Poor Anna and Junko, their dreams and hopes of greatness blown away like smoke to the wind.
@January@Letter Bee Is it fine for Mikhail to conclude that Donovan caused the unnatural calm that he had felt? Sure, nothing wrong with that. Mikhail can believe whatever he wants to. And Banjo also noted that the sigils were giving off enough illumination to reveal their faces and whatnot.
However, Letter Bee on the other hand, as the narrator for that character, shouldn't write in a way that makes it appear that he already knows this information. I'm probably not making sense, so I'll try to come up with an example.Anyway, I'm well aware that I may be wrong, so call me out if you think so. At least I can explain the reasons behind my decision.
- "Mikhail was certain that it was Donovan that was causing all of this" - This is definitely fine. Right?
- Mikhail's voice lost its bite, due to the fact that he was unable to muster much passion in the unnatural calm given by Donovan - This is probably not okay. Instead of Mikhail just assuming that Don was the cause, the narrator actually confirms it. I mean, I don't think that's part of your job description.
Anyway, off to do some updates.
@January Well I was thinking of having her drench someone. She would think Varus would enjoy that. But yeah, fog and all haha
@Riffus Maximus
Alright my dude, made the edit based off what would likely happen if a teenage boy slammed into a panther, naturally adding in the awkward occurrences anime is infamous for.