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5 yrs ago
Current someone recommend me a switch game that isn't animal crossing
5 yrs ago
@Obscene, I’m honestly not so sure of that myself
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5 yrs ago
@Poohead, I’m young and my liver is Irish.
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5 yrs ago
I’ve been daydrinking so much since quarantine started. I don’t know how to to back
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5 yrs ago
We have a PW on the guild?
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@RC3
Second set of reviews?
@Amaranthine
1. There won’t be dice for for typical combat, maybe some player scuffles down the line could be resolved that way. But as it stands the stats are more of a numeric measurement of your current level in each category. Having 10 Strength makes you a relatively strong teenager that lift weights with some effort, having 100 makes you a muscle god who could punch holes in mountains.

2. Action Romp is just a less gritty and more lighthearted action telling. As the RP will definitely not take a serious tone at the start of the story it fits pretty well.
@Thinslayer
Everything looks good. You can transfer Edelgard over to the character tab whenever you’re ready.



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I’m down for Goblin Souls.
@Achronum
Looks good. Once your legend is done go ahead and move Najira over to the character tab.

Everything in the current life section checks out, so that's ✔
The old life bio and worldbuilding are ✔ I'll make sure to integrate some of that into the story. When it comes down to the combat stuff I'd say maybe give some descriptions on "how they fight" rather than just listing the styles that they've gathered under their belt.
- Instead of saying kendo / ninjutsu / jiu jitsu, perhaps a small paragraph on how they utilize those teaching in combat.
- Same thing with the shadow magic classifications, even just a single paragraph of what that looks like would be super helpful.
Revenant Profile also ✔ just cut the description of what the gem's definition is and you're golden.

Of course this is still a WIP so I look forward to seeing the finished project.


Modern Fantasy * School Life * Seinen * RomCom * Action Romp



You have died.

Your life as a hero in your native world has come to a glorious end. Whether it was in a flurry of bullets against your greatest rival or with sword and bone against the demon king, your ultimate goal was achieved at the cost of your life. As darkness fills your vision and the voices of your allies slowly fades away you feel your soul return to the ebb and flow of origination. Consciousness begins to slip away before suddenly hearing the distant voice of a woman. It feels as if you're floating weightlessly through a soothing ocean of darkness as you grow closer and closer to the voice and finally a blinding light fills your vision.

A
white room.

It was a small area with only enough room for three pieces of furniture, two whitewood chairs and a matching whitewood table. The floor was a glossy similarly ivory white surface but as your feet made contact with this material it seemed to chime out an ethereal noise with each step. As you peered around the room you would find that it was empty despite the source of the voice clearly being here. You approach the table and pull one of the chairs out before taking a seat. You notice that atop the small square table is a small pamphlet, a pen, and some blue-green spherical gemstone. As you take the pamphlet within your hands and begin to read your mind begins to slip away.








Kurtzpel Academy is an enigmatic occurrence in the academic world. Not only is the school privately owned and staffed, but also it is strangely tucked away on an unmarked island where a town surrounds the sprawling Academy facilities. Within the school you'd find that it incorporates a multitude of studies, contemporary and even some more niche ones. The teaching staff are hand selected by the school's figurehead Barnes Macantire, all of which are specialists in their specific fields that they teach. The staff members are required to sign non-disclosure agreements and are compensated financially to live on the island alongside the students.

The Academy itself is a beautiful structure constructed to be a spectacle inside and out, gardens, marble pillars, polished hallways, aesthetics spared no dollar when it was built. But there are also more specific constructs within the schoolgrounds. Behind the Academy is a massive sports field with a track route, batting cages, and even an indoor facility with a swimming pool. There's also gardens scattered around the facility which are maintained by a large team of groundskeepers, one of which holds a whitestone statue of a beautiful woman holding a spear in her right hand and a lantern in the left.

Club activities and class comradery are very encouraged at Kurtzpel, as is competition among the students. Tests are held with scores being ranked for public display, higher rankings are rewarded where lower standings are punished. Afterall, in order to even gain the attention of the Academy's benefactors you'd need to be extremely gifted in the first place. These students are the cream of the crop an have gotten to that point through whatever means necessary, by their own hand or their parents. To uphold that standard the teachers are ruthless on the students with their performance having no restraint in enacting disciplinary measures and often expelling students who fall below a certain grading average.









Alano is roughly 45 square miles in size making it large enough to host the school and the town around it, with a small circumference of forest around it's borders to masque the constructs from ships passing by. There is a constant surveillance along these borders with armed guards patrolling the beaches to dissuade any curious travelers who happen upon Alano on accident.

The school sits in the centermost of the island and although the academy is a marvel of architecture it was constructed with the forestline in mind to shroud structures. The whitewood trees on Alano are quite tall but this sentiment is shared among all the buildings even in the town. The town isn't as fancily designed as the academy instead being constructed of more typical painted concrete and brick, but the islander aesthetic does come through at the more leisurely locations, with tiki bars and totem poles at some locations.

The people who live on the island that aren't school staff or students are employed by Kurtzpel's benefactors to keep the town organic and lively. Many of these employees took the job happily as they were financially compensated quite well, and were even given free housing on the island. Because of this a lot of these employees even opted to take their families along with them to Alano which resulted in daycares and children facilities being built afterwards as well.


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