Martian

A returning member, not a new one

Well I'm back after a prolonged absence. My mental health and physical health had deteriorated to the point that I stopped all my hobbies. Thankfully I have improved quite a bit, though I'm still dealing with a mystery illness, so I decided to slowly dip my toes back into RPing. I would also like to apologize to everyone I was in an RP with when I disappeared, and I hope it didn't mess too much with the story telling. But I'm glad to be back and to start telling stories again with the fine members of this forum.

Monster Marathon [Closed]

Alright. Don't feel a need to rush.

Star Wars: Aeons

Star Wars is pretty much an always yep I'm interested for me. Is there a limit on the amount of characters per player?

Bible of Ichor: Septet for the Dead - A Unheroic Gothic Vampire RP

Another person interested in this. Haven't done a vampire RP in many years.

Dwarves! Interest Check

Also interested in playing as a Dwarf and going on a quest. No firm character concept right now.

Monster Marathon [Closed]

Alright, came up with a character and put him in the Character Tab.

Monster Marathon [Closed]

Alvin Campbell aka Primus

Name:

Alvin Campbell

Codename:

Primus

Age:

19

Gender:

Male

Species:

Human

History:

Alvin was born about an hour out from Coral City, in the small suburb of Violet Hill. From a young age he tended to blend into the background, never being popular but also not really being bullied. Most people tended not to even realize he was there, including his family. The middle child of five, Alvin always felt lost among his siblings. Even when he went to high school, he blended in, getting decent grades, not joining many clubs, getting a starting job at a grocery store.

It was after a party where no one talked to or danced with him, that Alvin was walking down a country road back home. The inebriated teenager was surprised by a giant machine appearing in front of him and beaming him up. Expecting to be abducted by aliens, Alvin was surprised to find himself in a room full of humans. They revealed that they weren’t from a different planet, but rather a different reality. Before Alvin could ask a question, the ship left his reality, entering the bleed between realities.

Alvin ended up on Nexus Station, a large city that existed outside of reality. It was there that he was brought to the hall of the Primus Corps. Inside Alvin was surprised to find many different versions from himself. Apparently the Primus Corps was comprised of alternate universe versions of Alvin. Each one was gifted a Prima Band, a piece of technology that would transform them into Primus, with there being one Primus to defend each reality.

Alvin had come of age to which he was to become his reality’s Primus. Gifted a Prima Band, Alvin was returned his reality. Alvin would then spend the next year training with his new powers, at the same time graduating high school. Alvin then decided to move away from his family, moving to Coral City. Once living there he would begin to fight crime as Primus, but he wanted to do more. The Primus Corps had told him to prepare for invasions from space, different dimension, or any other number of places.

Gear:

Alvin possesses a Prima Band, a band made of unknown metals that is infused with energy. By tapping his hand on the band, Alvin can trigger a transformation in which he is covered in golden energy armor. While in this form Alvin has heightened strength, speed, and durability. He can also fire energy blasts and erect energy shields.

How long will I stick around?:

Probably a few monsters.

Young Avengers: Secret Wars

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I have two minor issues, but not enough to require an edit or anything. The first is that you had the ship enter the atmosphere in Wolverine's intro, though normally these Sentinels keep their ships in orbit and teleport down to the surface. However, I'm willing to overlook that and not require an edit since it is a small, trivial thing. My second issue is the Sentinels boarding the Excalibur, meaning a Traveler Scar is on a space station that has apparently only existed for a few months. If America had suddenly opened a star portal onto the Excalibur, chances are such an event would have triggered a massive security alert by the station's personnel and put everyone on edge. You mentioned there had been no incursions since the station was built, so it seems unlikely that any star portals opened on the facility once it was operational. However, I am willing to overlook this, and we can just assume that some part of the station was constructed using repurposed materials, perhaps a large piece of scrap metal that at one time was sitting in a junk yard somewhere and had a Traveler Scar embedded into it while America was passing through.

@CaptainManbeard

Sorry about the mix up. As for the Wolverine scene, I completely wasn't remembering properly when I said the ship appeared in atmosphere. If you wish I can edit it, but that will be up to you. As for the Darkhawk scene, I did have a sentence stating that the only thing interesting that had happened on Excalibur was an unknown powered individual teleporting onto the station before teleporting away. While I didn't specifically say that this was America, that is what I intended to happen. So let me know if you want me to do any edits.

Monster Marathon [Closed]

Sorry about not being around. I'm still interested in this and would like to continue, if we have enough players. I should flesh out a character concept tonight and post it tomorrow.

Young Avengers: Secret Wars

Got up a first post as both Jimmy and Peter. Hopefully they are fine.