Vahir

Children of Aton - Demigod RP [Recruiting!]

@Vahir

Alright i fixed character sheet. Any other issues with it or can I move it?

@dragonmancer

Well, none aside from some grammatical errors. Go ahead and move it.

So I went ahead and did this for easy access to information.

Children of Aton - Demigod RP [Recruiting!]

@Crimson Raven

So, I've decided to side with Narrator on this one. Not only because he posted his first. Not only because your characters are thematically nearly identical, and having two overpowered deaths running around reaping everything that moves would make me reach for the cyanide. But also because your sheet has some key errors that need to be addressed, some of which I'd say other people have flirted with as well.

Objections

1. Your character is a god.

This is something I've gone on about before, and I'll take responsibility for it, as my liberal use of the word "demigod" without sufficient explanation seems to have caused some confusion. The Children are corporal, physical beings who live in the now. If you cut one, they'll bleed. They have no supernatural roles in the world beyond those that they create themselves. There is no afterlife to bring souls to, and even if there were your character couldn't be the one to do it, because you're a soul too, just a powerful and permanent one. Children only have aspects in a thematical sense.

2. You're not really in the Pit

Let me re-iterate this. You either sided with the Angels, and were thus betrayed with the rest, or was branded a demon and locked away before then. There's no option to have not been locked up, or to have never picked a side. The Angels didn't call their job done until every Child not among them was imprisoned. As far as going willingly, demons could have done so, although it'd be very strange. But Angels were locked away in the Betrayal, which by definition excludes having been willing to be locked away.

3. Reviving insanely fast

Children take a looooong time to ressurect. Typically, about a century. If you're very fast about it you might be able to do it in a decade. But a week? No.

4. Overpowered (vs other Children)

I said you could be as strong as Cthulu, and I meant it. But what I should perhaps have specified is that you have to have some kind of vulnerabilities. Not necessarily "weak to fire" or "bullseye on chest" vulnerabilities, but you have to be feasibly possible to kill, somehow. Take Nod: He's a giant murderous warrior, and probably a terror in single combat. But you can imagine that he might meet his match and end up stabbed to death or something.

Admittedly, this same point made me hesitate over Narrator's sheet. But in the end I let it slide because it wasn't blatant. Thanatos can go anywhere, kill anyone, and wipe out entire armies. I'm sorry to say, none of the Children should be able to single-handedly wipe out an army.

Whew, that was heavy stuff!

You clearly know how to write, and write well. So it pains me to say that I just can't in good conscience accept your sheet as it is. In fact, I would recommend you morph your character into something different, painful as restarting may be. You could focus on your relationship with souls, and be a wandering ghost-whisperer? Just a thought.

Children of Aton - Demigod RP [Recruiting!]

@The Grey Dust

Second sheet looks good to me.

@dragonmancer

Yours too. My only quibble is that independent isn't a choice for what faction you were on; if your child refused to pick a side, they were a demon, and locked away as such.

@Crimson Raven I am not gonna lie I see you put effort into that character but he kind of completely destroys the purpose of mine...

@The Narrator

@VahirWelcome back. In terms of putting my character's in the character tab - you want them both in the same post or separate ones? Or does it not matter? xD

@FernStone

The same post is preferable.

@Crimson Raven@The Narrator

I'm reading your sheets. And thinking.

The Fall of Lordaeron [Warcraft RP]

Sorry, I was away. I'll work on hammering out my next post then.

Children of Aton - Demigod RP [Recruiting!]

Aaaaand I'm back.

@MelonHead@Flagg@Cayce@FernStone@Renny@The Narrator

Your sheets are all accepted! Go nuts with the character tab. If other people submitted their sheets too and I missed them, just point it out to me. I'm very tired and clinically braindead right now.

A reminder: Your powers are inversely proportionate to the amount of humans alive, so you guys won't be able to do all the fancy stuff you did in the old days, at least at first.

Children of Aton - Demigod RP [Recruiting!]

@VahirSounds like the optimal way to do things then xP

I have a question in terms of the character sheets - do we need to have opinions for character's that have already been made done when we submit them or no?

@FernStone

Eeeeh. Preferably. But since you'll need to update it for new players anyway, I'm willing to be lenient about it. It should be done by the time the IC starts, though.

Children of Aton - Demigod RP [Recruiting!]

Then I would have to wade through god knows how many OOC posts to find them. And I would be very sad. :(

Children of Aton - Demigod RP [Recruiting!]

Public service announcement: I will be more or less unavailable during the weekend. If I don't come back to find my inbox crammed with a dozen character sheets, I'll be very disappointed in all of you.

Children of Aton - Demigod RP [Recruiting!]

And to answer your next question:

@Vahir

So, another question;

Are multiple characters allowed? I'm thinking about two.

@Crimson Raven

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I don't see why not.

@Vahir

Children of Aton - Demigod RP [Recruiting!]

@Vahir
... Being a dragon or dragon-related thing was an option?

@Roosan

You're by no means limited to humanoid forms. Become a kraken if that's your dream. Children can be pretty much anything so long as they're A) intelligent and B) Immortal.