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I've decided I no longer have interest in competing in this tournament. Please remove me from the roster.
I feel like perhaps the concept on what qualifies as "Powered" might be a little too vague. To my mind, most of the characters I've seen would fall far above the level of what Innue described as "the mid to lower end of the second tier". I've always thought the idea of a tournament was to submit balanced characters and let the writing decide the victor, not to have a contest of who can think up the more powerful character.

Personally, I feel that some powers should just not be allowed in a tournament, such as gesture-less magic, telekenesis and similar uncounterable effects, and self healing.
With Jahar's close proximity to his opponent and the sloped surface, his options were limited as Nicoli threw the cloud of sand toward him. Were it not for his Onyx Eye, he would likely have been forced to choose retreat, but its enhanced ability to see in the gloom allowed him to detect the glint of moonlight off of the glass particles as they left Nicoli's hand. Jahar's lips curled upward into a snarling smile and he sent another, larger surge of energy through his entire body. The fragile tiles beneath his feet cracked with a loud report from the pressure as he dashed through the cloud to press his advantage, moving a bit upward to his left to gain the advantage of slightly higher ground. He held his breath and closed his right eye against the glass while keeping his focus upon Nicoli with his open left.

What Jahar hadn't seen, of course, was the rust powder mixed with the glass. Jahar had dashed through the handful of powder before it had time to fully expand, but it still coated the right half of his torso, part of his face, and most of his right arm as he passed. While Jahar's gear had very little metal, given that there was not a great deal to strap down, what little he had was quite important. Immediately, the rust began working upon the metal buckles on the right side of his weapons harness, as well as those securing the straps of the bracer upon his right arm. The blade at his elbow, affixed to his bracer, also began immediately to be eaten away.

Jahar, unaware of this predicament, saw only an unarmed opponent and the chance for a kill. His khopesh was currently down at his right side following his parry, and he reached across with his left hand to once again grasp it in a two handed grip as he closed the short distance with incredible speed, the position of the blade similar to the Iron Gate stance both had earlier used. With a snarl, he would arc the blade in a vicious uppercut swing beginning from the lower right and intended to cleave Nicoli in two diagonally, both the speed of and the strength behind the attack were at more than three times Jahar's natural ability. An attack of this strength in Jahar's previous experience had been enough to slice through unenchanted steel armor as though it were cloth.

Unfortunately, the killer made a miscalculation in his footing on the unfamiliar terrain, ending his attack with his left foot forward to accommodate the brutal attack. Whether or not it struck Nicoli, the upswing of the attack would be enough to momentarily unbalance Jahar upon the slope, forcing him to immediately bring his right foot beneath him to recover. The move was near instantaneous, and would normally have posed almost no issue, but in this case he was a victim of poor circumstance.

In the midst of the attack, the rust powder had completed its work upon the metal buckles in Jahar's weapon harness and bracer, causing the right sheathe holding one of his twin Haladie daggers to simply fall to the tiles and begin to slide down toward the lip. In a cruel twist of fate, Jahar's right foot landed upon the sheathed dagger as he repositioned his weight and it slid out from beneath him, causing him to fall backward. Gravity would immediately begin its work and Jahar would begin to slide downward, his body parallel to the roof's edge. He attempted to slam his right elbow into the tiles, hoping to find purchase with the blade upon his elbow, but to his immense surprise it simply crumbled from the pressure, the rust having done its work there as well, as the friction of the tiles stripped away the bracer, no longer strapped to his forearm.

With a growled curse foul enough to make a sailor blush, the Blackvine would slide over the edge and, unable to change his position mid air, fall ten feet awkwardly to the sands below, the dagger in its sheathe landing a few feet away.
Jahar watched warily as the man withdrew his hand from yet another pouch at his belt and flung it; instantly he knew that it wasn't targeted at him as it left Nicoli's hand, and so he kept his focus forward as the Veiled-One closed the distance. Finally he thought with savage satisfaction, just before his finely tuned senses picked up the sound of the shattering vial above him and to the left, followed by the telltale sizzle of acid.

When the first tile slid free and begin to rattle downward, Jahar realized his opponent's strategy. Clever. A simple retreat, by far the easiest and safest defense against most attacks, was now impossible. The sense of wariness he had felt upon the throwing of the vial melted back into enjoyment and amusement. As though he would back down now.

As the Veiled-One ran with a sure-footedness and confidence upon the uneven tiles that the dark killer actually admired, he would take several quick but careful steps forward to meet the attack. As Nicoli's thrust darted in, Jahar released his left hand from the khopesh and sent an instant surge of energy into the tattoos upon his right arm, shoulder and back. At the last moment he swept his sword in a counter clockwise arc before him, the surge of power in his muscles allowing him to maneuver the heavy sword as though it were light as a rapier. The khopesh would slam into Nicoli's longsword with another dull ring as the killer would try to force the lighter blade down and away to Jahar's right with a strength of over twice his normal level.

At the same time, he sent another similar surge of power into the muscles of his left arm and shoulder, though this time rather than strength his arm would be empowered with speed. Jahar's clawed hand would literally blur in motion to most normal eyes, moving several times faster than the speed of his earlier attacks, to strike out immediately after the parry at the exposed upper section of Nicoli's sword arm in a raking perpendicular slash from top to bottom. Unfortunately, he had been forced to lean in toward the roof to counterbalance the defensive khopesh swing, and so the blow would lack power despite its incredible speed. Normally he could have compensated with the aid of his tattoos, supernaturally increasing his strength, but he feared to sacrifice his footing while shifting any weight away from the slope of the roof. Still, with this particular weapon it hopefully would not matter.

Should Jahar's claws find purchase in Nicoli's arm, even with a simple set of scratches, the assassin would feel an inordinate amount of pain, as though a much greater wound had been inflicted. The pain was occasionally great enough to send lesser men into shock, though Jahar heavily doubted that would be the case here. Still, in a battle at this level, any distraction could be fatal, which was why Jahar pointedly avoided glancing at the tattooed flower upon his left hand, instead keeping his eyes upon the hand that lay near to Nicoli's belt. Had he looked, he would have seen the first petal begin to wither and shrivel. One way or another, the countdown had begun.
@Innue Wait....so you are saying no, injuries and such will not carry over between fights? I just want to make sure I'm reading this right.
Tourney? Sounds fun :)

I'll enter with Jahar.



By the way, do injuries and usage of abilities that require charging carry over from one fight to the next?
Jahar simply let the man play his music and have his say, watching with glinting eyes, and the answering laugh was even more amused than before. "I think I'm finally starting to understand. The only thing different about the Veiled-Ones is their ridiculous pride. You want to tell yourself pretty lies about how you're a better class of killer? How your methods are somehow more noble than mine? Go ahead." The killer laughed derisively again. "Strip away the cute tricks, the whispered myths, and the delusions of superiority and what do you have? Someone who takes money to make corpses, the same as me." He gestured to the scattered, spittle covered coins still laying upon the raised platform behind him and shook his head with another disturbing smile, chuckling.

Then, suddenly, the smile fell from the killer's face, leaving only the hunger behind, and he scoffed. "You keep saying how much better you are, how you don't take me seriously, how you'll 'bring the Angels unto me', whatever the hell that means, but your actions tell a different tale, one of a man desperately clinging to his pretty title while grasping for any little advantage he can get."

The Veiled-One had proved far more cautious and less sure of his own abilities than Jahar had hoped, considering his organization's reputation. He was beginning to lose hope that he would get what he so desperately wanted from this fight; still, he yet believed the man was holding back the greater part of his ability, and that belief spurred him on. While Nicoli had been playing his flute, Jahar had taken the time to assess the rooftop on which he stood. The sloped tiles, designed to easily slough the rain from their surface, would certainly provide for somewhat treacherous footing, but other than the fact that the assassin currently held the high ground, Jahar did not think the disadvantage would be as great as his opponent assumed. The man seemed to be assuming a great deal about Jahar's level of training; he would likely be surprised if he knew the truth.

"If choosing the battleground means so very much to you, perhaps I've overestimated the Veiled-Ones." In the matter of an instant Jahar sent a small flood of power to his legs and torso, crouching only slightly to leap adroitly up to his left, landing gracefully on the smaller rooftop of the nearby permanent pavilion and streaking a few steps down its length. From there, he would use his enhanced strength to complete a series of two short leaps, the first allowing him to easily cross the gap to the top of one of the small pillars slightly below and to his left, pushing off to crest the remaining distance and land upon the same tiled roof upon which Nicoli stood, thirty feet toward the tower from the man's position. The entire maneuver would take less than two seconds with Jahar's enhanced strength, though he used only a fraction of that which he was capable. "But I'll oblige you if it means we can end this farce and get to it." he finished as he dropped into a fighting stance, his left leg partially crouched beneath him to accommodate the slope with his khopesh held in a two handed grip before him, blade pointed at Nicoli.

"Now, show me these Angels, assassin."

Jahar widened his smile as the assassin took several steps back; he would easily have the seconds he needed for the tattoos to gather the requisite energy. This was what he had been waiting for, a chance to test the full breadth of his skills against one of the most feared contract killers in the realms. His long weeks of planning and waiting had come to this moment. All that remained was to see whether his suspicions were correct about the true skill of the man he fought. That D'Angelo had been holding back he was certain, likely taking the time to assess his strengths and weaknesses; it almost made Jahar laugh aloud...the man had no idea what he faced. He soon would, however, and Jahar would finally know whether this man was good enough to give him what he wanted, the Thrill of true life or death battle that was the only thing that made him feel alive again.

The dark killer prepared to lunge forward in an attack, following the assassin's swift retreat, but his smile froze on his face, eyes widening fractionally as the man darted his nimble fingers into the pouches upon his belt, flicking a pair of objects toward him. Jahar had faced a great many assassins and was familiar with some of the tricks they employed in their work, though he eschewed such tactics himself, preferring the visceral feel of a blade tearing through flesh. His mind whirled with the possibilities, none of them pleasant. With only a moment's hesitation brought by his interrupted plan of attack, Jahar instead took a series of short, swift bounds that carried him back and to his right, away from the impact of the thrown objects.

The adhesive gel struck the ground, covering the cobbles in a tarry substance, but the Blackvine did not even see it as the smoke pellet exploded and he was caught in the outer part of the cloud mid movement. Inwardly he cursed, assuming the worst and holding his breath against what he assumed was some sort of toxin as the grey smoke filled the air around him, stinging his eye for a moment before he cleared it to land upon the sand a few paces from the corner of the platform. He heard the sound of the grappling hook striking the roof tile on the other side of the smoke cloud and instinctively turned to face it, his sword held out before him. After a few moments he relaxed slightly and drew another breath, reasonably certain that he was far enough from the already dissipating cloud.

At that moment the storm of energy gathering inside of him reached a roaring crescendo, and Jahar could suddenly feel the enormous well of writhing, seething power filling the tattoos surrounding his body, ready and almost begging to be used. To him, as it always did, the power felt vast, infinite, and it very likely was as the tattoos continued to absorb ambient magic from his surroundings. Jahar knew from experience, however, that while he had a near infinite well from which to draw, his body could only handle so much of the raw energy before it would literally destroy him from the inside. Reflexively, he glanced at the flower blossom upon the back of his left hand. Of course, he had not yet utilized any of his power so all the petals were yet fully intact, but he still found it strangely reassuring.

As the smoke cleared, Jahar easily located the Veiled-One upon the rooftop with the aid of his Onyx Eye, fifty feet away from where he stood. A loud echoing laugh resounded about the arena, tinged with an edge of contempt. "Are we playing cat and mouse now? One might begin to think you're afraid of me, assassin." Jahar's tone was full of equal parts amusement and mockery as he began to walk casually across the sand toward Nicoli, letting his sword drop to his side in a one handed grip. "Try not to feel badly about it, most cowards are." If Nicoli did nothing in response, Jahar would come to a stop near the other side of the platform, twenty feet or so from the edge of the courtyard below the rooftop upon which the assassin stood. He assumed no stance, appearing completely relaxed as though clearly goading D'Angelo to attack.
I would also consider describing the process by which your character casts magic. This is just my opinion, but I find that spells without an accompanying gesture or command word, or at least some sort of tell, to be a bit unfair to opponents. Also, as Tuujaimaa suggested, it would be nice to see some clarification on the speed, range, and other factors of some of her spells.
The blinding flare from the curved sword was bright enough that even through his closed eyelids Jahar felt a spike of pain lance through his head. Small retina burns danced before his vision as he opened them an instant later, though muted enough that he could see his opponent having similarly avoided the flare. His lips twisted into a disturbingly contented smile as he simply released his hold on Nicoli's sword and stepped back, his own blade held before him defensively in a two handed grip in case Nicoli simply attacked. His real eye glittered almost as brightly in the light of the blood moon as did his false one.

"You have no idea how many men have fallen to this sword's ability, simple as it is." It was clear from his tone that Jahar was unnervingly pleased with the outcome of the clash. "I think its safe to say that I finally have your full attention." As he spoke, so long as the flare did not affect Nicoli for the worse than it did Jahar, the Veiled-One would likely see the tattoos upon his face and left hand, the only places where his dark toned skin was visible, writhe and change over the course of a few seconds. Each vine grew dozens of small tattooed thorns, appearing to pierce the killer's skin anywhere the vines crawled. Most visible would be the blooming of the two black rosebuds upon his face and hand into beautifully inked flowers, each with intricate gradations of black that clearly defined the separate petals.

A small wince was all that showed on Jahar's face as the brief but intense pain of the tattooed thorns washed over nearly his entire body, but it was a familiar, welcome pain. He had been convinced by the last exchange; this man was truly excellent at his craft, able to read his opponents movements and react almost instantaneously to avoid danger. His defenses were impeccable, but he was clearly holding back in attempting to kill his opponent, likely held back by his desire to unravel some sort of imagined plot. That simply wouldn't do, not for today, not for the fruition of weeks of waiting. Patience had never been Jahar's area of strength, and he had decided to force his opponent's hand. The wash of power from the tattoos felt like vibrant liquid fire across his skin and in his veins, though there was no associated pain other than that of the thorns.

For D'Angelo, his charm would certainly sense the intense flare of magic as the darkly beautiful tattoos began to gather the ambient energy in the atmosphere, easily found most everywhere but especially so in areas such as this one which were mostly untouched by men. The process would take a few precious seconds before Jahar could begin to actually utilize his abilities, and so he was prepared to defend himself during the entire process, ready to buy himself the necessary time.
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