Tuujaimaa

Naruto - Legend of the Bijuu's - Part I - OOC

Like I said earlier, timeskip Akaritori and Touzoku to be at the summit. c:

Naruto - Legend of the Bijuu's - Part I - OOC

Akaritori and co are ready to go whenever. I don't think there's much point in posting "They arrived at the summit." - There's not a lot to add there. xD

Natrelmon: From the Ashes

As Chu used Surprising Speed to dodge the point blank Hydrosurge and carried on with its momentum towards Sagralia, during the time in which Axel shouted “Mock and Strike!”, Itsuki and Sagralia prepared the vines to counter the melee attack. As Chu “unleashed quick and devastating strikes”, three of the vines whipped forwards as Rook had been talking, and using Chu’s momentum against it, would wrap themselves around the Natrelmon’s right wrist (the one it lead its punches with) and drag it to the side while the other three vines latched onto its left ankle and pulled in the direction it was moving, which would be complimented by a strong whipping motion from the vines wrapped around Chu’s wrist. This combination of movements, plus the Chu’s high speed, would hopefully force it into a Team Rocket-esque launch right out of the arena, and into a nearby shop. If, somehow, Chu countered the genius manoeuvre, Sagralia would be ready with a Hydrosurge, and would fire it in an appropriate fashion given Chu’s actions (aka to be decided if you escape).

“What even are these trainers?” could be heard from the small crowd outside the arena.

Naruto - Legend of the Bijuu's - Part I - OOC

It's something that people tend to do subconsciously, as they devise their strategies with all information they have - which inadvertently includes the metagamed knowledge of weakness - and it's something I'd rather guard against.

The techniques in question are just inherently broken, though. xD

Naruto - Legend of the Bijuu's - Part I - OOC

The idea of adding a weakness is bogus. xD

If there's a facet of the technique which has a drawback it's a descriptor, so it goes in the description. The weakness just serves to invite people to metagame (something I've historically had a lot of trouble with).

Naruto - Legend of the Bijuu's - Part I - OOC

I would like to point out that I am, in some circles, considered the King of Overpoweredness - and I wouldn't accept Teleport's character in its current state at all ever.

Not only is it a massive faux-pas to be skilled in more than two areas (except Ken/Tai, which while distinct are intimately tied), you are also trying to be more skilled in all three areas than everyone else is. Some of your techniques do not make sense, which always supersedes every other facet that goes into making a technique. Your sword is blatantly overpowered given that it can materialise and dematerialise at will - which, if regulated, can be an interesting mechanic, but your wording has been left vague so it is... Absolutely ridiculously broken and open to all kinds of abuse.

Your Kekkei Tota is, in a word, a mistake. Not only are its effects completely unregulated and immensely overpowered, your having the Kekkei Tota is bogus given that being born with it implies that it is genetic, and there is... No way for your to have been born with both the Sharingan and your Kekkei Tota.

And the rest of your techniques are broken beyond all comparison, having little to no possible interaction and generally accomplishing things that should not be accomplished.

Like, seriously. This is quite possibly the most broken thing I've ever seen, and I've seen /a lot/ in my time.

Natrelmon: From the Ashes

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Naruto - Legend of the Bijuu's - Part I - OOC

@Corrupt: There are three changes to Akaritori that I need your approval/disapproval on c:

Her new sword, Ascension and Riverside Cremation <3

Natrelmon: From the Ashes

As the Chu used Surprising Speed, Sagralia countered immediately, as Itsuki had been prepared for the use of the move. Mock did not happen, as Chu was not given the directive to use it and the pre-existing conditions under which it was operating had not been fulfilled, and Sagralia's Trinity Force switched to SSS, enabling both the use of Hydroshackle and of Hydrosurge. The Kusarigama was not something that Sagralia had to worry about, as it would deal fairly negligible damage, so as the Chu continued on its path it would immediately be met with a Hydrosurge to the torso, which (due to the short distance and the 18fps speed) was guaranteed to hit the Chu directly. The fast and wide spray of water would engulf the small Chu and knock it back a fair distance just with sheer power, and though it was not a particularly effective move due to the Chu's Steel typing, it would create a buffer of distance.

Sagralia would then sow again, in a circle around itself, and infuse the seeds with Lifecharges, turning them into vines. The vines would give Sagralia a zone of comfort in which Chu could not act without repercussions, and simultaneously, it would unleash several Effigy of Loathing at the knocked back Chu, hoping to increase Sagralia's zone of control further. If, somehow, Chu was not hit by the Hydrosurge, Itsuki and Sagralia would be ready to react.

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Natrelmon: From the Ashes

Sagralia sowed seeds again, and as soon as Chu got in range, well within the two seconds required for Effigy of Despair to charge, Sagralia would step forwards quickly and unleash the point blank attack directly at Chu. Given the instant nature of the attack and the forward momentum he had, he would find it difficult to dodge, and the Nox Aeterna - Path would be created if he didn't manage to dodge in time. Surprising Speed was not a particularly viable option due to the instant nature of the attack, but Itsuki had considered its usage and was fully prepared to dodge it if Chu attempted to close the gap with it. Simultaneously with the unleashing of the Effigy of Despair, Sagralia unleashed a Hydroshacke that was initially obscured by the Effigy of Despair, but angled in such a fashion that it would strike the small Ninja's form if he began to dodge to the right. If the Hydroshackle hit, Sagralia would instantly use Flash of Life to create flowers, which it would then shackle the Chu to. The shackle would prove to be extremely dangerous if it hit, but Itsuki was not expecting it to hit - especially given Chu was yet to use Surprising Speed. As per usual, Itsuki and Sagralia remained ready to react and change their aforementioned strategies should circumstances dictate.