Yay! People like it!

How far are you in?

Not that far. Got to the second chapter before I had to leave.

:DDDDDD

I hope you enjoy it.

Pretty good! Not in the mood to read it, and Wattpad's doing some weird thing where it tries to refresh the page every ten seconds, so that really put me off. Still, I like it.

Working on another post right now! ^^

I don't really know what my character should be saying

Posted!
It's entirely up to you Silver, interact with people exactly as you please.

Entirely your call Silver, just be Taleste.

Nice post Cathy, I really liked the intro, talking about the cultural aspect of Babylon.

Thanks Siphy, i wanted to add a little bit more than just 'What is Jack up to' hehe

Good post. Sorry I didn't give you much to work with in the first place.

That's ok. I was under quite a lot of stress from NaNoWriMo before, but I've quit NaNoWriMo now, and today I finished all my coursework and tidied the house, so that post was suddenly easy to write. Amazing what a powerful writing suppressant stress is.

Agreed. I'm not participating in NaNo this year exactly because of the stress is brings when you have other things to worry about.

I'll work on a reply now.

Nice post Silver! Loving the internal monologue

*A booming sound fills the air of thread as a fireball falls from the sky, the fireball slams into the ground of the thread forming a crater with a bang, out of the crater my CS appears*

X3

=3

Full Name: Johnathan (John for short)

Age: he looks around the age of 20, his real age is forgotten to him

Race: Cybernetic Human / Augmented Super Soldier

Gender: Male

Appearance: He stands over 6ft tall and his eye's glow light neon cyan blue, and he has silver hair, he has an athletically fit build and weighs in at 300 lbs.


Combat armor: In combat armor he stands at 7ft tall and weighs 1300 lbs.


Personality: Johnathan is caring, and good willed, he will fight for what he believes is the right thing, and has a nag for never giving up, even if he knows he cant win, he's stubborn like that, he can be serous at some times, but he does like to joke around when he can

History: Johnathan was a normal human once, he was a soldier, a great soldier, but during a fierce battle he and his squad were ambushed. Everyone had died, except Johnathan, his body was ruined, riddled with bullet holes and scorched from battle, but his mind was spared, he was little more then burnt flesh and bone when he was found, no amount of medical help in that time could have healed him, but science had something more to offer, to which Johnathan, and the military he served in accepted. During the operation Johnathan's ruined organic skin and muscles were removed and replaced with experimental cybernetic skin and muscle that was as soft and smooth as organic skin but as tough as Kevlar and far stronger than any normal human muscles could get.

On the outside the skin is a pale white and inside his flesh and muscles are blue, his hair was burned away, he didn't necessarily need new hair but was given to him to make his appearance more pleasing to the human eye even though his new hair is silver in color. His bones were broken and shattered in most of his body so they were removed and replaced with new ones that were hardened to a point where they were nearly unbreakable and thinly coated with the same metal mixture his Combat Armor is made from. Since his body lost to much blood, the rest was drained and replace with cybernetic blood which glows dark blue, his internal organs were all punctured, ruptured and burned so they were switched out with cybernetic ones all of which were some shade of light blue.

Even though his brain was intact, it had suffered hemorrhaging and internal bleeding so it was cloned into a blue cybernetic version and replaced, the military had the idea of making Johnathan into a perfect soldier, a weapon that would follow orders without question. So they had his memory wiped when his new cloned cybernetic brain was being made in hopes that he could be programmed like a machine to believe be was made for fighting and following orders. For the most part it worked, he forgot everything that happened to him from birth until he woke up in his new body, but his mind did retain one thing, his name, it's because of this one memory that he managed to regain his freewill.

A good soul working at the facility where Johnathan's new body was made told him what the military had done to him and what they were going to do with him so he decided to play along with their plan to make him their personal weapon/puppet. After a few months of careful deception Johnathan was given his experimental Combat Armor which was fused to his body, as well as his weapons to test, with these he decided it was time to leave, he had grown aggravated while playing puppet to the military doing their "tests", having him do things to those that didn't deserve it regardless if it was a man, woman or child of any species, it made Johnathan sick and he had enough of it. When the military found out that he wasn't under their full control they panicked and tried to trick him into going into another operation to try and reprogram his mind again, but he knew better and refused.

Then the military grew angry and tried to force him to go through with the operation and threatened to kill him if he didn't, he resisted and ran for his life, with the aid of his weapons and armor his escape was successful, though the military pursued him they eventually gave up with the thought that they could simply make more super soldiers with the research they got from making him, though they couldn't remake the same armor or give the same skeleton to future soldiers that they gave Johnathan since they had used all the rare metal they had collected over the years to makes Johnathan's armor and skeleton.

Occupation: None at the Moment

Equipment:
Fused Combat Armor with Energy Shielding: Johnathan's Combat Armor extends to cover his body and retracts to form a flat smooth metal "back pack" on his back (sort of like Ironman's armor) which also works as a back pack for his compactible weapons that get stored in it, the armor is fused to his body and connected to the top part of his spine, it's made of a mix of all the strongest metals known to man and a rare metal found in space among stray asteroids that is really, really hard to find on planets, normally adding all these metals together would weaken the bond and make it brittle, but thanks to the rare metal found in space the bond is strong, and makes Johnathan's armor the strongest known to man so they named the mixture Duratainiom (pronounced "Dura-tanium"), to allow easy movement the "soft" parts of Johnathan's armor are made up of several layers of interlaced nanofibers made of Duratainiom which allows him to move freely while having nearly the same protection that the heavy Duratainiom plates covering his body give him, under his armor and nanofiber suit is a gel layer that regulates temperature and can re-actively change its density to absorb impacts, his armor has mechanized joints that are linked to his mind so that way it acts like a second skin which takes the weight of the armor off his shoulders, the armor has a locking feature so if Johnathan was to lift something in the armor that was too heavy for him to hold up the mechanized joints will lock so he doesn't buckle under the weight, the locking feature can be activated on will or on instinct, it's also equipped with a recharging energy shield that can withstand the full force of being hit directly by a tank shell before depleting, if the shield is depleted it'll take a few seconds to begin recharging and a little more to recharge fully, aside from the shielding the armor's boots have magnetic clamps that can be turned on and off at will, as well as magnetic locks in multiple area's on the back of the armor so he can place his compactible weapons on them, the magnetic locks are linked to Johnathan's mind through his armor so when he goes to reach for a certain weapon the magnetic lock holding the weapon unlocks when he grabs it, the helmet has a H.U.D (heads-up display) system with a motion sensor, it can be used for tracking targets, seeing in night vision, thermal or infrared and has a comm. system, another function is a zoom feature that helps seeing long distances without the need of a scope, built in flashlights are placed on the shoulders as well.

Jet Thrusters: Built into the back of Johnathan's Combat Armor are extendable jet thrusters that allow him to fly short distances or to stop himself from landing with too much force from a long fall.

Weaponry:


Augments: Johnathan's Strength, Speed, Agility, Reflexes and Durability have been increased dramatically when he was turned into a Cybernetic human which could be counted as a full body augmentation, he can lift up to 1 ton (2000 lbs.), run at speeds of nearly 20mph and has a reaction time of 20 milliseconds often making things seem to be in slow-motion in combat scenarios, this affords him the speed that allows him to dodge bullets from near point blank range, as well as having a skeleton that's virtually unbreakable with bones coated in metal and skin that's as strong and tough as Kevlar, another thing to note is that Johnathan's cybernetic body heals a lot faster than normal, if someone or something managed to injure him depending on how bad the injury is it can take anywhere between five minutes to half an hour to heal fully and any blood lost would be regenerated by the other cybernetic blood cells in his body to bring his blood levels back to normal, also with being a cybernetic being the need to eat, drink, sleep and breath (and go to the bathroom) is little to none, though he has the capability to do so, he doesn't need to.

Other: Johnathan wears an old grey tattered cloak that he rarely takes off to help keep himself hidden in public just case the military is still looking for him.

Theme Song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jx4rMVCAdHw

I've heavily vetted Nac so you're good to go hun, welcome to the family!! Working on a post now.

*bows like a gentlemen* it is an honor, truly =3

So the internet's out on my house. I won't be able to post very often, on top of the fact that I'm using a tablet, and I won't type out entire posts on a touch screen.
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My internet is being dodgy too :( don't fret hun

Sorry to do this, yet again, but I'll be leaving in a month or so for who knows how long. I'll do my best to update while on the road, but I figured that you guys might appreciate a months notice. Details in my signature if you're interested. Till then I'll be here, posting as usual(sporadically).

Working on a post now ^^

Siphran said
Sorry to do this, yet again, but I'll be leaving in a month or so for who knows how long. I'll do my best to update while on the road, but I figured that you guys might appreciate a months notice. Details in my signature if you're interested. Till then I'll be here, posting as usual(sporadically).

Okies, thank you for the heads up Siph <3