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Larkwater Academy (magic rp)

@EurmalEye ah, thanks for letting me know. I'm a bit new ;3 Hopefully I'll get enough responses. if not i'll just repost it into the interest section.

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Larkwater Academy (magic rp)

Nalia

Name: Nalia Larkwater
Age: 16/grade 10
Gender: Female
Height: 5'5
Weight: 127 pounds
Personality: Very kind and caring. Loves cats and flowers.
History: Her family owns the school, and her great-great-great grandfather actually founded it. Her father is the chairman. Because of this, she grew up unappreciative of what she had (because she had everything) but soon realized how spoiled she was and quickly turned her attitude around. She now ice-skates professionally for different charities.
Powers: Power to control ice and snow. She calls herself Elsa sometimes.
Power to feel others emotions. It's exactly what it sounds like, and sometimes it can affect her own mood.

Alfred

Name: Alfred Larkwater
Title: Chairman Larkwater
Job: Chairman
Age: 37
Gender: Male
Height: 5'10
Weight: 164 pounds
Personality: Doesn't reveal much to the students or fellow staff, but is a total sweetheart to his daughter.
History: Took over as chairman when he was 26. Met his wife when he was 18 and had his daughter when he was 21. His wife soon died of heart disease when his daughter was only three. He believes he's a stronger man because of it.
Powers: Power to tell whether someone is telling the truth.
Advanced telekinetic abilities.
Power to control water, though it's pretty useless when he already had telekinesis.

Larkwater Academy (magic rp)

Character Skeletons

CS; Student

Name: Self-Explanatory.
Age: Self-Explanatory.
Gender: Self-Explanatory.
Height: Optional.
Weight: Optional
Personality: Be as vague or as detailed as you'd like.
History: Be as vague or as detailed as you'd like.
Powers: Nothing too over-powered. Maximum 3 powers.
Other: Anything else.

CS; Staff

Name: Self-Explanatory.
Title: Mr.-, Mrs.-, Miss-, etc.
Job: What makes you a staff member?
Age: Self-Explanatory.
Gender: Self-Explanatory.
Height: Optional.
Weight: Optional
Personality: Be as vague or as detailed as you'd like.
History: Be as vague or as detailed as you'd like.
Powers: Nothing too over-powered. Maximum 3 powers.
Other: Anything else.

Characters

Students

Nalia; VC103221

Staff

Alfred; Chairman; VC103221

Larkwater Academy (magic rp)

Welcome to Larkwater Academy!

Here at Larkwater, anyone is allowed!

We are a school who prides ourselves in our amazing education, lovely faculty..

and exclusively accepting students who possess magical powers!

We hope you enjoy your school year!

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As you can see, this is a magic roleplay. Literally just for fun. If you'd like to have a real plot, message me about it and we can figure one out.

Larkwater Academy (magic rp)

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I updated the plot.. is that any better?

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@jman221 Go ahead!

If this is in the interest check, it should be fine. I'm genuinely interested, but to be honest, there are a lot of conflicting points that just didn't add up. First of all, if they are spirits living in modern bodies, where do those bodies coming from? When you say ancient spirits, the spirit itself must be very old, thousands of years in age, but since Lotus, your character, is only 19, so I assume that the number 19 is the age of the carrier (the human vessel). If they are unaware that there are others living in their world, where and how do they get the bodies?

Secondly, I have a conflicting state of mind about the plot. The thing I know for sure is that a group of modern people helped the tribe people to get accustomed to human world. But since Lotus was tortured for being 'monsters', why would they try to get the spirits out to the world if the world has yet to accept them? Do they do it in secret? And I find a bit hard to believe that in the modern world, people would go out and torture supernatural beings because they are...you know, supernatural.

Finally, I am also conflicted about the way you are intending to go. So you wrote this

'Now, with doubt set into their minds, enemies form from pairs who once were the best of friends. Relationships change.

And a new worldly group brings them to the modern world to have a chance at a normal life.'

Now I don't really get it here. Do you intend to make the central point of the RP is for the spirits and gods to get accustomed to the modern world, or do you want to make the central point is around solving the issue of a doubt that I don't really know what it is? That you should point it out clearly in the OOC. And by the way, you appear to mistaking Lotus's gender. He was covered in blood that was not 'her' own.

I have an interest in this idea of interaction between natural and supernatural beings, especially this one, but I honestly think the plot and the way you are going to develop the RP must be pointed out clearly. Otherwise, I would feel very awkward trying to roleplay in a world I don't really know the rules.

@Conscripts

I gotta be completely honest with you, I wrote this at around 2 am.. didn't think it through too well. As for the misgendering, I decided I wanted Lotus to be a guy and I guess I missed a pronoun when I changed it. I'll be sure to fix that.

1. They were born into the new bodies, and their parents died off (that's the best explanation I can think of). Think of the whole spirit thing like reincarnation of some sort; his physical age is 19, but he has the knowledge you would expect from an ancient spirit.

2. Again, I wrote this at 2 am. Not my best work. I'm going to have to change that.. let's say, for now, that they think these people are just normal humans that were raised in the wild (or something similar), so they're trying to give them a normal life.

3. I intend it to be the tribe adjusting to modern life.

I do apologize for my conflicting points, I'll be sure to update the post asap. I hope I explained everything in a way that makes sense.

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@thewizardguy I also said 'ancient spirits living on in modern bodies', meaning, they had lived previous lives and were virtually unaware there were people other than them in this world. If that even makes sense? I'm bad at explaining things.

Edit; they were pretty much born in isolation, living in the middle of some distant forest until they were found by researchers. As part of an internship for college, the 'modern folk' are chosen to introduce them to modern customs.

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Bump! Open for applications.