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20 hrs ago
Current As an Imperial saint I fully approve the use of the Inquisiton in this matter
1 yr ago
Sometimes you want to tell a event from diffrent, time, view points and so. Younc9uld be both in the present, and for another looking back.
3 yrs ago
Happy new year humans of 2022! May it be better than rhe last!
3 yrs ago
Making stuff by hand is very satisfying.
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4 yrs ago
Happy new year for the year that shall not be named is over.
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Edited it as best I can tonight. I can add further edits later if needed posting here to save progress.
Finally posted, and even made Ashton a badge yay :D


Great. :)

Nice extra.
In C R A W L 7 yrs ago Forum: Spam Forum
@Maecan I request my hat look like a spiffing slightly battered top hat?

Pastor Jimmy wants to travel the West in style.
Maybe a tiny bit of tentacle round the top of rim... We did slay a giant tentacle monster first time round.
If you care about an RP, you will read the preceding posts. Full stop.


Depends of you have time to read all those posts. 100 long posts is alot to read when they 500 words + that's. 50,000 words, or 5 full college dosertation essays at BA level.
Sometimes q skim read and asking for a quick version and time line of events roughly helps alot to allow easier joining.

Ie a general outline of events, charceters and where it roughly going.
@PrinceAlexus

Can you be more specific regarding his beliefs? "He is open to change" is a bit vague. Try saying things like "he is fascinated with the existence of aliens" or "believes that all religions point to one god" or something like that. His interest in Eastern beliefs could play a big part in this. Also inject personality into it - is he cynical? Patriotic? Foul-tempered? CSes are supposed to be descriptive, after all.

Also go into more detail with his background. I could certainly see how a life in an orphanage could make or break you, but elaborate a little. Did he get into lots of fights with his peers? Was he rebellious or actively questioned authority? It is also worth mentioning that orphanages back then (and even now) were potential hotbeds of abuse, whether it be physical, verbal, sexual, etc.

Lastly, I'd encourage you to fix up your English syntax a little - there are many misspelled words in your CS ('apecept' twice in a row?). I'm not that strict with posting requirements, but at the very least make your writing easy to read.


I can edit it. I think some of the r personality got lost when I converted it t into a report format, I can upgrade it and add all that it.

And yeah, smart phone playing up again and not tagging stuff it seems. Il give it a run via a word processor.
@Silver Carrot

Aye I do recaps for mine and it has 260 posts. It's not that hard if they kept track.

Yeah, exaggeration but if it takes several documents. Ooc and reading every one just to understand how it works... Well that's kinda not helpful.

Theres world building. And not needing to onow how the city councilors are elected and how many districts in a city etc. If it matters it can be added in when it comes round via GM posts.
I got about 80% of a post done last night. Should be able to have it up this evening.


That was fast :)
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