Man people sure get pissed over certain characters.

@Scarifar: I'm going to have to say no to Mayuri, ultimately. I'm too concerned about his potential power(admittedly judging from what I have heard). That said, though I was a bit irritated by the lack of patience last night I'm glad that you attempted to cooperate with me about the character. I'm going to try and give what information on Shadow Eternity that I can(given that the leader and their goal is completely shrouded in mystery even to the members to some extent though they probably give out some kind of fake goal) so it might be easier to pick characters for it. @mattmanganon: While AU is perfectly acceptable, I'm a little concerned about Bjorn becoming a one-note joke? There's also no real explanation for him being in the multiverse, which with this character seems to kind of need with his backstory. As for Ryuuko, Ryuuko is awesome and all but your reason for playing her kind of concerns me. I already have things in place to halt characters like that(for example, Dlanor's... entire personality makes her very suited to met out the "don't be an asshole" judgement) and as I am a GM I will crack down on people deciding their character is awesome and unbeatable. As a final note on the whole other matter, even if it's intended for parody I don't want Mary Sues anywhere near my RP's in any sense of the word. @Missy: Declined. Having looked up what fleshcrafting can do I will absolutely not accept a character who can inflict body horror on others at will. On a lighter note, if all goes well the IC may be up sometime today. I'm sorry if I missed anyone with this post, this topic is very busy and there is a lot to respond to.

> As a final note on the whole other matter, even if it's intended for parody I don't want Mary Sues anywhere near my RP's in any sense of the word. ...*Hides Shirou*

Still waiting on a verdict on Kiss-Shot, whenever you get the chance. Decided against playing Crucius the Mad; not quite in the mood to play a giant metal sphinx at the moment. Still deliberating on what sort of character to play, may possibly end up being "Totally Not Nicol Bolas."

"Oh, hello! It's-a me, Mario!" •Name: Super Mario •Age: Unknown, could be anything. •Gender: Male •Appearance:  •Canon, AU, or OC?: Cannon •Universe of Origin: The Mario Multiverse (Yes, there are many Mario Universes •Personality: Just looking at Mario tells you his personality. Mario is a caring, fun loving guy who always want the good side to win the day, and if he has any say in current events his wish WILL come true. Mario is a hero, and a total saint to anyone in trouble in any way, shape, or form. He is also friendly, and will go out of his way just to make new friends. However, he does not tolerate evil actions. Villans are not on his good side, and if your plots involve hurting someone prepair for plumber shoes smashing your head. However, Mario forgives as quick as he jumps, and if you turn away from evil Mario will welcome you into his friend list with open arms. •Abilities/Weapons: Normal Abilities: Mario is much stronger than a normal human. He can jump up to 40 feet high, run tiwce as fast as a normal man, break solid bricks with his bare hands, and preform many other moves which can get him to new places or break objects in his path. Super Mario: Mario can consume a red mushroom at anytime to grow twice his size! Now only that, he is much stronger and can break bricks much earier. This is also a way of cheating death, as if he is gravely injured while in this state he will shirnk down to his normal size and be fully healed. Hammer: Mario carries around a large battle hammer which he can use to break blocks or people's skulls. While he would normally have a problem with spiked enemies, he can simply smash them with his trusty hammer and take care of them. It's also very usefull for pounding stakes into the ground as well! •Backstory: (Everyone knows this, play NES SMB.) •Faction: None, but is a total good guy.

@Dead Cruiser: At this point, I'm mostly worried about Kiss-shot falling unconsciously into the "unbeatable character" trap. I'd be watching very, very closely if I do accept her. Edit: On second thoughts, she's accepted. @BluetheElf: Mario is accepted.

> @mattmanganon: While AU is perfectly acceptable, I'm a little concerned about Bjorn becoming a one-note joke? There's also no real explanation for him being in the multiverse, which with this character seems to kind of need with his backstory. > > As for Ryuuko, Ryuuko is awesome and all but your reason for playing her kind of concerns me. I already have things in place to halt characters like that(for example, Dlanor's... entire personality makes her very suited to met out the "don't be an asshole" judgement) and as I am a GM I will crack down on people deciding their character is awesome and unbeatable. Well, I did want to play Ryuuko anyway. Just also like having a character for that purpose. As for Bjorn, he's not a one note character. He's grumpy alot, yes. But he has his loyalty, he has his ferocity, his tactical mind and a few others.

> @Dead Cruiser: At this point, I'm mostly worried about Kiss-shot falling unconsciously into the "unbeatable character" trap. I'd be watching very, very closely if I do accept her. > > Edit: On second thoughts, she's accepted. I'll make an effort to avoid that. Please let me know if you feel I'm coming close. In any case, I'll port the CS over shortly. Perhaps the added information regarding the Shadow Eternity will inspire me regarding my final character.

First order of business, [the RP has started](http://www.roleplayerguild.com/posts/2324180)! Now onto the things I'll need to do here. @mattmangannon: For Ryuuko, I just don't think it's entirely necessary to think of it like that as I have measures to prevent that kind of thing happening. Play her because you want to play her, you don't need to try and do one of the GM's duties. As for Bjorn, you need to include something about how someone in his situation arrived in the multiverse at least.

Is [Ing](http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/74771/posts/ooc?page=15#post-2320257) accepted?

Name: Kurumi Tokisaki Age: Unknown, appears to be about 16. Gender: Female Appearance: [Normal](http://images6.fanpop.com/image/photos/35000000/kurumi-tokisaki-kurumi-35011314-414-663.jpg), [Astral Dress](http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2013/096/e/6/kurumi_tokisaki_by_mmrailgun-d60lyhb.jpg). Canon, AU, or OC?: Canon Universe of Origin: Date a Live Personality: She is a skilled actress, capable of putting on the façade of an innocent, curious young girl when she needs to, which is shown when she registered as a student at the Raizen High School, and speaks in a polite manner. However, under that mask lies a psychotic woman, prone to fits of insane laughter and possessing no regard for human life, regarding them as a food source to restore her own time, and thus, a disposable commodity. There is a twisted justice behind her methods however, as the people that she brutally murdered were would-be rapists and animal abusers. Abilities/Weapons: Astral Dress: named Elohim. Her second appearance when she transforms. This enables her to use her "Angel". Flintlock pistol, Musket, Giant Clock: All of these make up her Angel: **Zafkiel**. Each hour on the clock has a different power. To activate any power she needs, she first needs to call her Angel (regardless of whether or not the Angel has been summoned already), and position her flintlock at the number of the bullet on the Angel. Next, she needs to shoot the bullet at the target with the gun. In the event that she needs to use the power on herself, then she is required to shoot herself. Every time she uses one of her hour powers, though, she loses "time", or her life force, and the more powerful the ability, the more time she loses. To replenish it, she must steal the time of others, usually by killing them. While preparing an hour power, she must stay in one spot, either leaving her vulnerable to an attack or forcing her to cancel the usage of the power for the time being. Also, because she must declare the power she is using and position her guns so they point the direction of the hour on the clock, they are easy to anticipate. It seems like by damaging the giant clock badly enough, she can then no longer use any of the hour powers. The clock can repair itself over time, but it will take a long period of time before it is fully repaired. She can, however, still use her other powers. 1. Aleph: accelerates time for the object for a single target. In effect, anything around the target will appear to move slower. 2. Bet: Slows down time for the target. Essentially the exact opposite of the first hour. - Gimel: unknown. - Dalet: rewinds time on a target. Anything that happened to the target within the time frame will then be reverted as if it never happened. - Hei: unknown. - Vav: unknown. - Zayin: freezes time on the target for a period of time. Any wounds inflicted on the target will affect it all at once when Zayin wears off. - Het: Creates a clone of the target. - Tet: allows Kurumi to share her sense with someone from different time dimension. - Yud: Peeks into the past of a target. Used by placing a possession of the target on the side of her head, then firing a bullet through it at her head. - Yud Aleph: unknown. - Yud Bet: Travels through time at the cost of a Spirit's power. She won't use this until she is ready to accomplish her goal in her world. Shadow: Kurumi can open a portal which either has pale arms coming out of it, or lets out clones of herself from a separate dimension. She can also enter these Shadow portals to travel to another location, or to escape from an enemy. All of the clones that appear are separate entities, and Kurumi has no control over them apart from killing them off, or dragging them back into her shadow portal. None of them can use her Angel, and therefore the hour powers, but they can still use her guns. Backstory: Kurumi Tokisaki used unstated and unexplained methods to personally transfer into Shido Itsuka's high school and classroom so that she could get closer to him. Her purposes and reasons transferring were simple: consume Shido Itsuka, and in doing so, gain the sealed Spirit's mana that he had sealed. She somehow knew about Shido and his ability and the fact that he knew about the existence of Spirits. During the time when Kurumi was a Raizen high school student, she almost succeeded in consuming Shido, however she was forced to retreat after being overwhelmed by Kotori's destructive power simply because she wasn't prepared to face her but later claimed that she could defeat Kotori if she had more time but still unsure of it as with Kotori's passive and continous regeneration of mana and health, as opposed to Kurumi's Dalet which require excecution. Later, it was revealed that Kurumi was given the information about Shido by a mysterious being and seemed like she was talking to herself (in which she wasn’t.) She stated her true purpose/goal was for seeking Shido out and revealed that her true goal was to use her 12th bullet to travel back in time 30 years ago and kill the First Spirit. To do that, she requires a large amount of spirit mana which she doesn't have. which is why she wants to consume Shido who holds the spirit mana of three spirits within him for her to be able to use the 12th bullet and still have power left over to kill the First Spirit. She reappears later on and offered to help Shido rescue Tohka from the hands of DEM. It was later revealed that her real objective was to use Shido as a distraction for her to have a chance to search for the Second Spirit, the only one who knew the whereabouts of the First Spirit. She appeared in the Multiverse for the first time by accident by traveling through her Shadow portal. She was curious, and decided to explore it. Shadow Eternity contacted her, and she joined them out of interest. Now she can freely travel between her world and the Multiverse. Faction: Shadow Eternity

Pretty sure time-fuckery is on the no-nos list.

Some of it is only basic "time fuckery" and only grants her pretty small boosts. Plus, she only uses old-fashioned guns that fire old-fashioned bullets to injure things, not exactly laser beams that disintegrate targets on impact. Buuuut let's see how Vita sees it.

Well, I had to nerf Dio to get him on the list and I believe VVAR mentioned that most timescrew wouldn't be allowed. I had to mess around with The World to let him go by A-OK (aka no more freezing people).

Well since people seem to be moving onto the main RP thread, I'd just like to know the fate of Brawl. Accepted or no? If your busy and just haven't gotten to him, or he's just been buried under a mountain of other posts, I understand. [Find it here](http://www.roleplayerguild.com/posts/2321279)

**Name:** Kiba, formerly known as Hiroto Kanzaki **Age:** 20 **Gender:** Male **Appearance:** He's about six feet tall with a lean muscular build. In battle, he wears dark grey armor plating that's shaped to fit his form, making it seem like a second skin of sorts. Underneath the armor's layer is a black body glove made out of protective fibers. His helmet resembles [this](http://i.imgur.com/jeRPAcq.png). Underneath the helmet is someone who has red orange eyes and short dark blue hair. The armor is mostly for show though, since his natural toughness more than suffices for most battles. **Canon, AU, or OC?:** OC **Universe of Origin:** Heartcatch Pretty Cure **Personality:** Arrogant, self-centered, and always looking for fights to hone his skills in. However, he's not averse to working with others from time to time if it benefits him, which is why he joined Shadow Eternity. **Abilities/Weapons:** Enhanced physical attributes: Speed, strength, reflexes, endurance, and so on are vastly above normal human capacity. His casual punch carries far more power than a tank shell, just for reference. Ki manipulation: He can either concentrate his ki onto his palm to unleash a powerful ranged blast, or shape it as a sharpened blade on his hand. Supernatural awareness: Hiroto, or Kiba as he calls himself now, is able to sense other sources of ki and magic. Body reading: He's able to judge his opponent's next move by viewing the subtle nuances of his/her movements and demeanor. **Backstory:** Hiroto's parents were usually away on business trips, and was mostly raised by the caretaker they hired. For the most part, Hiroto's childhood was fairly normal, though a part of him felt empty and aimless during this time. This bout of normalcy ended when he was nearly killed by a Desertrian, and only the timely arrival of Cure Flower saved him. Inspired by the display of strength before him and desiring it for himself, Hiroto decided to try and find someone who would teach him how to fight. Eventually, he found Kaoruko and practically begged her to be her pupil. Kaoruko saw no harm in teaching him at the time and agreed to his demand. Hiroto's progress was nothing short of amazing. He mastered in days what it took weeks for most others to grasp, though he does train more relentlessly than the majority would, and even Kaoruko couldn't get him to stop. One day, during another Desertrian attack, Hiroto managed to glimpse his teacher transforming into Cure Flower. Needless to say, he was shocked that his mentor was the one who saved him years ago. Hiroto talked to Kaoruko about this and told her that he wouldn't tell anyone. He also asked if it's possible for him to attain the level of power a Precure has. Kaoruko replied that he can't attain the power of a Precure, but he can find his own unique strength and tells him power isn't the sole purpose of martial arts. Hiroto only nodded in response but was dissatisfied by her answer. Shortly after that incident, Hiroto parted ways with his mentor and set out on his own to find the power he's looking for. He looked into rumors of people performing seemingly superhuman feats by using their ki. If there was any substance to them, Hiroto figured that his ki would manifest during constant fighting. In a world where giant monsters and Pretty Cures exist, he figured it's not completely out of possibility. He challenged several dojos along the way and crushed them during his pursuit for more power. Eventually, during at the age of 17, Hiroto's burning desire for strength and his frustration at what he sees as unearned power in the hands of Precures suddenly takes shape as a dark red aura enveloping his body. Before he could rampage with this power, a cloaked man comes to offer Hiroto a place among a group called Shadow Eternity and promises him undreamed varieties of power he can earn. He takes this offer without hesitation, of course. Three years among Shadow Eternity caused Hiroto to drop his old name and calls himself Kiba from now on to reflect his rebirth. **Faction:** Shadow Eternity

@Eemmtt: Well I guess I don't really see anything wrong there, um... accepted. @Scarifar: As pointed out, time-hacking is not acceptable unless under some fairly hard nerfs. As such I'm going to have to decline. @Mtntopview: Well, I didn't see anything wrong with him but I didn't realize you were using him right now. ^^; I thought you were just intending to place the bio up in case or something from what you said. @Laughing Matter: When you get the appearance up I'll look your bio over.

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Aww and Kurumi was already nerfed super hard. I removed most of her stronger abilities and even pointed out weaknesses with her time manipulation. Hell, Isaac Clark and the other Dead Space characters here can use their statis module to force a character to slow down, and Kurumi's not as powerful as, let's say, some alien robot equipped with a complete arsenal of lasers, missile launchers, emp blasters, etc.

> @Eemmtt: Well I guess I don't really see anything wrong there, um... accepted. > > @Scarifar: As pointed out, time-hacking is not acceptable unless under some fairly hard nerfs. As such I'm going to have to decline. > > **@Mtntopview: Well, I didn't see anything wrong with him but I didn't realize you were using him right now. ^^; I thought you were just intending to place the bio up in case or something from what you said.** > > @Laughing Matter: When you get the appearance up I'll look your bio over. Well if that's the case, I'll add him to the CS page?