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Is it too late to get in on this? Also, anyone who plays as Arturia Lancer from Grand Order and lets me be their Master has my eternal love and adoration.


We don't know what the thirteen seals on Ron's use are. Considering you need to meet at least seven of them before you can release the True Name, that's a problem, so she's off the table. Sorry. ;;

We also don't know what her new skill does, so yeah.


Servant/Master Pairs:


Saber- El Cid by @Zobozun / Kurokiri Hyuuga by @kusanagifire
Archer- Andrew Jackson by @Hantu Kongkek / Aisaka Shinobu by @Black Alice
Lancer- Vlad III by @kusanagifire / Grigori Yefimovich Rasputin by @Zobozun
Rider- Baldwin IV by @Moonman / Lú Qiūyuè by @vFear
Caster- Tamamo-no-Mae by @ADamnFiddle / Wes Downgate by @Turboshitter
Assassin- Solovei by @Flamelord / Hector Cavala by @Scrapula
Berserker- Penthesilea by @Turboshitter / Giorgio Armadi by @ADamnFiddle
Saber (False)- Miyamoto Musashi by @IncredibleBee / Billy Jameson by @Sodium

Non-Master Magus: Seyrun-i Lhu ri Viathan by @Hantu Kongkek

NPCs:




Dead Apostle Ancestor 19: Raina Mephestiphos by @EstABest
Holy Church Knight-Captain Katherine Klienrech by @LaXnyd
@Moonman
I'd like some justification for the STR and END parameters, since they're unusually high. Moreso on END, really. I won't veto it, but I'd like to hear your reasoning.

Raise Riding by a rank since a Rider with C rank Riding isn't really a thing.

Make Leper's Curse rankless (just use a "-" in place of the rank). I applaud you for actually putting in a largely detrimental skill, it's always nice to see that.

You can put his horse in Weapons, since it's similar to Medusa's pegasus in that it isn't a Noble Phantasm, but just a mount.

Regarding the Noble Phantasm, what are the knights? Are they Heroic Spirits, wraiths, or what?
@Nevix
I'm willing to work with you to help with the mechanics, but if you feel that you ought to resign then no worries.
@Nevix
Your description for Magic Resistance: B is wrong. B is "Cancel spells with a chant below three verses. Even if targeted by High-Thaumaturgy and Greater Rituals, it is difficult for them to be affected." However, seeing as he had no exposure to magecraft in his life, B is definitely too high. C should be his absolute max, and even that just because the Saber class container is helping him.

Add the Riding Class Skill. Add ranks to the Personal Skills.

The Noble Phantasm has an issue in that the whole point of a Noble Phantasm is that it's the crystallization of a feat or legend. You can say it's a crystallization of his skill, sure, but that's A. covered by Blademaster and B. pretty illogical considering that, in the grand scope of all Heroic Spirits, his skill isn't really anything special. We have Knights of the Round Table, a wraith who can utilize a fragment of a True Magic, a martial artist who can kill with a single strike without fail, a demigod hero skilled to the point that he's able to overturn logic and do A rank attacks with B rank strength, and so on. I just don't see his legend as demonstrating skill enough to where just skill alone can become a Noble Phantasm.

I recommend either looking for a feat with his sword that you can sublimate into an NP, or try someone else. Sorry if that sounds unhelpful.
@Nevix

Use the full name of the Servant. Also, please put the image in a hider, makes things tidier.

Please specify the alignment further. IE, Lawful Good, Neutral Good, or Chaotic Good.

The weapons shouldn't have special properties without becoming Noble Phantasms. Further, as a member of the Saber class, he should only have access to his sword. The Class System exists to prevent Servants with similar characteristics from being posited.

True Name Discernment is not a Saber Class Skill. Sabers have Magic Resistance and Riding. True Name Discernment is for the Ruler Class, which is not being summoned in this war.

Is there a difference between Ladykiller and a low-rank Mystic Face? If not, just make it a Mystic Face.

What is the Noble Phantasm based on? There are other issues with it, but that's the first one I want to address.
@UnoedipalOkay, so my knowledge of the Fate universe is limited. I understand most of it, but I have a few questions.
-1. What are "Mystic Codes"
-2. On what scale do we put our servant's stats
-3. Do you have a lancer yet?


1. A magus's tool. Examples would be like Kayneth's Mercury Moeblob, Rin's Azoth Sword, Kiritsugu's Contender, and the like.
2. Just the standard E-A ranking. You can include + modifiers, which indicates an ability to momentarily double that stat. For instance, B+ means it's usually B, but it can be momentarily raised to double that.
3. I haven't received any apps for Lancer, but like I said above, I'm not reserving classes for people. If you want to be Lancer, you'll just need to be the first person who gets a Lancer app approved.
Welcome aboard!
Alright. Just so the others don't miss it, paging @Bishop, @Hinsek, @Flamelord, @Black Alice, @PaulHaynek, and @kusanagifire.

@Unoedipal

Reporting in. Now that I have an official model to work with, I shall finish my characters ASAP.

PS: Can I keep the Caster slot, right? The character (as you know) is almost done, anyway.


I don't like reserving slots in advance since it tends to incentivize people reserving a slot and then slacking off on their app-making, so I'm doing things on a rolling basis. If you're the first to get a Caster approved, you'll get Caster, which looks like it'll be the case.
The OOC is up. Do let me know if you have any questions. Newcomers are still welcome, so don't hesitate~
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