Edited my CS.

Name: Eika "Berserker" Munashii
Appearance:

Anything different from picture above?: Black hair.
Magic Power: "Berserker" state. When overwhelmed with any form of negative emotion, she enters a state where her strength ascends beyond the capacities of a simply human being, to the point that she could punch through walls without flinching, tear people in half without problems, and her cells speed up healing processes to the extent of dulling out pain, rendering her unable to feel it completely. Tranqs of an elephant-tier are recommended in order to sedate her so she calms down, as the "Berserker" state does now allow her to recognize anyone as friend or foe -- just people causing her unneeded pains and stress.

How he/she became insane: She lived in something of an abusive household. Her mother and father did not intend on having her, yet they married to attempt supporting their spawn. Incompatibility was too large, similarity too small, their relationship quickly switched from an attempt at happiness to a consistency of abuse and fighting. She was young, and seeing her parents fighting at a young age, yelling, screaming, breaking things round them, made her see them as monsters at times -- one or the other, both at once, the result was the same.

She was young when her mother was lost. Was it quick? No, not at all. Stabbed to death time and time again, her father dragged her into the closet of their bedroom and shut the door once her corpse was settled in nicely. It'd be the secret she was supposed to keep -- and for a few years, she managed to. But the breaking point came when her father attempted to off her the same way he did in her mother. There was only one way to keep herself safe -- to protect herself: take him down and do what she thought was right.

Time and time again, she took the knife to his chest, screams tearing from her throat as she continued to stab into him long after he had died, unable to stop under the blur of red vision that overtook her ignorant demeanor. When police arrived on the scene, she had to be taken down by ten separate taser attempts before she passed out. By the time she was down, she'd smashed a car in, and the force had suffered three casualties.

Insanity Traits: She brings a whole new meaning to the concept of "keeping skeletons in the closet". She is kept away from doors, especially any doors leading to storage spaces, due to an uncontrollable behavior of taking things or people that emotionally disturb her and locking them in. As if it is an improbable reaction, she will even hide herself inside of closets to keep from being found -- yet, will not fight when she is found. Her insanity is calm in its form, but her ways of looking at things makes it obvious that she is not quite balanced, as she cannot grasp the appropriate method of handling issues. Even when her "Berserker" state is entered, the initial levels will include her attempting to place someone into a room or a closet as a last-ditch effort to calm down before it gets out of hand.
Country of origin: Mother originated from Beijing, China. Father originated from London, England. Eika was born in Seoul, South Korea.
Backstory/History: Insanity area should cover a basic vagueness of her background. Gotta leave something to imagination!
Personality:
- Impulsive
- Quiet
- Sneaky
- Rendered apathetic at times.
- Fast-thinking

How long has your character been in Smile Asylum?: She has been in Smile Asylum since she was twelve, making her stay a good seven years so far.
Trinkets: She keeps a single key around her neck, dulled down to be incapable of being a weapon, and decorated with a silver skull for the handle-area. In order to attempt keeping Eika from finding more free time to keep moving things around, she was also allowed to bring a black rabbit plush clothed in a little red and white robe. She's named it "Alice".

Finish the bracket on the first IMG,please

I'm bad at QQcode. ;A;

Anyways, fixed.

And bonus points if the secret reference is found!

I really wanna say that pic's based on minecraft

nonsequitur said
Edited my CS.

I'm actually a pretty big fan of the changes. It seems to fit together more coherently now. It's also interesting because Christianity has always had an interesting relationship with the concept of fire. It's the ultimate cleaning solution when you're purging the impure after all! (Hehehe...) But of course there's the duality with hell and well.. it's pretty cool.

Alice in Wonderland? Kingdom Hearts?

Edit: @WatermelonTango: I'm glad you like it! It's much closer to his original version too, now that I think about it.

I have revised my own, Is this closer to the ideal cs? Or is there more work to be done? If there is I am more than willing.

OtomostheCrazy said
I really wanna say that pic's based on minecraft

nonsequitur said
Alice in Wonderland? Kingdom Hearts?Edit: @WatermelonTango: I'm glad you like it! It's much closer to his original version too, now that I think about it.

BOTH ARE CORRECT!

Though the Enderman one's a bit more in-depth.

>personality that makes it so she always keeps moving things into different places
>Enderman!

I have finally decided on what ability I want my character to have XD
Osteokinesis!

Bone manipulation, eh? That can be fun if you don't make it op, which can be easy to do sometimes.

Hey, is this still open?

Scallop said
Hey, is this still open?

YUUUP

@nonsequiter: Massive fan of the changes. It flows better, makes a lot more sense, and I love the addition of Christianity. Approved!
@demntedgrin: Still some minor things ;-; You havent exactly specified how long shes been in smile asylum, just that she's been thrown in there. Also a few grammar mistakes, and you can only have one trinket, not 2.
@Shiinen: No matter how many times I read over your power I can't understand it. Could you explain it to me? From what I can understand, it's overpowered. You can summon creautres, essentially go anywhere you want, and lock people away into the shadow zone? Maybe I just understood it wrong.

Would Thermo manipulation be cosnsidered OP?

Scallop said
Would Thermo manipulation be cosnsidered OP?

As long as you don't abuse it.

@EVERYONE: YOUR POWERS HAVE LIMITS; using your power is exerting. IF you have thermo manipulation (not trying to pick on Scallop, just an example), if you crank up the heat to 1000 Celcius youre probably going to damn near kill yourself.

Does my character's insanity limit her power enough or should I add a time limit of some sort?

Vulpes said
Does my character's insanity limit her power enough or should I add a time limit of some sort?

No time limit is needed, but if you use it too much there will be consequences (for your character):

Inuyasha said if you crank up the heat to 1000 Celcius youre probably going to damn near kill yourself.

Is that from the mental strain or the temperature being 1000 degrees Celsius? I know I put a maximum temperature on Sebastian's pyrokinesis, but it's not going to be that hot most of the time (my focus was more on his control).

Inuyasha said
No time limit is needed, but if you use it too much there will be consequences (for your character):

I can imagine. She is already very annoying as a person. :D