I'm laughing way too hard at this.
Lawdy.
Edit :
Prisk said
No need to apologize. There is plenty of time.I’m sure that you get compliments regarding your prose on a regular basis. It is a bit too purple for my taste, but I’m not going to prevent you from writing the way you do. However, keep in mind that may not be within everyone’s comprehension—I just need to say it for the record. But, then again, this is the ‘advanced’ section. You are good on personality and biography.Your limit break somewhat reminded me of Vincent’s limit break in FFVII. It felt as if it was obscure due to the prose, but when I picked out the parts that actually describe what it does, it was quite clear anyway and anchored in two elements: fire and dark. As it stands now, limit breaks cannot really be ‘overpowered,’ as all of them instantly kill all enemies anyway. It’s just an aesthetic choice. So do not worry about that.
In respect of you, and
everyone else, I'm willing to "tone it down" if you all would prefer. It's not the first time I would be asked to do so anyways.
And you caught me, I was at the point in game where I acquired Vincent and he gave me an idea, that and Dirge of Cerberus played a rather important part. Her Limit Break is inspired by such, but thank you for clearing it all up! I'll keep it as is and potentially add to it.
