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Current "An apology is a promise to do things differently next time, and to keep the promise." - Ging Freecss
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“If you want to find the secrets of the universe, think in terms of energy, frequency and vibration.” ― Nikola Tesla
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“I think and think for months and years. Ninety-nine times, the conclusion is false. The hundredth time I am right.” – Albert Einstein
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“Yesterday I was clever, so I wanted to change the world. Today I am wise, so I am changing myself.” ― Rumi
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“Stand in the ashes of a trillion dead souls, and asks the ghosts if honor matters. The silence is your answer.” ― Javik
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@SilverPaw What anime is the FC from if you don't mind me asking
I got a post out before work. Its a little rushed so If I made any mistakes let me know and I'll correct it when I get off.
Hexagonal Chamber - O'Menus

The scene before him was of a different kind than he was use to. The viscera, strewn about organs and splattering of blood, the desperate death-prone bodies; most gripping or squeezing onto their last vestiges of mortality was typically ashes where he dispensed his ordinance. A particularly damaged warrior, filled with puncture holes and stabbed by swords, held his cold gaze the longest. 'Useless specks, even killing is a messy deed for them... Though that weapon looks valuable.'

He fixed his eyes onto the stupidest of the armored-mortals, the one so idiotically bold or misled that he presumed to speak to Gods of divinity. That roused the core of his being, the heat that permeated his entirety, to attention. For a moment, he could remember what his original strength felt like, it allowed him to pull the vestiges together. To rally his now meager strength to its fullness.

The sudden roar, or rather the luminance and birth of his flames pushed, Aureia's proposal into a death-sentence. The harsh light bloomed over the darkness for just a moment. The mortals didn't deserve his emotions; the scene that laid before him, before all the Gods, had decided they were ready to die. Apathetically, he considered them, wary of their tubular weapons. The flames that spewed from him gathered around his right forearm, a barren kite shield of hard-fire forming into existence.

"There will be no surrender. They have threatened Gods... their fates will be death," he spoke aloud. He hoisted together all his Godly might and sprinted into action. Forming the shield, coupled with his show of strength was draining. He needed a weapon so he snatched the white blade from the dead warrior nearby and rushed towards the army. He assumed those puncture holes were made from those tubular sticks they were aiming at them. He covered his torso with the shield and ran straight for the horned-headed mortal, sword held at his side, ready for an exterminating decapitation.
@Raineh Daze Yeah sorry for not clarifying that. Work ran late, so I'm exhausted mentally. If you guys want to go ahead and skip me you can. I'll try and get something out tomorrow.
Thanks for the kind words and advice guys. I think I was overthinking my character basically over the simplicity of my Nen ability. Going over him, I found I was more or less happy with him. The abstract nature of @Aeolian nen abilities spoke to me lol and I thought maybe I should have a more complex ability. But at the end of the day, I can’t see any dire changes that need to be made.

So i guess I’m happy with him after all.
Gonna get a post in when I get off work. So somewhere between 5 and 8 tonight.
@Aeolian Your advice was welcomed lol. I def needed to hear it. I think once I get home I’m gonna give Provoke a nice workover. Scrape through him with a fine comb and see if I can see some areas of improvements.
@vancexentan Thanks, what you think about your character is all that matters at the end of the day. I personally believe I could’ve done a little more to Provoke.
@vancexentan lol we in the same boat.

Not really basic though. I don’t know how to express the difference.
The two recent characters Byakko and Oceane especially makes me feel like I should’ve put a bit more effort into making my character a bit more HxH-like. They give off an organic vibe that Provoke seems to be missing lmao.
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