Bright_Ops said
Not my longest post, but its there.

Sweet. Sometimes brevity is the way to go.

I got my response up. Ponytinus is the ponified version of the philosopher Plotinus. The quotes that Tail and Dancer use are from one of Plotinus' Enneads.

Hmmm, the more I think about it, the more I feel I should shorten my recent entry regarding Star Dancer, so Torrential can get some input.

Edit: The original idea was to get Snow Tail to introduce herself as not to bog down the story, but I fear I'm going too fast.

Did a bit of changing in my new post, but nothing really major. Just thought Tail would probably want to warn any pony handling her hidden claws.

Could I join this If so, this is where my CS is going to be.

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Name
Coffee Beans

Species
Unicorn Pony.

Gender
Male.

Coat/Eyes/Mane/Cutie Mark
(Their appearance in general. Go into as much or as little detail as you want. Add weapons, cloaks, whatever. Please try to keep a ‘normal’ color scheme. Pretty much anything is allowed, but be realistic. If you make your guy black with blood red hair, I’ll bite my tongue in disdain, but I’ll still pass them. If you give them rainbow colored hair, bat wings, and golden hooves, I shouldn’t have to tell you what will happen. Arrow. Knee. You do the math. If you’re an alicorn, I do encourage a little ‘oomf’ to some trait of your character. Celestia’s hair flows with solar wind, and Luna’s is filled with stars. I see no reason why a Nature god, for example, couldn’t have flowers grow and die in their footsteps or such.)

Cutie marks should obviously correlate to your special talent. However, in regards to Divine Beings, you are allowed to have a bit more of an abstract cutiemark.)

Special Talent
Coffee Bean's special talent is the ability to make the best coffees in Equestria, hand-made or not, he makes the coffee to the person's taste.

Occupation
He is the owner of the 'Hot-N-Ready Cafe' and a coffee maker.

Affiliation
(Is your pony loyal to any of the houses or dieties?)

Personality
(Don’t need to know the inner psychological working of your character in every expressed detail. But give us something that makes him seem real. You should put a few good lines into this part and flesh them out. One line, one-dimensional, or stereotypical characters will be rejected.)

Back-story
(For their bio, I’m being generous: You may put as much or as little as you want here.The reason why is because there ARE things people generally want to reveal via story or plot lines. They have history or things they want to tell other characters. There for, no need to give away those juicy parts, and can keep the entire bio vague if you want. You still need to give us SOMETHING, but like personality, make it a good paragraph or two and just make it something to chew on.)

Other
(Literally, anything else you folks can think of. Anything you want to add or put here about the character that you couldn't find a spot for.)

AND I LIVE!!!!!!! Just posted for the first time in I think a couple of days. Anyway enjoy if you please.

grimdarkenigma said
AND I LIVE!!!!!!! Just posted for the first time in I think a couple of days. Anyway enjoy if you please.

Nice moments there, especially with Thea. Very cool :)

Tai Falkenburg said
Nice moments there, especially with Thea. Very cool :)

Thank you :).

Did Torrential just... try to flirt with Snow & Dancer? o_O

Oh not at all. It is a genuine offer to give them a ride out of Earthborn territory.

He may have flirted with Star Dancer through. It isn't like the huntress is the only one that can flirt with ponies, now is it?

Please. Theá doesn't flirt. She seduces! ;)

As strange as it sounds, I can't help but feel that Theá and Torrential's relationship is somewhat strained. Possibly with other alicorns as well.

I honestly see Torrential as an alicorn that encountered his own nightmare form very shortly after the dawn of creation and instead of forcing it down and turning it into a completely separate being he embraced and merged with it. Sometimes the world is a dark, violent and angry place and Torrential accepts that part of himself fully; Thus why he can go from being a kindly father figure to a complete and utterly remorseless sadist when the situation calls for it.

It also doesn't help that Theá tends to deal with her enemies as accurately as an arrow through the eye from three hundred or more yards where Torrential's way of dealing with his enemies tends to maximize collateral damage and civilian casualties.

Theá doesn't dislike any of her siblings, she'd go so far as to say that she loves every one of them. So for Theá's part, I don't think she'd see her and Torrential's relationship as strained... as for how she deals with enemies. It really depends on the enemy. You saw what happened to Old Hoof xD

But more often than not, she does deal with her enemies as you described.

Hey guys, just a heads up but my posts might be a bit spotty for a while, I don't have access to the Internet except through using the university campus library so that's a real pain in the arse. I'll be okay to return fully on the 22, but right now its going to be a while between posts.

Snow Tail: Oh, I think dancer may have a crush on Torrnetial :3

EldritchOne said
Hey guys, just a heads up but my posts might be a bit spotty for a while, I don't have access to the Internet except through using the university campus library so that's a real pain in the arse. I'll be okay to return fully on the 22, but right now its going to be a while between posts.

No problem. The Internet is a fickle mistress, I know how it can be an issue.

I also have quite a bit on my plate as of late, so my replies will be slow. Apologies to Grimdark

kapuchu said
I also have quite a bit on my plate as of late, so my replies will be slow. Apologies to Grimdark

Its cool. Been busy as a bee as of late too so no worries.

It's certainly that time of the year were school is starting up again.

edit: Ack, page glitched and ended up double posting. Sorry.

*waves at Grimdark*

I had Crashing say something you had basically already told me. I hope it's okay. If not, just say so and I'll edit it out. (It's just a single sentence)

Alright and posted. Will get Astral's in later need to work on it. Anyway I'm cool with a line or two as long as its in character. Besides I liked the post. Oh and Tai I didn't forget about Charter's info just want to wait on that for a bit. Anyway hope you guys like been working on my technique.