For the Prolouge what I was thinking was that the City was Infiltrated with Nazerene Assassins. A rooftop battle was fought when the Assassins were cornered. You guys introduce your characters and their place in the city as this rooftop battle begins. A single Nazerene assassin is captured alive. The Sycophant tortures him and extracts the information that only half the Nazerene Army's strength approaches to cross the river as the other half is marching north after destroying Sidon in the extreme south and will not make it for a few months. Then we shift to Antioch's Army and the Battle to prevent the Nazerene army from crossing the Golden Dragon at the stone fort.
Also Give me Feedback: Am I exerting too much control over story? Do you guys want to do this some other way? That sort of thing.
I think your fine. I like the concept of the hidden secrets of the characters, makes it more intriguing than most other roleplays. Though what could prove to be interesting is an assassin is apprehended by each branch of the factions: Mages, Rouges, City Guard etc... and what could transpire is that they were deliberately caught in order to spread chaos throughout the groups to make the siege easier. As I would think a lot of armies in this sort of time period would've done, but then again I'm no military expert. Shrugs
Couldn't the Nazerene's bypass the river though and maybe take ships stolen or built in Leona? Just asking not meaning to pry, curious is all