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Poor Anna and Junko, their dreams and hopes of greatness blown away like smoke to the wind.
@January@Letter Bee Is it fine for Mikhail to conclude that Donovan caused the unnatural calm that he had felt? Sure, nothing wrong with that. Mikhail can believe whatever he wants to. And Banjo also noted that the sigils were giving off enough illumination to reveal their faces and whatnot.

However, Letter Bee on the other hand, as the narrator for that character, shouldn't write in a way that makes it appear that he already knows this information. I'm probably not making sense, so I'll try to come up with an example.
  • "Mikhail was certain that it was Donovan that was causing all of this" - This is definitely fine. Right?
  • Mikhail's voice lost its bite, due to the fact that he was unable to muster much passion in the unnatural calm given by Donovan - This is probably not okay. Instead of Mikhail just assuming that Don was the cause, the narrator actually confirms it. I mean, I don't think that's part of your job description.
Anyway, I'm well aware that I may be wrong, so call me out if you think so. At least I can explain the reasons behind my decision.

Anyway, off to do some updates.


To add a bit more to it, while it is not technically meta-gaming (or at least a major game-breaking one) because what was written does not affect the other characters in any way. But luke Scio said, an author's narration should usually be based on the character's point of view, not information given out of character. And this is where exactly we might be having an issue here. When writing a post, you should exclude anything being said OoC (except plans and cooperative ideas) and focus more on the aspect viewed by the character being played.
I could change mine to something more like yellowish. Chose orange 'cause of Akasha's eyes. Need something wild for color.
@January Well I was thinking of having her drench someone. She would think Varus would enjoy that. But yeah, fog and all haha


Concentrate all of the fog's humidity into a single mass, and drop ot all on the instructor!
Just as panther Akasha leaped towards her intended target, one of the guy with whom he was speaking with had the reflexes to use his power and throw himself in between the panther and her "prey". The new boy's arms turned jet black, a metallic tint to it with blue energy crackling. Whatever that was, it looked like a very convenient power, and it looked strong as well.

The first thought that occurred in Akasha's mind before the darkness came to be, was he just like her? Could he transform himself into a beast? If so, to what kind of dangerous animal these claws belonged? Her train of thought disrupted as the guy positionned himself in a readied stance to block the panther's jump. Was he really that confident to stop a large feline predator with pure might? Akasha's heart was beating faster, excited to be about to collide with that kind of person.

And then the darkness befell on the area. At first, it seemed like fog just quickly settled in, but then it turned all black, just as if night had fallen just as quickly as the mist thickened. It was no use, the panther was already in the air when this all happened, there was no way Akasha could move mid-air. Even if leopards are gifted with nocturnal vision, this was no natural darkness. Even in this case, she could not see anything even at arm's reach.

And so, Panthera collided with the demon-looking arms guy. When her chest first impacted,, she could sense a tremendous amount of force trying to hold her off, and that caught Akasha by surprise. By the gods above, could he actually manage to lift her off easily like that? But then, it seemed as if the darkness made the guy lose his balance, and despite a respectable effort to hold the panther off, they both fell on the ground, Akasha yet again on top.

Looks like it was her win again at this game of "King of the Hill", but this time Akasha felt as if she just barely managed to get out on top of this round. Such potential strength, the panther girl kind of wanted to see more of it.

Sitting on top of her newly defeated foe, the panther approached her face close to the man's face. She tried to see what he looked like more up-close, but it was no use with the thick black fog. At this moment, all she could do was to wait for the fog to clear up.

Then, the black leopard began licking the boy's face, as a sign of growing affection towards him.

"Hmm~, you're strong! Akasha likes you!" The panther purred.

Not staying for long in this state, considering she had already won, Akasha would've returned to her normal self by the time the fog would fade. When that time would come, everyone around would probably see the scene of a messy-looking young woman sitting on a guy's chest with her face merely inches away from his.
@Mercurial whoever gets set on fire, my character will put it out.


A win-win situation!
@Riffus Maximus
Alright my dude, made the edit based off what would likely happen if a teenage boy slammed into a panther, naturally adding in the awkward occurrences anime is infamous for.


Oh my, such an unexpected turn of events. For that, Nihiri will be subject to Akasha's "special treatment" bwhahahaha!

Oh anime, what a source of inspiration you have become for character developments!
@hagroden

WHY YOUUUU

Seeing it just went pitch-dark as she leapt at Donovan, no way Akasha can change directions now. I give you carte blanche for any actual contact with Nihiri. You can decide the outcome of it as well, if you want to edit that unto your post.

I might only post her reaction after the block and the darkness clearing up, or Scio's update
Same here. Although... she might be more than a simple love interest. Others might become her snack interests instead, hahaha!
I like just how this trial turned out to be a disordely chaos in just a matter of few posts. It's like Akasha thought! To each their own, no need to take others into account when you got to show off your might! It's the law of the jungle!
THE THRILL IS JUST AT ITS STARTING POINT!

God I love this RP
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