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@Bluetommy

I've gotten everyone's feedback except from the one it matters. Is Trev good or would you like me to iron out more stuff.
@Dead Cruiser
He's ac th ually more of a Naythiest, if there is a "God" they are a shoddy craftsman at best and will just be generally unimpressed with all their self righteousness.

I think I'm going to revise Trev one last time and lean a little harder on the Slasher/Humanist angle. Tone down the fiery demon stuff and pick up demonic representations of the first weapons used in murder. Obsidian knife, bronze sword, bonetiped spears/javalin, 6th century Chinese hand cannon as the predecessor of guns, stuff like that. Their only supernatural properties other than looking hella cool/scary is their tougher than they should be, able to eventually regenerate, and cut through stuff they logically shouldnt due to the bloody symbolism of their long history of use to end other human lives. These are what allowed him to Doom Slayer his way through Hellscape.

EDIT: Finished and I'm honestly pretty satisfied with where they are at.
Aaaaand done. I imagine his role in the story at large is to be a mook grinder and tank, holding the line or being the immovable object while others do their cool shit.

EDIT: Made some clarifications, fluffed him out, and added some themes.
My guy is just meat overplayed a titanium skeleton and a mini reactor for a heart, softies just go "Sqwunch" when ya hit em too hard, it's just science.
Its... everything I've ever wanted. I'm IN my dawg.
Appropo of nothing of what yall talking about, just wanted a visual example to help.
Also, when I talk about cybernetics, This is the kind of stuff I'm talking about
@MissCapnCrunch
I'm currently in Hawaii and not near my computer, I'll do my best to get the CS finished today but I cant promise anything, and I got a 12 hour flight tomorrow, so worst case scenario I'll get it done monday night/Tuesday morning
WIP, Got some family stuff I gotta see to before I finish this.


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