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It's always the second fight you have to watch out for. The first is all noise and bright lights, establish the scale of things. The second is when the GM starts playing for keeps.

That said, I'll let our enemies take the first move - Carver's last charge didn't go so well.
My shield-taunt didn't work! Curse the enemy's basic intelligence!

Now I'll have to snail-crawl after the bastards.
PITY - Application for Academic Year 2015/2016

Student Name:
Greg Jackson

Gender:
Male

Nationality:
United States

Age:
17

D.O.B.:
October 22nd, 1997


Appearance


Hair Color:
Brown

Eye Color:
Blue

Ethnicity:
Caucasian

Height:
170cm

Weight:
50kg


Powers & Abilities

Power Name: Pariah

Power Description:
I constantly emit some sort of field that makes people uncomfortable, making eye contact with me produces spontaneous (really really bad) headaches, and I constantly read the minds of those around me to find out what's hurting them. I can't help any of it.

Abilities:
I can help people with emotional problems. I can also feel physical pain, so I'm okay with first aid and healing type stuff, as long as the person is unconscious, so they don't try to get away from me. The... field I produce gets more powerful with my emotions, so it's not too bad when I stay calm - people can still be around me, if they want, they just get sort of vaguely uncomfortable. I'm also really good at being alone, you know, when I want to be.

Drawbacks & Weaknesses:
Nobody can look me in the eyes without severe pain, nobody ever really wants to be near me, animals hate me, and I always have other people's voices in my head. This is all compounded when I get upset - people start vomiting, screaming, freaking out, collapsing, it's... bad, when that happens. This can put a damper on a social life, as you might imagine.


About You

Family:
Father: Timothy Jackson
Mother: Abigail Jackson
Sister: Sarah Jackson

Personal Statement:
I think I'm a pretty normal person. Or, was. I'm from the town of Bellevue, Idaho, which is sort of the middle of nowhere, I guess. I've lived here all my life and I'm not especially well traveled, though I used to think a lot about going to Europe some day, maybe. I tend not to get out too much, I stay in my room a lot. Like, a lot a lot. I like to read, and that's... pretty much it for what I do, I read a lot. I'm a Catholic, and pretty religious, but don't worry, I'm not going to like, try and convert anyone. My family situation is good, but it's been sort of deteriorating since my mutation developed. My parents are... understandably weirded out by the whole thing, but my sister's been pretty understanding, all things considered. I haven't really been to school since it happened, either, the police wouldn't let me. I'm not, like, super smart or anything, but I used to do pretty well in class. I know this sounds sort of stilted, I'm sorry, I'm not great with people. It's been sort of... hard, since I got my powers, but I'm hoping this school can teach me how to control them, let me live a normal life again. Thanks for your time.


@DrugMother and @TheWizardLizard
Fantastic character sheets! You both wrote your sample posts very impressively, too. It just makes me want to read more and more, so I can't wait to see you posting in the IC once it's up and running.

Unfortunately, I'm not able to accept either sheet in their current form and will suggest that you both re-read the rules in the OP.


Right, right, right, forgot about that one. Fixed it.
PITY - Application for Academic Year 2015/2016

Student Name:
Greg Jackson

Gender:
Male

Nationality:
United States

Age:
17

D.O.B.:
October 22nd, 1997


Appearance


Hair Color:
Brown

Eye Color:
Blue

Ethnicity:
Caucasian

Height:
170cm

Weight:
50kg


Powers & Abilities

Power Name: Pariah

Power Description:
I constantly emit some sort of field that makes people uncomfortable, making eye contact with me produces spontaneous (really really bad) headaches, and I constantly read the minds of those around me to find out what's hurting them. I can't help any of it.

Abilities:
I can help people with emotional problems. I can also feel physical pain, so I'm okay with first aid and healing type stuff, as long as the person is unconscious, so they don't try to get away from me. The... field I produce gets more powerful with my emotions, so it's not too bad when I stay calm - people can still be around me, if they want, they just get sort of vaguely uncomfortable. I'm also really good at being alone, you know, when I want to be.

Drawbacks & Weaknesses:
Nobody can look me in the eyes without severe pain, nobody ever really wants to be near me, animals hate me, and I always have other people's voices in my head. This is all compounded when I get upset - people start vomiting, screaming, freaking out, collapsing, it's... bad, when that happens. This can put a damper on a social life, as you might imagine.


About You

Family:
Father: Timothy Jackson
Mother: Abigail Jackson
Sister: Sarah Jackson

Personal Statement:
I think I'm a pretty normal person. Or, was. I'm from the town of Bellevue, Idaho, which is sort of the middle of nowhere, I guess. I've lived here all my life and I'm not especially well traveled, though I used to think a lot about going to Europe some day, maybe. I tend not to get out too much, I stay in my room a lot. Like, a lot a lot. I like to read, and that's... pretty much it for what I do, I read a lot. I'm a Catholic, and pretty religious, but don't worry, I'm not going to like, try and convert anyone. My family situation is good, but it's been sort of deteriorating since my mutation developed. My parents are... understandably weirded out by the whole thing, but my sister's been pretty understanding, all things considered. I haven't really been to school since it happened, either, the police wouldn't let me. I'm not, like, super smart or anything, but I used to do pretty well in class. I know this sounds sort of stilted, I'm sorry, I'm not great with people. It's been sort of... hard, since I got my powers, but I'm hoping this school can teach me how to control them, let me live a normal life again. Thanks for your time.




...

Fixed! Tell me what you think!
IC post is up.

Carver now has to worry about protecting a magical girl he made an oath to, an injured woman, an injured friend, an innocent gnome with no idea of how the world works, and a little orphan girl.

Carver nodded to Separ hesitantly. "I... yes. You are right. We will do what we can. Stay close behind me, Separ. When their mightiest blows fall upon my guard, that is when you must strike. My lady... do what you must, but stay safe, and keep the light displays to a minimum. Everyone else behind me. Our priority is protecting the child."

With that, he strode forward and slowly, rhythmically, began to pound the hilt of his sword against his shield. His mind wandered back to another time, when a much younger man by his name had done much the same thing.

Sir Greenvale was striding in front of the line of recruits. The man was like a cliff face - huge, imposing, unyielding. He scanned the line with impassive eyes, and at length asked a question. "Does the Paladin fear pain?"

As once, the recruits beat their shields and answered. Clang."No!"

"Does the Paladin fear disgrace?"
Clang. "No!"

"Does the Paladin fear death?"
Clang. "No!"

"What does the Paladin fear?"
Clang. "Failure!"


The hammering intensified, growing louder with every blow. Carver would not fail. "On me, friends! They draw near!"
PITY - Application for Academic Year 2015/2016

Student Name:
Greg Jackson

Gender:
Male

Nationality:
United States

Age:
17

D.O.B.:
October 22nd, 1997


Appearance


Hair Color:
Brown

Eye Color:
Blue

Ethnicity:
Caucasian

Height:
170cm

Weight:
50kg


Powers & Abilities

Power Name: Pariah

Power Description:
I constantly emit some sort of field that makes people uncomfortable, making eye contact with me produces spontaneous headaches, and I constantly read the minds of those around me to find out what's hurting them. I can't help any of it.

Abilities:
I can help people with emotional problems. I can also feel physical pain, so I'm okay with healing and doctor type stuff, as long as the person is unconscious, so they don't try to get away from me. I'm also really good at being alone, you know, when I want to be.

Drawbacks & Weaknesses:
Nobody can look me in the eyes without severe pain, nobody ever wants to be near me, animals hate me, and I always have other people's voices in my head. This can put a damper on a social life, as you might imagine.


About You

Family:
Father: Timothy Jackson
Mother: Abigail Jackson
Sister: Sarah Jackson

Personal Statement:
I think I'm a pretty normal person. Or, was. I tend not to get out too much, I stay in my room a lot. Like, a lot a lot. I like to read, and that's... pretty much it for what I do, I read a lot. I'm a Catholic, and pretty religious, but don't worry, I'm not going to like, try and convert anyone. My family situation is good, but it's been sort of deteriorating since my mutation developed. My parents are... understandably weirded out by the whole thing, but my sister's been pretty understanding, all things considered. I haven't really been to school since it happened, either, the police wouldn't let me. I'm not, like, super smart or anything, but I used to do pretty well in class. I know this sounds sort of stilted, I'm sorry, I'm not great with people. It's been sort of... hard, since I got my powers, but I'm hoping this school can teach me how to control them, let me live a normal life again. Thanks for your time.


@Shard Your comments were good too, no need for them to be removed!

Hmmm. Eye contact works just fine for me. Now that I think of it, that does seem more sensible.

I do, however, want to keep away from the aura being a purely 'affects people's emotions' thing - in the first RP I tried this powerset with, it was, and it was kind of just a 'your character thinks this about me because I said so', which is never good. As a result, people tended to just sort of ignore it.

The idea of it dialing up with his emotions is a good one, though. I never want it to be totally unnoticeable, but in regular circumstances it could be more 'goosebumps and this guy's weird', which would go with the fact that he tends to show up behind people, say cryptic but comforting things about their personal life, and then just walk away, and when he gets more emotional it might get cranked up to 'vomiting, nosebleeds and oh god what the fuck is this thing'. I think that strikes a good balance - he'll never exactly have a thriving social life, but a few particularly patient people could manage to be his friend.

And the signals thing is totally fine, I just wanted to justify the idea that animals don't like him. If that can get baked into the aura, then that works for me - maybe they're just more sensitive to it?

Thank you for the comments!
Okay, the first sheet destroyed itself in OpenOffice. Some parts of this are a little rushed. Let me know if you want anything fixed or if something doesn't make sense.




Moosic:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YLWYuJe7LdA
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EFNeSWNjPyQ


I think I now know this guy better than several members of my own family. Good shit, man.
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