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http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/727/posts/ooc?page=290#post-2051982

Other then the dragon, which I rather have Lucius's thoughts on it since I literally read his and Yosh's conversation in the chatroom over it, the rest is alright with me. I see no red tape concerns.
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UserName: MusesFallFirst

Character name: Aeripthyx "Pyx" Felisa

Age: 25

Mageblood type: Clima

Favoured Magic Class: Aeromancy

Previous Magic training: (No official training, you'll all be Novices.)

Race: Snow Elf

Appearance: A short elf, even by her people's standards. She has her hair tied back in two rather funny bulbous pink pigtails. She owns a pair of goggles to protect her eyes from the random bursts of air, alongside any debris from poorly aimed launchings of herself. Preferred weapons, daggers, crossbows, or anything that may make a nice explosion if lit on fire...

Short Bio: If you took the essence of nuisance, gave her the ability to hop using bursts of air and the upbringing of heritage meaning her pranks rarely coming back to teach a single lesson. You'd have the noble snow elf, Aeripthyx "Pyx" Felisa. She quite hates the fancy name her parents "gifted" her with. As a youth she rarely tried to master much about her heritage, asides where to find the best snacks in the town!

Pyx came from noble snow elf blood, and promptly found every way to annoy, badger and get herself in trouble for that fact. Born an oddity of her people, her Aeromancer blood gave her slight stature and rahter annoying nature often got herself in trouble with both nobles and other races. Finally, after a rather unfortunate situation involving a frosted truffle cake, a rather upset courtier and a rather impressive political incident, Nyx found herself being shipped to Twilight College as her family saw her as more trouble then good.

On that note, she broke out of the first carriage, which results in her transport to Twilight being chained to the floor...spoilsports!

Good Attributes: Quick, able to appraise any situation to cause the most mischief in the shortest period of time. Talented pickpocket. Loyal, if someone can tolerate her long enough to make friends with the tiny elf.

Bad Attributes: Her complete and utter lack of seeing the after-effects of her pranks.

Secret Word: Rebirth


Looks good to me! She's rather short, but I can't wait to see her in action.
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Cleaned up Pyx, up next is Pylia!
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Character name: Pylia Keltafer

Age: 32

Mageblood type: Lux

Favoured Magic Class: (Vitalimancy

Previous Magic training: Simple healing spells taught by the temple

Race: Human

Appearance:

Short Bio: Pylia grew up in the Hope’s Temple, a rather quaint temple found in the middle of nowhere. She didn’t know much about her past before Hope, the priests found her while tending to the wounded of a neighboring town. She was a small child, crying in the house of a razed house around the bodies of several bandits that were torn to shreds by an unknown mage. The first Sister of Hope's Temple to connect to the child was Mother Hynas. An elderly woman, no children of her own offered to raise the child as a sister of their order. If they knew what was housed inside the child, and the bandits were part of a ritual involving the young girl. They would have slain the child, or left her back in the razed home.

The priests taught her the ways of Hope, to be patient, kind, to forgive and embrace all. Pylia grew up with these ideas. Often offering to help before the other children, taking to the chores simply to be helpful. When new children arrived at the temple, Pylia was always there to help greet and get them used to the ways of the temple. Mother Hynas noted Pylia was sometimes a little too helpful, taking on responsibilities of the other children. The elders noted Pylia's warmth was something remarkable considering the child's bloody past.

When her mageblood awoke for the first time as a Lux. The priests embraced this as a sign, that Pylia could tend to the wounded. That they could use magic to tend to the wounded that bandages and medicine couldn’t cure. She was taught a few simple healing spells, giving her a chance to adventure out with the group known as Hope’s Light. The fact that Hope now possessed a Lux healer, gave them additional resources. Including expansions to the Temple, allowing them to take in more affected by the arrival of the demons.

Pylia, eager to please her family took to this role with determination. The Priestess and company began to move from town to town, healing those in need. For the first time, Pylia had seen the world outside her temple. It was dark, miserable, desolate, and she was healing one person at a time.

This made a difference, right?

Pylia felt something inside her that was different, a dislike for those who injured innocent lives, an emotion Pylia was always careful to never show to the others. The more she tried to bottle her emotions up, the more they seemed to corrupt her view of the others. Soldiers, villiagers, even the priests she befriended, she felt herself drawing away from those she cared deeply for. When news passed of Mother Hynas passing, Pylia felt her connection to the temple beginning to fade. For the first time in Pylia's life, she considered leaving the Temple.

Months passed, and Pylia withdrew from the others on their journey. Often confining herself to study while the others prayed. Late at night, while pouring through her books. Pylia began to hear something whispering from the dark, spidery words that seemed to just scratch at the corners of her mind. Was she sick? Was this part of her mageblood?

Pylia began to research more into her mageblood, effects of her pushing her magics too hard. Yet nothing spoke of this curse. Her studies were eventually cut short, a holy order to tend to a plague in a distant town came from the elders. While travelling to this town, bandits heard news a woman who’s value outweighed the lives of some stuffy priests that carted her like some holy relic. An unguarded, vitalimancer, a woman who could keep their ranks tended to. In more ways then considered noble. Resulting in an attack by several members of the bandit'swho proceeded to slaughter Pylia’s family.

As they approached Pylia, she felt the venom and hatred reach out from the shadows. That these bandits saw her as property, to use for their needs, but what about the priests of Hope. Were they no better?

“Do you want to die here?”

Pylia was frightened, that was her voice. But it was darker, angry, sharp. She spoke to the darkness.

“I want to live, I need to help people…”

The voice laughed, with that, the darkness surrounded Pylia. A woman stood before her, It was a reflection of Pylia, but it’s like she came back wrong. A woman with clawed hands, her face was not her’s, it was sharp, unnaturally sharp. She reached a clawed hand to the healer.

“Then take my hand, you will live to see the morning, this I promise…” Nervously, Pylia took the womans hand, her entire world faded away to blade. The last image she saw was this woman’s smiling face.

Pylia awoke the next day, the bodies of the bandits surrounding her. Pylia’s snow white robes were bloodied. Her hands caked with dried blood, the bodies of the closest bandit’s were slashed by what could only be claws. Images of the woman’s hands flashed through her mind.

In a panic, Pylia quickly left. She withdrew from the world. Afraid of what she could do, afraid of the woman with the cold eyes and sharp edges. Still, the rumors of a healer lead the desperate for her aid. They found Pylia still doing what she could, as if she was trying to atone for her past misdeeds.

While tending to a sick child, the news of a Snow Elf who was being shipped to a Twilight College reached her ears.

Could they help her? If she gained a better grasp of her mageblood, could she keep the other half buried in shadows?

With that, the last Priestess of Hope’s light began her journey…

Good Attributes: Patient, understanding, kind to a fault. Believes in the goodness of everyone, regardless of their attributes, past, or misdeeds. Has a strong knowledge of medicine. Always concerned with the well-being both mentally and physical of those about her.

Bad Attributes: Afraid of her own power, aware of the darkness inside and refuses to acknowledge or embrace it. Naive to less then honorable intentions of the world around her. Trusting all who come to her at their word.

Secret Word: Rebith
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Character name: Aeripthyx


First, *obligatory attack hug*. Second, she looks good to me!
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I'll look at your CSes later tonight, after I make some replies and rip a few more things off my to do list. >,<
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I'll look at your CSes later tonight, after I make some replies and rip a few more things off my to do list. >,<
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Stupid Ps3...*Grumble Grumble*
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Fallenreaper said
Currently we're at the town so she's getting that, at least is safe to assume she is. Also, Free, since I don't remember you mentioning the runes (it's possible I might've forgot and lost the notes) here's some info on them.


They heal grave wounds, but break after use.
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Alright, Yoshua, clear this up for me. Namely since I know we talked about this before, but how many spells does he know? Mainly cause you mention psychomancy, herbamancy, areomancy, and a few others. Also this part:

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He possess a single spell related to the arcanite Blood, which allows him to decrease the weight of his blade.


Lucius and me agreed this was to be Geomancy since refined, and other metals fall under this spell area.

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Good Attributes: Patient, understanding, kind to a fault. Believes in the goodness of everyone, regardless of their attributes, past, or misdeeds.

Bad Attributes: Afraid of her own power, aware of the darkness inside and refuses to acknowledge or embrace it.


I would like to see a few more on those, at last 1-2 namely cause we as GMs work with those. It helps us in tempting PCs, or knowing what to expect a bit. Also, mind pming us a bit about this darkness part? Namely what it is, where it came from or any other important details. Her bio might be nice to flesh out, namely her childhood and if any key figures stuck out in rising her. etc.

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Simple healing spells taught by the temple


Keep in mind, these will be novice level and no more. So no healing above what the vitamancy sections state for, alright?

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Bad Attributes: Her complete and utter lack of seeing the after-effects of her pranks.


I suggest about at least 2 more here. After that, Pyx is approval by me.
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Pyx has been updated. :D
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MusesFallFirst said
Pyx


Approved.
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MusesFallFirst said
Pyx


Approved.
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Pyx looks good to me too. Now I just need to compile a list of things to write about the other two CS's.
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I'll make the geomancy edit tomorrow. As to the schools/Bloods they are clearly defined in magical talents. He is most proficient with aeromancy and herbamancy. He has a single geomancy spell (which we discussed) and a single pyromania spell (which can only make a flame that could light a candle and we discussed it).

He doesn't have Psychomancy, ant reference to such is within his mental section and is used to help clarify how difficult (or simple) his psyche is to navigate depending on the skill of the individual intruding (or attpring to intrude) in his thoughts/mind.

I typed this on my phone so excuse any typos :P

Anywho, off to bed for me.
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yoshua171 said
I'll make the geomancy edit tomorrow. As to the schools/Bloods they are clearly defined in magical talents. He is most proficient with aeromancy and herbamancy. He has a single geomancy spell (which we discussed) and a single pyromania spell (which can only make a flame that could light a candle and we discussed it).


Wanted to be sure, namely since I wasn't expecting the mention of other bloods and it made me a little wary.

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He doesn't have Psychomancy, ant reference to such is within his mental section and is used to help clarify how difficult (or simple) his psyche is to navigate depending on the skill of the individual intruding (or attpring to intrude) in his thoughts/mind.I typed this on my phone so excuse any typos :PAnywho, off to bed for me.

No problem, anyway once the arcanite is changed, I see nothing wrong with and all Lucius and Rtron need to do is look it over. And you need at least one acceptance to be posted in CS thread.
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Edits have been implemented. I also added a small bit to his Full Appearance, it's a description, doesn't really change anything.
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Alright Yoshua171, I don't see any other concerns with it and it has my approval. And on a fun note:

I've been browsing the OOCs of other rps and seen PCs having theme songs which have made me curious. With all the different characters and favor in Blood, I got to wondering what would your PCs's theme song be? Or even the theme song when it comes to relations or connects with others? I'll put up mine later.
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Alright Yoshua171, I don't see any other concerns with it and it has my approval. And on a fun note: I've been browsing the OOCs of other rps and seen PCs having theme songs which have made me curious. With all the different characters and favor in Blood, I got to wondering what would your PCs's theme song be? Or even the theme song when it comes to relations or connects with others? I'll put up mine later.


I don't yet know what I would pick for Ssarak, but I know what I would pick for Darius: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DpG4t54g2fk
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