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4 yrs ago
Wishing a relaxing weekend for everyone. Take some time to be kind to yourself, to unwind, and to have some rest. <3
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6 yrs ago
I ate a brownie once at a party in college. It was intense. I felt like I was floating. Turns out there wasn't any pot in the brownie. It was just an insanely good brownie.
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There was an explosion at a cheese factory in France. De-Brie everywhere.
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that elder scrolls / mass effect roleplayer

I put a spell on you

“I am nothing in my soul if not obsessive.”



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@Stormflyx If I'm not mistaken that's Valentina as your avie Also, I have the distinct feeling that should our GMs decide to take Flo on, Elle would get a kick out of teasing her *shrugs*

Gah! Double posting! It just feels wrong


It is Val!

Also when I read sheets I figured Elle would know Flo and would likely have interacted with her father a fair bit as he was a well known professor of Anthropology. She would likely know Al too as they have pretty much the same educational thangs. Might have crossed paths.

Anyway that is jumping the gun a touch and all depends on whether I will be allowed in at this poiny. I would absolutely love to but I leave it in the GMs hands! n.n
So I am now catching up with everyone's posts and I'm loving them!
I'm looking for someone in Solitude to meet with Alim. This Alim is a bit different than his alternate universe self from Vengeance. A little more adventurer and swordsman, a little less thief and casanova.

Dax will be collabing with Tslee. (Best Buddies)


I volunteer as tribute
Alright, @Stormflyx, looks like you've taken Dervs' advice to heart and definitely fleshed out the character better. With that said, there are still some areas to expand on.


  • Add a note on why she calls herself the Colossus (to honor her adoptive father, because of her larger than average stature etc.)
  • Being an important figure to Ashna, Bjogar's story is missing at parts. Elaboration on how his relationship with Ashna shifted from master/slave to adoptive father/daughter over the years would be nice. Also, Bjogar being a former sailor was not apparent until the second last paragraph; some hints earlier in the background will make this less jarring.
  • Ashna's interest in reading and her forgetfulness is scarcely mentioned in her background. Please explain how these traits came to be.
  • Why did your character choose Solitude and the mercenary company? I assume it is because she heard Windhelm has been occupied by Kamals and Morrowind, and Dawnstar is too chaotic at the moment. Add some of her rationale at the end of her bio.
  • How much of her bandit past would she disclose to the mercenary commanders? Revealing more shows off her skill set better, but may be treated with suspicion. The choice is up you; how much Ashna shares of her experiences may affect her initial assignment as either a frontline fighter or a laborer.
  • She needs marksman skill in order to throw axes effectively. I would make room for novice marksman at the very least (apprentice or adept may work better).


Thanks!

I've made the changes requested :) I was waiting to hear anything from Peik, but I'll chuck this up now and wait for that feedback :)
@Stormflyx I've only had time to skim her sheet, but she looks awesome as expected. We have not begun our current mission, however I do not know if we do have the room. I can discuss it with @Penny to see if we can handle one more adventurer.


Thank you! n.n
I don't mind waiting, I honestly just wanted to get that character out as well n.n I hope I can join in though! Eeeh :D
She listened to his words intently. So he'd killed a Jarl's brother. Interesting. He was obviously capable, Imperials usually were. She noted how dull his tone at the tale. She did wonder had he given up - was he just going to accept this fate? Or was this an act - or, more believably, was he just tired and feeling like shit?

She looked him over a few times before she answered him, choosing to ignore his compliment of sorts, in a coy fashion she spoke with a hint of humour lingering "oh you know, a simple mistake." She smirked as she answered, she wasn't going to hint to any level of guilt to a soul in here. Lord knew who was listening in. "Didn't kill anyone though, that's a slight pickle you've gotten yourself into there. Would be a shame for someone like you to just.... rot down here."

She heard the guards upstairs pottering around, their boots shuffling. Gods, couldn't they pick up their feet when they walked? It was so uncouth to drag around. Besides, they were soldiers. They should have manners and finesse and military discipline. She bet that they had probably committed more heinous crimes than any of the peasants locked down here. "I would really like to get out of here though. That would be nice."

She looked at him again, and at his cell. A slight feeling of resentment towards the fact that this individual had slain someone and had been put in a nicer cell than she had for her slight crime. Of course that was the case, they loved to make a woman miserable. Still, none of them had tried to violate her at all which she had been slightly fearful of. Although, the more she thought about it, she had indeed been violated. Her senses had been violated. The smell of shit still burnt through her nostrils.

"My name is Raelynn, by the way..." she stuck a hand out through the bars, as if to shake his own - knowing full well they would never reach - she found humour in it regardless.
G'day all! I had intended to get this CS up when the game was still open. I've finished it now because I was on a bit of a creative kick. I'd love to leave her here for consideration when/if the game opens up again n.n

Thank you <3



I already read it over before you submitted, so I've given my stamp of approving! Let's see what the other Big Kahunas say.


Thank you friend! :)
I hope it isn't too late to submit this and join - I'm happy with it now and have had a good crack at it. Thanks GMs for letting me finish up. Appreciate it. :)



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