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7 yrs ago
Current Been practicing drawing for a few months now. Biggest tip I can give so far is copy, copy, copy. It really helps you learn the basics in a very hands on way,
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8 yrs ago
Finally caught up on Rick and Morty. Pretty good shit. It's not every day a cartoon reminds me of my existential crisis.
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8 yrs ago
The Boarder Patrol in Vermont has more important matters than illegal Mexicans. They have to stop the White Walkers.
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8 yrs ago
Unborn babies are essentially mech pilots, right?
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8 yrs ago
You know what's worse then radio Country Music? Country Music Radio hosts.

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A shrouded figure slowly made its way onto the school grounds of Kosei Academy. One the aids handing out maps nearly yelped when it approached her for a map, and a simple tired sigh was all it emitted as it continued on its way into the school. Glancing around, it took in the sights of the school, the general bustle of the crowd, and smiled a bit, seemingly happy that it was as now pretty much as far as far could it get from its homeland.

It finally arrived at its destination, having to have lugged a heavy backpack, another large duffel bag, and fairly large laptop case the entire time. Standing before the entrance to the Class A-4 dorms for girls. With a heavy, and for once, intentional sigh, she made her way into the room. For this was the beginning of Anneli Kallela's story, here at Kosei Academy.


As Anneli entered, she pushed back her hood, attempting to appear at least somewhat polite and friendly, to what affect is yet to be seen. Before her were her prospective roommates and immediately a decent amount of good faith she had started with at this school disappeared. Before her were some normal looking students with the exception of the Avian Mutant. "No voi vittu...." she muttered under her breath when she saw the winged girl. Here she was, about as far away from Finland as one could get, trying to escape her past, and a fucking Avian mutant was her roommate. Now with a heavier, more seething sigh, she made her way to the bunk, only to be further annoyed.

Bottom bunk? Bottom god damn bunk? Shaking her head, she put down her luggage on the bunk and gave a weary stretch. This whole time, she had purposefully not payed any mine to the roommates who were seemingly happily chatting away with meet and greet type small talk. One girl was looking at the bed of another girl, who was even somehow even more paler than herself, while the other simply conversed with the Avian type. From what Anneli could gather, they were talking about each other's quirks. Against instinct, she approached the little group and with a small wave introduced herself once there was a chance for her to do so.

"Hello, I'm Anneli... Kallela. Nice to... meet... you all. I guess you'll.... be my... classmates." she said her trademark raspy voice, practically pausing every few seconds to breath. God she hated this.
@sharksama @RumikoOhara @Rune_Alchemist @Dannyrulx
I'm back, and turns out I got some reading to do.....


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Awww yissss.

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Squireflyer much?

https://youtu.be/8HLZTFoiJTg?t=123

(okay, so apparently youtube inserts don't do time stamps)

I'll be posting tonight, I assure you. Just wait another hour or two. >:D
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I hate to be 'that guy' but albinism would involve light blue/red eye colour, and normally comes with a whole host of eye and sight problems. You could say he was unusually pale, but unless you actually want him to have all the issues albinism comes with, then I would recommend steering away from it. Also, the chance of an Asian, particularly a 'white' Asian, of getting albinism is freaking tiny. Not to say it couldn't happen, just something to consider.


Based on the colors used in his name, I can only assume that he is from Belgium.
@Skepic That looks a hell of a lot better. I imagine some tensions coming in with Tori's falcon wings those...


Indeed, this will be good!


Okay, so this CS is pretty much done. I'll probably flush out the bio a lot more when I get the chance later tonight, but it's pretty much done.
@skepic
You make a valid point with the counter-WMD thing. I'm still leery, but you make a good argument.

The smokescreen being turned into a non-white phosphorus blanket smokescreen is much better, perhaps a passive mist that she can ramp up when she wishes would be fine.

Grenade to be removed entirely. I reckon with a bit more finalizing on the actual specifics of the main ability, this can work much better. I assume she's an emitter class?


Yep, the worst the smoke will do is give you a cough, cause... ya know, smoke and all. xD But seriously, its a passive ability. And yeah, she's an emitter. I'll get everything cleaned up probably tonight, if not, tomorrow.
Please do not be scared by the wall of text, I mean well.

@Dannyrulx
Alright, alright, I'm willing to work with toning it down a notch. However, I do take some issue with a few points you've made. However, I didn't see any mention in the first post about PMing you about quirks or anything for that matter.

First and foremost is the WMD argument. In a world filled with people who could have powers ranging from animal like mutations to literally teleportation themselves in a flash, why is this an issue? It just strikes me as strange that'd you'd specifically mention its WMD status. It's not like she can just create nuclear weapons or something. I think that the white phosphorous power can be equally terrifying and balanced ability if we discuss it. Simply writing it off due to the fact that its "illegal" to use in our reality/modern day times seems a little unfair.

Secondly, I agree that the grenade point is a little much. I sort of through it in there last minute before I had to briefly go. I'm more than happy to remove that entirely from the list of the capabilities of her quirk. As for the other two, I think I'd be fine with tweaking the second on to be a pure smokescreen type ability, completely passive instead of harmful.

Okay, so it wasn't the wall I was expecting, what am I, a presidential candidate or something? (I'll see myself out)
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