Marlowe

Trial of Shadows | Warrior Cats

@gummiecandies I gave a critique to your sheet already, it seems pretty good except for that one thing I commented on. After you remove it you may put your character in the character tab and join the discord.

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@gummiecandies It's actually much better, good job! Make sure to add your picture at the top. And I would prefer you not add the macrocosm part, but that's the only jarring part. ^^

Trial of Shadows | Warrior Cats

@gummiecandies Better, but it still needs a lot of work. You don't need to make it all one big paragraph to make it look longer/more detailed, you just need to fill out all fields of the sheet in order to make it acceptable. Take my character, Mottledpaw, for instance. You can find her under MistClan cats. I have one paragraph for personality, two for biography, which is more or less the minimum of what I expect from RPers. Your sheet should be as filled out as hers.

Trial of Shadows | Warrior Cats

@gummiecandies Please join the discord when you can!

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@gummiecandies Alright, I understand that you're still fairly new to RPing, so I'ma explain a little bit.

We're currently focused on MistClan right now, so it'd be better if you made a MistClan cat if you wanted to get straight into RPing.
I do like her name and appearance, though I don't think an "insane"/crazy character would really fit into the RP. She could definitely be a little strange/quirky, though insane is kind of pushing it.
You need to flesh out your sheet some more. For reference, look at the sheets in the accepted character tab. :)

Trial of Shadows | Warrior Cats

Shadestar

MENTIONS: Eelpond

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Shadestar liked his den. It provided ample cover from rain, as did all of the dens in camp, but it was also very roomy. Some of the rain water would gather just outside, and so he wouldn't have to walk too far if got thirsty during the night. But now that Eelpond spoke, he found that it was darker and chillier than usual. He followed the medicine cat's suit, curling his tail around his paws, but its tip still twitched uncomfortably.

"I'm sure it'll be fine," he finally said, albeit a bit nervously. StarClan hadn't talked with medicine cats in moons. The Clans were getting more and more anxious, and there wasn't much they could do. "If they are angry with us, which I doubt, then Tinypaw should be able to speak to them. Like you said, right?"

He glanced to the side. Shadestar felt like he was lying not only to himself, but to Eelpond as well. That was the thing that had hurt him the most. He hoped Eelpond wouldn't catch it. With a short, brief sigh, he leaned forward and touched his nose to Eelpond's forehead.
"Things will be fine. No need to worry about me," he murmured. "Just be careful on your way there."

Trial of Shadows | Warrior Cats

@Apoalo Hey, you still in this?

Trial of Shadows | Warrior Cats

@gummiecandies Yep! And no worries. You're not in a rush.

In the meantime I recommend joining our discord server.

The Rise of WillowClan

@savannahssu Is Shadow still in this? I wanna know cause it's kinda important for Wolf..