clothing- D.D. Survivor- taking a knee. It was in defense mode.
1. Activates Chaos Zone 2. Activates Soul Absorption 3. Activates Gold Sarcophagus banishing Necroface. 4. Chaos Zone gains a counter; Lifepoints are increased by 500. 5. Necroface activates. Each player banishes 5 cards from the top of their deck (Martin sends Mathemetician, Pot of Desires, D.D. Survivor, Dimension Barrier, D.D. Trainer) 6. Chaos Zone gets three more counters. 7. A card is set. 8. Enter End Phase, D.D. Survivor activates, special summoned in defense mode.
MARTIN - 410000 LP - HAND 1 NONE - NONE - D.D. SURVIVOR - NONE - NONE NONE - NONE - SET - NONE - NONE (Graveyard: N/A | Banished: Necroface, Mathemetician, Pot of Desires, D.D. Survivor, Dimension Barrier, D.D. Trainer)
It was unbelievable how quickly the match ended. The girl had not only won, but also vanished before their eyes. Though, the lady had another issue to deal with, and was quick to give chase to the Ghoulish Rider - Traveler of the Highway of Hell. She picked up her phone and called back to professor Furiko, letting him know of what happened and ran after Fyodor.
"You win some, you lose some, kid." she told Yuryu before dashing off. The parking structure of the dorm houses was attached to the side of each of them facing away from the main school gates. Cars were parked throughout the structure, with specific duel runner parking designated at the bottom floor- which of course did not stop any student from parking their motorcycles elsewhere.
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