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EldritchOne said
I will try and post today, but I dunno how well constructed it will be though, I am severely depressed... I need a distraction.


Oh dear...
Have this for the time being. Hope it helps: [+]
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I tried to give off the feeling of stepping into a wolf den in this one, a balance of curiosity at an intruder with an edge of distinctive danger and violence on the tip of every action.

She has got Scalpels attention and interest, now she just has to make sure she doesn't take a wrong step.
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Interesting... I'll have my post up in a few.
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1,9k words. That... got a bit longer than I anticipated.
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More reads for me :P
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kapuchu said
1,9k words. That... got a bit longer than I anticipated.


How do you people manage these word counts.

My poor brain is confuzzled.
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Monochromatic Rainbow said
How do you people manage these word counts.My poor brain is confuzzled.


I... wrote. I had stuff in mind, and I didn't know how to shorten it down <.<
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kapuchu said
I... wrote. I had stuff in mind, and I didn't know how to shorten it down <.<


0.o
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0.o


I wanted Amaretto's travel to be more than just "He's at A. And now he's at B!" I want stuff to happen along the way. Not sure if I'm gonna do more stops like this.
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I wanted Amaretto's travel to be more than just "He's at A. And now he's at B!" I want stuff to happen along the way. Not sure if I'm gonna do more stops like this.


Twas a good idea, Amber gonna be a reoccurring character?
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No clue xD I'm still thinking about it.
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I wanted Amaretto's travel to be more than just "He's at A. And now he's at B!" I want stuff to happen along the way. Not sure if I'm gonna do more stops like this.


The style kinda reminds me of EE Knight's The Age of Fire. He had a similiar point a then point b styling. Overall good post liked it
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The style kinda reminds me of EE Knight's The Age of Fire. He had a similiar point a then point b styling. Overall good post liked it


Looking forward to your stuff Grim, can't wait for what Crashing and Co are going to get up to, and that dashing rascal Astral.
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I tried to give off the feeling of stepping into a wolf den in this one, a balance of curiosity at an intruder with an edge of distinctive danger and violence on the tip of every action.She has got Scalpels attention and interest, now she just has to make sure she doesn't take a wrong step.


Certainly felt that the edge of danger in the entry, nice work.

Lens, like most Scholars sent out on missions, have had the sharp end pointed at them so may times they're just used to the danger. This explains her reaction.
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Certainly felt that the edge of danger in the entry, nice work. Lens, like most Scholars sent out on missions, have had the sharp end pointed at them so may times they're just used to the danger. This explains her reaction.


Coolo, most likely Scalpel will be a bit surprised but relatively pleased with her enthusiasm -although questioning the existence of her survival instincts :P-, I'll get the next 'un up tomorrow.
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I'll try to get something in soon, everyone.

Got a heap of stuff to do again, but hopefully I'll be able to bulldoze through my work and write a thing.

That is all.
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1,200 words in this one. Not bad but I've got longer one's on me of that I'm sure. Hope you guys like.
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And so Herr Dok shows what accumulates when he settles down for some considerable amount of time, like a big show off.

Also we get some world building and nods! woo!

Not to mention the subtle reference to my most cherished Lovecraft story.

Anyhoo, enjoy.
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And so Herr Dok shows what accumulates when he settles down for some considerable amount of time, like a big show off. Also we get some world building and nods! woo! Not to mention the subtle reference to my most cherished Lovecraft story. Anyhoo, enjoy.


Very nice. Loved it
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1,200 words in this one. Not bad but I've got longer one's on me of that I'm sure. Hope you guys like.

The last part with Crashing was rather effective - I could see the the darkness in his eyes and the gravitas when he spoke those words. It captured a force of nature ready to strike. Nice :)

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And so Herr Dok shows what accumulates when he settles down for some considerable amount of time, like a big show off. Also we get some world building and nods! woo! Not to mention the subtle reference to my most cherished Lovecraft story. Anyhoo, enjoy.


Yeah, I tossed in a few Mythos shout outs in the previous posts myself. I also enjoyed the newest entry, reminding me of walking through an ancient library. very cool :D
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