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The Next Step

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Auriel felt better when Fer placed his hand upon her shoulder and again showed his gratitude for her being with them. She gave him a light smile and nodded before looking to Cole. She didn't know where the bespoke cave was, thus she couldn't really be of much help in tracking Rayla down. "Rayla will likely go to ground when she hears, or rather, doesn't hear about her mens' success here. She'll be difficult to find without a skilled tracker."

She was glad to return to Melromarc however. The energy from all of the activity in every direction did well to lighten her mood. It was always a wonderful feeling to return from battles and see people who haven't been affected by conflict. She knew that the first wave would change that. It'd be a quick and harsh realization that the end truly would be near. Morale would become resource to be managed by the powers that be. And as the waves would progress, it'd only become more and more scarce. Auriel was taken out of her reverie of the waves when she and her companions were taken aside by another mysterious woman. She watched the woman cautiously, still not entirely convinced by a simple signet ring that she represented the king. The same thoughts from before crept into her mind. Why the secrecy? Why the veiled messengers? Such things seemed odd for a royal assignment.

Auriel was hoping the woman would have valuable or actionable information about Rayla, but she only reaffirmed what they already knew. Rayla would be a challenging fight, and they'd need more hands. Precisely what they had returned to Melromarc for. At least they received confirmation that Marcino's drunken arse was still planted at the same tavern they had first met him at. Auriel still wasn't all that fond of Marcino. Perhaps it was just his jaded and grim perspective of life and death that left a sour taste in her mouth. But she had to concede that he was a valuable ally to have if they were going to track down Rayla Winters. Auriel kept her mouth shut, however. She had learned that her personal commentary was stepping on their room to make their own decisions and their growth as heroes. She'd begrudgingly accept Marcino along in this endeavor without complaining.

As the heroes both spoke with the woman, her mind drifted back to the impending waves. Would they be ready? Would Flin and that bratty Matsunaga both be ready as well? She sure hoped so. If the skirmishes with the hordes had taught her anything, it was that the monsters and fiends had no care for the skill of their opponents. All they cared about was violence and wanton destruction. Ultimately, it was the waves that mattered. They were the entire reason why Cole, Fer, Matsunaga, and Flin were summoned in the first place. "You two should go and see Marcino. I need to visit the cathedral and look upon the Dragon Hourglass. It would be a grave mistake to lose sight of our greater purpose."
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Chapter 1

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Ephraim Quaid sat in his office, his body slouched back and his feet crossed far in front of him as he stared out over Asgard's newest conquest. What a prize it was. His sharp eyes traced over the brass and copper skyline as it wrapped over the horizon. Thousands of kilometers of urban sprawl was now Ephraim's finest achievement. Despite the sheer size of the city, Ephraim had managed to take it in only a matter of days, with minimal loss of life. It was a strategic masterpiece that would go down in the history books as the perfect example of military invasion. Ephraim knew this brought him one step closer to reaching the top of the Asgardian military, not just this mighty legion. But there was one thing holding him back, a stain on the Quaid name. And that stain was somewhere in the seemingly infinite streets of Tyberia. Ephraim furrowed his brows as he mulled over something, "Where are you..." Ephraim said to himself, tapping his index finger upon his high cheek bones as he thought.

He could see everything from his personal aerial warship. But despite everything being in his view, the details were easy to miss. He cruised at a comfortable altitude of five thousand feet above the highest towers of Tyberia's city center. He was always bothered when a cloud passed over his ship, how dare they. Asgard had mastered nature, yet for all its power, a simple cloud obscure Ephraim's searching gaze and push him back into his office space. Ephraim let out a sigh and span his chair to face his desk again. Papers and classified documents were strewn about his desk. Yet, despite the chaos, there was a very clear method to the madness. He knew exactly what to grab and where to find it whenever he needed it. Ephraim eyed the most prominent folder front and center on his desk. Stamped in large, red, superimposed letters across the front were the words 'Top Secret' and 'Privileged Eyes Only'. The folder had a wax sealed that was stamped with the emblem with the emblem of a Zephyr's eye. The Vigil. The seal had long since been broken by the General. But it couldn't wait any longer.

Ephraim opened the folder flipped through the sizeable document inside. He sat back in his chair again, reaching into his desk to pack tobacco into his ornate pipe carved out of wood from Yggdrasil itself. Ephraim took a puff and pressed down on a buzzer. In seconds, an elven secretary walked through the large doors of his office. "Yes, General? Is there anything you need?"

Ephraim looked at the secretary as she stood straight and proper at the door. "Let us begin."

The secretary watched as he signed off on the top secret document. She quickly stepped forward and resealed the file, then left the room with it at an expediated pace. When the doors closed, Ephraim was bathed in sunlight as his ship cruised out of the clouds. He span in his chair and looked out over the city again. Smoke drifted from his nostrils as he stared out the window, once again lost in thought. While he stared in the distance, a voice spoke up from one of the many sofas in his office. "Are you sure this is the right decision to make, Ephraim? While he's down there somewhere?"

Ephraim didn't turn his gaze from the window. He simply puffed again from his pipe. "He made his choice."

Ephraim heard the figure in his room pull himself up from the sofa. His heavy, plated boots clanked on the marble floor. It approached him from beyond his desk and leaned forward. A stack of papers falling to the floor. Ephraim looked over at the fallen paperwork. He'll have his secretary pick those up when she returns. Now that Ephraim had invested energy in turning his head to the paperwork, he committed and span once again to face to the Aesir. "Find him before it happens, James."
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"Goooood morning, Tyberia! It's your favorite broadcasting orc, Rok Grom-do reporting live from the Printing Press! Now... I know what you're all thinking. It's the same thing that I've been thinking all day! What on Yggdrasil was with those earthquakes last night?! It's the talk of the town today, I was almost late for the show because every co-worker and their dogs wanted to talk to me about the quakes. While I don't have any answers to give, I can however tell you that a dwarf-gnome team of experts are launching an expedition beyond Tyberia's undercity to investigate the strange quakes. The leading theory now is that those pesky ratoskr folk blew something up again, but I'm sure we'll know for good in the coming day-"

The radio was switched to a different channel. Kaidan Malcador rolled his eyes, "I'm surprised Ada herself didn't choose to be the host of her company's radio show. Everyone knows her voice is as sweet as honey. Instead we get to listen to this brute's voice every morning. Can't stand it."

Kaidan opted to read off of the news paper to get his information, picking up the crumpled cluster of folded paper. "Come on, Malcador, what do you have against orcs?" his mechanic said as he pulled himself up from the magicar's motivator. He was a human, thirty in appearance.

Kaidan bent the newspaper backward to stare at the mechanic, "Nothing. But you have to agree with me that they don't have the prettiest voices. Why not a pointer? Or even just a regular joe?"

The mechanic shrugged, "Who knows. Ada works in mysterious ways after all."

"Hardly mysterious, Ada's using that orc because he's simple minded and easy to lie to." Kaidan said, flipping the paper back up to keep reading.

The mechanic closed the hood of the magicar and leaned against it while wiping his hands with a rag, "Sheesh, almost sounds like you know her. Say... You're a man of high stature... Do you actually know her?!"

Kaidan nodded slowly, glad that the paper hid his head from the mechanic's view. The mechanic blinked when he didn't get a response from Kaidan. "Right, well... Your magicar should be good to go. But I want to test drive before I sign it off back to you. Could take a while, need me to give you a lift somewhere? I know how busy you've been as of late."

Kaidan's eyes traced over the articles in the paper for a while longer before crumpling it back up and tossing it aside. He got up from his seat and climbed into the back of the car. "I have a meeting at Baron Hesser's manor today. Take me there."

The mechanic climbed into the driver seat, "You got it boss! Hey, that actually sounds kinda nice. When are you gonna put me on your payroll, Malcador? You got way more money than that crusty old stubber. A man's gotta eat, y'know!"

Kaidan watched out the window as the magicar backed out of the garage and into the streets of Tyberia. "I'll consider it when you stop asking so many questions."

The mechanic stared back at him through the rear view mirror, "Come on, Malcador! You know I'm just naturally curious."

Kaidan looked back at him through the mirror, "You're also a loud mouth who can hardly keep anything quiet. And I for one value confidence."

There was a long and awkward silence that followed. Kaidan preferred that though. As they drove through the streets, he saw many Asgardian patrols on the sidewalks pestering and practically interrogating people. He look at his stopwatch to check the time, seeing that he might be late for the meeting. Great... Worse yet, there was an Asgardian checkpoint coming up. "Go the long way. There's some extra sap in it you."

"Damned Asgardians... They sure are making life for the average citizen difficult... Why don't they just move onto the next city and let us go on with our lives?"

Kaidan shrugged as he continued to stare out the window. He looked up, seeing the large imperial warship looming in the sky above the city center. "Who knows..."




Auriel looked over the aftermath of their skirmish. She had seen violence before, and on a far worse scale when the hordes attacked. She was rather desensitized to it now, especially after having her own close brush with death. She heard Fer ask if she was alright, which made her golden eyes turn from the bodies that lay at her feet to the shield hero. She smiled faintly and nodded once, "Yes. Are you?" Her words were soft, perhaps even a bit pained that things had gone this way. She did warn the bandits, yet still...

When Fer patted himself down and appeared healthy, Auriel let out a breath of relief. She looked over to her other charge, the sword hero, and saw that he was having troubles coming to terms with the death he had dealt. Auriel walked over to Cole and placed a gentle hand on his shoulder. As Fer had felt earlier, her touch was energizing. Any scrapes and cuts that Cole might have unknowingly endured began healing slowly. Auriel's hand wasn't meant to heal, though it sure was a handy addition, rather it was to calm him. "They made their choice, Cole. And, as cruel as it is, better them than you. Your fate is for a higher calling, theirs on the other hand..." She looked sadly at the dead bandits. "I will give them their last rites... To prevent their souls from suffering more torment after death."

Auriel's hand left Cole's shoulder, along with that energizing sensation. She stepped in a rough middle-point between the staggered dead and held her hands together softly. She closed her eyes and tilted her head forward, while her wings spread out wide. Despite the sun being gone beyond the horizon, Auriel was as radiant as ever. The only thing marring the angelic sight was the spatters of blood spread across her white wings. "Heroes of Olde, forgive the souls I send to you this night... Their path turned to darkness, but now they see only light. With my battle ended, there is no more reason for hatred. Only sadness and regret that more life was lost... I beg you, Heroes... Watch over them as they find their new paths at your sides."

A golden radiance similar to the light she emanated when summoning the Bright Lance enveloped her hands, and quickly spread out to the dead bodies. They glowed for only a few seconds, before everything went dark again. Auriel let out a long breath and folded her wings back. She opened her eyes and looked back to Cole and Fer. "We can rest assured now that no one will be tormented by their spirits."

Auriel could feel a frog in her throat. The last time she had delivered the Rites of Passing was after a particularly violent skirmish with the Hordes. The troops she was with that day were almost entirely consumed by the Horde's rage. She remembered one particular soldier, a boy just barely past his seventeenth nameday who had gotten his parent's permission to become a soldier. She didn't know the young warrior very well, but his death was particularly hard on Auriel. She had seen so many orphans grow too old to remain under the Church's care, and march off with a sword in hand to far off battles, only to never be seen again. Auriel cleared her throat to force the hard feeling back, and found her steely resolve again. "Our hunt has only just begun. Rayla Winters is still at large. We can't stop here, not yet."
Oh my god I'm sorry! I totally forgot to post x.x

I can get one tonight after I've finished my day up.
@Andreyich I'm always accommodating for new CS's, though it might not be approved into the RP right away. But given that you'll be busy until the end of December, I imagine we'll be down a person or two to make the room. Feel free to draft one up!


Alright, so I'll start by saying this character is an improvement over the previous one. But it still has some of the same nagging issues that I had pointed last time.

- First off, while I like pacifist characters, I feel that, given the theme of this RP, it doesn't make much logical sense for him to be kicking off the second Tyberian Revolution with the others. The enemy is hostile, and historically the Revolutionaries have risen up with violence to cast out tyrants in their city. As a pacifist, there is little this character can influence on the major set pieces of the story which are the Resistance Operations that the player group will undertake. These operations are, more often than not, violent in their intent. Bearing that in mind, this character would once again be sidelined for the high points of the RP. Pacifists do have a place in this world, just not really for the particular subject matter of this specific RP.

- Having a logistician is also fine, though it once again is a role that would be better suited for an Ally/NPC. Given that there are some logistics in this RP, it does make sense to have a character with some knowledge on it. So that is a good thing in itself, but it does then step on the idea that the group should find ways to manage their resources by assuming authority over it. On that, resources and logistics should be compartmentalized and handled by the subject matter experts (i.e. manasmiths would know best what to do with mana crystals, gnomes would know best what to do with machinery, etc.). So taking agency as a logistician, when viewing it from that perspective, diminishes the role and might not offer a very wholesome experience for you. Additionally, it would also be a difficult thing to properly, and compellingly roleplay over a long term.

- I'm honestly not too much of a fan of the political aspect. While sure, it'd make sense that a time of innovation also sees the birth of more modern political structures, it really doesn't have much of a place in the narrative of this RP. It was would be overshadowed and quite frankly, cast aside by much larger problems (going to avoid spoilers but the stakes are higher than one might think). Plus there is an intended end for this RP, and I'm really going to drive home the focus on the resistance and their attempts to liberate the city so there isn't much room to squeeze in additional politics beyond what is already in my plans.

Much of this could be mitigated in a change of some finer details in his personality. Perhaps he hates violence but views it as necessary when his idea of faith is obstructed by another power (such as Asgard). It would make him more zealous, and thus a bit more extreme in his religious faith in the way you originally wanted, while also making him less of a paperweight on the Resistance Operations. To expand on that. Perhaps he views the Asgardian's worshipping of the Zephyr as heretical and blasphemous, and that they've forfeited their right to live in the eyes of the Mother, and so Bailey acts on his authority as a Holy Father to execute them. Maybe while he was a Pauper Knight, he spent some time in the Warrior Caste, or possibly even just trained in it, so he knows how to fight, or at the very least defend himself. For Bailey's socialist political views, a simple line of text can be put in his personality to reflect his political stance, but it admittedly wont play a very important part in the overall story.

I definitely don't hate the character, and I want to point out that there are some aspects that I do really like. I love the idea of a religious zealot. I like characters who have a biased view of the world and its organizations as it makes a more believable character. I also really like the idea of a scholar who has read every bit of text to try and uncover more truth about his goddess. These are all things that I as the GM and architect of the story can use to involve your character a lot more. So I would definitely encourage you to stick with this character, only to change certain aspects to better fit the theme.

@vancexentan I can pump one out this weekend!
Just bumping this thread to prove it still lives. For those still interested in joining, the cut off for character sheets is Friday. There is also a discord server for this where pretty much all of our communication is happening.


Very much like this character! Haven't had a sniper in any previous Yggdrasil RP before, so this will be fun to work with. Tiny, inconsequential nitpick that doesn't change the outcome, a few of your Tyberia's are spelt as 'Tiberia', while some others aren't. But I ain't no English teacher, just thought I'd point it out instead of dock you marks. :P

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