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No, your post is pretty good. It's not too long.
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No, your post is pretty good. It's not too long.
The women gave Jacque a very simple explanation of what was happening, simply saying that the castle was being attacked by the Claws of Anarchy, and the Queen and King (Her mother and father) were dead. Then she continued to speak to Zenia. "We should go south. I could jump into the Crystal Rivers... maybe if I found the right type of water I would be strong enough to... oh, never mind, I'll worry about the future later. For now, I agree, we should probably flee and, regardless of weather or not I go to the Rivers, it would be best to go south. And as for how I made it this far, I can hardly believe it myself. If it hadn't been for the bravery and strength of a few guards I would be dead."
She paused when Jason asked her her name, "This is lady Zenia, and I am Princess... well... Queen Julia, ruler of the-" Suddenly she stopped speaking and her eyes returned to her blue color and then back to the fiery red. The Queen suddenly began to scream like a banshee as she leaps over the sofa and grabs a sharp wooden table leg from the floor. She raises it up in the air and recklessly charges at Habb, prepared to strike him with the makeshift weapon.
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In the meantime, a man lying on the floor starts coughing and sputtering as blood trickles from his mouth down his cheek. He props himself on one arm, sees the princess rushing towards Habb and seems to realize that there will be conflict. He hops up and quickly, but soundlessly follows Meryn up the chimney.
She paused when Jason asked her her name, "This is lady Zenia, and I am Princess... well... Queen Julia, ruler of the-" Suddenly she stopped speaking and her eyes returned to her blue color and then back to the fiery red. The Queen suddenly began to scream like a banshee as she leaps over the sofa and grabs a sharp wooden table leg from the floor. She raises it up in the air and recklessly charges at Habb, prepared to strike him with the makeshift weapon.
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In the meantime, a man lying on the floor starts coughing and sputtering as blood trickles from his mouth down his cheek. He props himself on one arm, sees the princess rushing towards Habb and seems to realize that there will be conflict. He hops up and quickly, but soundlessly follows Meryn up the chimney.
Fear not comrades, the google doc will be open tomorrow.
As the women tried to collect herself, Zenia glanced out the window. In the distance, she saw a large collection of small brick and wooden houses. She would quickly realize that this was a castle, since there was a moat filled with water nearby, and several stone bricks laying in or around the moat in small heaps. Clearly, these bricks had once been part of a wall that had collapsed during some sort of attack or siege.
Finally, the women stopped taking shaky breaths and wiping the tears off of her eyes. Her dialogue was aimed towards Zenia, the first person to address her. "We've failed. They overtook us easily. My father, he..." She stopped and cried a little more, "He's dead. There are a few clusters of guards scattered throughout the castle, but it's over. And my mother and brother and..." Again, she started to cry. "I'm so sorry, I thought everyone here was dead. We're all doomed anyways. As soon as they get through those doors... to think, I dreamed of ruling one day... and now that I'm technically the ruler, it doesn't matter." More sobbing.
Then she abruptly stopped and sat up straight. Something changed in her eyes. "We're not going out without a fight. Servants, grab your weapons. I see you have no armor, and unfortunately there is no time to put any on, save helmets."
Again, something changed in the women eyes. It seemed as if... their color was changing? It seemed beforehand that they had been blue, but now they were a fierce red, which then suddenly changed to a vibrant purple. "Actually, maybe we should run away with what we have left..."
Then, in response to James' comment, she said, "You're right. We should focus on finding survivors in this room. I shouldn't have assumed they were all dead," she sprang up from the sofa and helped in the effort to search for survivors. As she did this she said to the entire group, "What do all of you think we should do? Fight The Claws of Anarchy or flee?"
Finally, the women stopped taking shaky breaths and wiping the tears off of her eyes. Her dialogue was aimed towards Zenia, the first person to address her. "We've failed. They overtook us easily. My father, he..." She stopped and cried a little more, "He's dead. There are a few clusters of guards scattered throughout the castle, but it's over. And my mother and brother and..." Again, she started to cry. "I'm so sorry, I thought everyone here was dead. We're all doomed anyways. As soon as they get through those doors... to think, I dreamed of ruling one day... and now that I'm technically the ruler, it doesn't matter." More sobbing.
Then she abruptly stopped and sat up straight. Something changed in her eyes. "We're not going out without a fight. Servants, grab your weapons. I see you have no armor, and unfortunately there is no time to put any on, save helmets."
Again, something changed in the women eyes. It seemed as if... their color was changing? It seemed beforehand that they had been blue, but now they were a fierce red, which then suddenly changed to a vibrant purple. "Actually, maybe we should run away with what we have left..."
Then, in response to James' comment, she said, "You're right. We should focus on finding survivors in this room. I shouldn't have assumed they were all dead," she sprang up from the sofa and helped in the effort to search for survivors. As she did this she said to the entire group, "What do all of you think we should do? Fight The Claws of Anarchy or flee?"
@TentacleLord Nikolai Dvorik is approved! Good job with the appearance BTW, he's easy to visualize despite having no picture. (Also, that was impressively fast O_O)
@Sigurd @c3p-0h @TheFake @GodOfChaos @Eklispe @MonsieurShade @duskshine749 @Heyitsjiwon
Alright guys, feel free to start! I can't wait to see how this RP will go! :D
Also, @TentacleLord I'm making a rule for people that want to join the RP late (they have to PM me), but you don't have to follow it, seeing as you're not very late.
Alright guys, feel free to start! I can't wait to see how this RP will go! :D
Also, @TentacleLord I'm making a rule for people that want to join the RP late (they have to PM me), but you don't have to follow it, seeing as you're not very late.
I have a quick question: Is it too late to voice my interest in this RP?
Yes you can join, unfortunately, seeing as you are a bit late, your character will remain unconscious a little longer than the others. I'm going to go ahead and start the IC- GodOfChaos has PMed me his CS, and it should be readable by everyone soon.
Not quite sure whether or not i've actually been accepted into this role play, however if I am, I decided to edit my CS to give my character a bit more of a nomadic mountain man sort of feel rather than what he originally was. Got a sort of wasteland wanderer vibe from the previous version that didn't quite sit well with me considering the nature of this RP.
Good news! Everyone is accepted. In addition, I really like the changes to your CS.
I'll let everyone know when we can start as soon as @c3p-0h and @GodOfChaos make their characters and @Eklispe finishes their characters appearance.
@Sigurd
In the Int check @SpookySquid said it was kind of like we got teleported to the rp setting from modern times, so I thought it'd be funny to give him a really useful skill that will do him no good in the setting. If we're not doing the modern times thing I can change that
Having this skill is fine. Although basically useless, it adds some depth to your character and lets you know what sort of things he is good at/ enjoys doing.
In addition, it is okay to have characters that aren't from modern times, but they must be from our world and unfamiliar with this fantasy.
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