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Still busy... shows almost over :3. Sorry to say this, but apps are NOT accepted! Firstly, all new apps with a simple mention of any weaponry is instantly denied. I'm not on the pc right now, but I can tell these apps are factory made. Make each character a full sized person, and then we will try again Thank you.
ok that's Fine Alex is a WIP ATM I only posted him like this so you could get a idea of the tech I was thinning of using for him and see if it was ok thinking a inventor would be handy in a RP where we are battling powerful monsters not to mention it would be the only way he could get his hand on that gear as the convention has already stared. I was planing on adding more to his back story like personality as so far he has none, friends and general school life once I had an idea if you though that his tech would be acceptable.
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Sorry. I didn't see anything in that character other than factory printed clichés. If there was an actual story... then yeah, cliché or not it'd be fine. But... they're coming in too fast, with absolutely no effort given. It makes those who tried hard worthless, and sets the standards for everyone new coming in to so the same.
I suppose that I was so overwhelmed by the amount that flew at me in so little time then. Please forgive me. I'm absolutely terrible as a Co-GM. My badge is officially hung up, I'm not meant for this job. I shouldn't read apps while being preoccupied with food.
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Still busy... shows almost over :3. Sorry to say this, but apps are NOT accepted! Firstly, all new apps with a simple mention of any weaponry is instantly denied. I'm not on the pc right now, but I can tell these apps are factory made. Make each character a full sized person, and then we will try again Thank you.
ok that's Fine Alex is a WIP ATM I only posted him like this so you could get a idea of the tech I was thinning of using for him and see if it was ok thinking a inventor would be handy in a RP where we are battling powerful monsters I was planing on adding more to his back story like personality as so far he has none, friends and general school life once I had an idea if you though that his tech would be acceptable.
I'm sorry, I haven't read any apps specifically, so some may be okay. I've mostly picked out bita and pieces during commercials. Some I have read. Others I haven't. Almost done... so, I'll be able to make a closer look soon.
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Ok, sorry for any flaws I may of made, tell me what I need to fix, and I will work on it.
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Sorry. I didn't see anything in that character other than factory printed clichés. If there was an actual story... then yeah, cliché or not it'd be fine. But... they're coming in too fast, with absolutely no effort given. It makes those who tried hard worthless, and sets the standards for everyone new coming in to so the same.
I suppose that I was so overwhelmed by the amount that flew at me in so little time then. Please forgive me. I'm absolutely terrible as a Co-GM. My badge is officially hung up, I'm not meant for this job.
*Burns badge* I never gave you one. You have a ribbon instead. Use it wisely. It's hard here, this is the most chaos I've ever seen.
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ok well let me know what you think about his gear as I am a bit unsure about it myself. Cant decided if its to week for an invention for someone like Alex to come up with or OP for the RP lol
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Ok, sorry for any flaws I may of made, tell me what I need to fix, and I will work on it.
Of course. I still need to look everything over. Show's over. Heading downstairs now.
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ok well let me know what you think about his gear as I am a bit unsure about it myself. Cant decided if its to week for an inventor or OP for the RP lol
Right. Coming sown now to see eveyone.
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Alright, yeah, I think I understand why I needed to be Co-GM. Sorry for the slip-up. I'll do better next time you leave me alone.
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Sorry. I didn't see anything in that character other than factory printed clichés. If there was an actual story... then yeah, cliché or not it'd be fine. But... they're coming in too fast, with absolutely no effort given. It makes those who tried hard worthless, and sets the standards for everyone new coming in to so the same.
I suppose that I was so overwhelmed by the amount that flew at me in so little time then. Please forgive me. I'm absolutely terrible as a Co-GM. My badge is officially hung up, I'm not meant for this job.
*Burns badge* I never gave you one. You have a ribbon instead. Use it wisely. It's hard here, this is the most chaos I've ever seen.
then you have clearly never RPed with the one and DKUK before because they love the crazy and i will hold my hands up and say when the tree of us get together in a RP thing go from good to weird to crazy to all hell braking lose in an instant lol and the fact that I was not a part of it this time and it still happened in a flash is kinda funny.
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I've personally never GM'd or Co-GM'd when it's happened, but I have seen it happen before. It was an RP that died pretty quickly, and it's likely because people had so many characters that next to nothing got done. Too many characters = extra time for meet ups/greetings, and that also means it could take up to a month before the plot moved even a bit. That's why arenas benefit the most from lots of characters, because the only plot is to kill each other, or work with each other to kill something. Is unraveller, like, done with the RP? He already killed off his own character. That only really goes to show that the sound cannon is also OP if it could kill literally the strongest guy with a single kick.
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And it should be stated, this isn't an arena. Plot is pretty important, sure there will be times for crazy. But it is certainly not all the time. A character you create must come from the soul, the inner recesses of your mind. Not some two-bit put together in a minute generic jumble.
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I've personally never GM'd or Co-GM'd when it's happened, but I have seen it happen before. It was an RP that died pretty quickly, and it's likely because people had so many characters that next to nothing got done. Too many characters = extra time for meet ups/greetings, and that also means it could take up to a month before the plot moved even a bit. That's why arenas benefit the most from lots of characters, because the only plot is to kill each other, or work with each other to kill something.
yeah I know what you mean me the one and DKUK have had a few RPs die for the same reason but we do tend to use a lot of characters for some RPs for example we are doing an AVP RP based of the comics where their is a number of races at war and we have each got one or two characters in each of each race and as a result that RP has a ton of characters lol.
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Is unraveller, like, done with the RP? He already killed off his own character. That only really goes to show that the sound cannon is also OP if it could kill literally the strongest guy with a single kick.
I think it will take a bit more in order to kill Kristof, but he certainly isn't in good shape. Imagine such a focused sound wave, sound is more or less vibrations, and at that magnitude from someone who doesn't even know how to use the equipment. I'd say it might have killed someone with less constitution. I wanted to use it as more of an idea of the consequences of such an action. And as much as I love Kristof I have to come to terms that he is a mortal human being. And death comes to us all.
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Perhaps we need to add extra rules. Or, moreso, limits. No one likes limits in RPs, but they need limits. Get rid of the limits, and you've got fan-fiction crossover levels of bad.
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Is unraveller, like, done with the RP? He already killed off his own character. That only really goes to show that the sound cannon is also OP if it could kill literally the strongest guy with a single kick.
I think it will take a bit more in order to kill Kristof, but he certainly isn't in good shape. Imagine such a focused sound wave, sound is more or less vibrations, and at that magnitude from someone who doesn't even know how to use the equipment. I'd say it might have killed someone with less constitution. I wanted to use it as more of an idea of the consequences of such an action. And as much as I love Kristof I have to come to terms that he is a mortal human being. And death comes to us all.
Alright, yes, but the thing is, if this weapon is really that strong, anyone can go around PKing because they're bored. Kind of like with those twins. Abuse them, and the only thing that will happen are PKs and annoyed people.
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Username: DragonKingUK Character Name: Toby Character Age: 25 Character Gender: Male Appearance: Fourth Dimensional Power: Sight Bio and Personality: Toby is a very calm and serious person, he will do whatever he can to help, and will never ignore a cry for help, even if he has to break the law to help another person, he will gladly do it. He carries his sniper rifle with him at all times for a 'Just in case' moment. He was trained by the military, being smart and tactical, as well as having quite a bit of body strength.
Okay. Name, Toby, Age 25, Male. Has 4d sight. Very calm and serious, extremely helpful. Maniac carrying gun for 'Just in case' moments. Trained in the military, and for some reason still thinks it's okay to carry a gun everywhere he walks. I'll say not enough information. I believe Ragna said the same thing. Please add more to the bio, as this might be an interesting character. Plus, he doesn't have to carry a sniper around with him. People will be handed out weapons later, as they'll become part of a group that will EVENTUALLY be held above the law, and trained to walk around to fight monsters and such. But before then, they're breaking the law, and already thrown in jail. lol.
ok since the gauntlets are acuity about to be used I thought I should show you the design I am basing them of.
Harry Potter gloves, accepted! Best app I've seen in awhile. LOL! But yeah, those work. I imagined much thicker things... which I didn't like. Those gloves you showed look much better than what I was originally thinking. Much easier to actually hide too. And put on someone's person without their knowledge. xD
Username: DragonKingUK Character Name: Kenji Character Age: 30 Character Gender: Male Appearance: Fourth Dimensional Power: Energy Bio and Personality: Kenji is a cocky person, who will always makes jokes at inappropriate times. Although, when he needs to be, he can be serious, but that side of him is rare. He is a master swordsman, being trained to wield multiple swords at once, and how to do it efficiently. He uses the power of energy to make his weapons stronger as well as to sense where the enemy is. He constantly trains to become stronger.
Kenji, 30, male. 4d energy. Cocky, inappropriate joke guy. Rarely serious. Master swordsman for unknown reasons, and possibly prefers multiple sword wielding. Uses his powers in a cool way to make his fighting style better. No actual biography, just personality and what types of weapons he wants. Please write a proper bio, as this character might make it.
Username: DragonKingUK Character Name: Tyson Character Age: 17 Character Gender: Male Appearance: Fourth Dimensional Power: Energy Pet power: Sight Bio and Personality: Tyson is overly trusting and kind, but not stupid. He is actually quite smart, being in college and all. He loves all animals, fascinated with them. He get's furious when an animal in directly attacked and injured by somebody, although, most of the time, he is calm and chilled.
Hawk. I see hawk. That's all I see! No bio, again. Please write one out, and he might be accepted! I love pets. If you go with this, and write in something proper, he might be accepted.
Username: The One Character Name: Flemeth Character Age: 40 Character Gender: Female Appearance: Fourth Dimensional Power: Energy Crow, Sight Bio and Personality: Flemeth has achieved a whole new skill that nobody else has achieved, being able to physically form wings out of pure energy. She is a goth girl, seeing the worst in everything, cruel, and sometimes evil. She sees no value in animals, she uses them in battle, and nothing more, if they become useless to her, she kills them. She is a convicted murderer, killing several police, animals and innocent. She was placed on the top priority list, although, she kept escaping by using her powers. How did she become like this, you ask? Her parents tortured her, taught her to never trust anyone. They told her that to survive this world, she would have to be mean. Her parents were physically unstable, and it had an impact on her. She became just like her parents, a convicted murderer, a psycho path. She never cared for her parents, why should she? They made her life hell, well, now, she can share those feelings, and turn it into power!
Hmm, interesting. I like the power, though it might be OP. I'm not sure.... You actually wrote somewhat of a bio, which is acceptable. Though, her being as evil as she is might not work very well. She might just be another psychopathic killer, which we have WAY too many of. I'll ask for Ragna's opinion here, as I can't make a decision.
Username: The One Character Name: Gigglecheeks Glitterwings. (GG) Character Age: 20 Character Gender: Female Appearance: Fourth Dimensional Power: Energy Bio and Personality: GG is a very short tempered woman, she hates her name, and if anyone ever called her by her full name, she would rip them to pieces without hesitation. It was her mother that gave her the name, she thought it was cute, but GG hated it. That was not who she was. She was a mercenary. Cops? Sure. Criminals? Bring it on. Army? Any day. She didn't care. She had killed before, committed many crimes. She doesn't care. If she doesn't like you, she will harshly tell you, and, to be honest, she doesn't like a lot of things.
Good game. Cool story behind her name, but she's also another crazy psychopath. Not a lot to her bio, just explaining that she wants to start out with a weapon and slice people's heads off, and at the age of 20 still hasn't been put behind bars yet.
Username: The One Character Name: Mimi Character Age: 13 Character Gender: Male Appearance: Fourth Dimensional Power: Sound Bio and Personality: Mimi is a full on child celeb, going on x factor to get fame, she sang to the world, putting on an amazing performance. Mimi is highly excitable, and she loves to make a song out of anything she can think of, especially when there is a crowd. She states the obvious all the time, and does whatever she can to cheer the mood up. Mimi wanted to be the best there was, wanting to sing and become famous, wanting everyone to know her name. That was her dream. To keep that dream alive, she constantly sang to every new person she met, just so they could hear what heaven sounds like.
Okay, reaccepted. There's actually a full character here! Though, I'm not sure whether she's gone through an operation, or he's gone through an operation, as the appearance, bio, and gender all say different stories... please explain.
Username: The One Character Name: Konohamaru Sarutobi Character Age: 10 Character Gender: Male Appearance: Fourth Dimensional Power: Energy Other: His goggles give him the power of sight, explained here. V Bio and Personality: Konohamaru's father was a engineer, a man who designed new technology, Konohamaru was always the first to try them out. One day, his father created some goggles, so, as usual, Konohamaru began testing them, sadly, his father soon died, and they never passed the prototype. After this, Konohamaru swore that he would get revenge on the monsters that killed his father, no matter what it took. He became serious, he swore that he would protect everyone and anyone he could, even if he was a kid. He would not allow others to underestimate him just because he was small, he would show them all, show them exactly what he could do!
Small bio, but everyone seems to be doing this. I think this character is acceptable though. Welcome aboard!
Username: PharaohAtem Character Name: Alex Hawking Character Age: Character Gender: 21 Appearance: hight 5'6 Fourth Dimensional Power: Sight has learnt some of his power but not all. Bio: Alex was born into a wealthy home and integrated his abilities from his mother sent to the best privet schools he sowed high a level of intelligence for his age all throughout his life he was growing up he spent most of his time indoors studying. When he wasn't studding he would read science and engineering magazines. When Alex was 9 he started taking apart microwaves, refrigerators, televisions ext just and putting them back to gather to get a better idea of how they worked. When the time he was 10 he started building things like computers and game consoles. When he was 13 he was able to upgrade and reprogram most tech you would find around your basic home the most impressive being cars. When he was 15 he began working on designs for new tech. at 18 his parents had a lab built for him and he started inventing all kinds of things like hover boards and clocking tech. when he was 20 his parents where attacked and killed by 4D monsters ever since then he began working on weapons to fight them now he has finally finished a combat suit that enhances the wearers speed and agility and laser guns that can be set to fire blast of energy stun any living thing for our would but has no effect on 4D monsters, Set to fire out highly focused busts of radiation like microwaves to heat up and set thing on fire, Set to fire live laser beams that can kill most living things in our would witch can injurer 4D monsters and finally they can be set to fire a beam of energy that only harms the 4D monsters and has no effect on anything else. Alex is a lab rat though and though has little experience outside his lab however he plans to attend the Fourth Dimensional 48th Anniversary Convention to show his prototypes knowing they could help military solders fight back against the 4D monsters.
He has no age. And his gender is 21? I hope I'm not missing some sort of joke here... because I think there's something missing. xD. Cool! This character actually has a bio! The second half of it is all about explaining his tech, which is great since most people hop in and Godmod this stuff. Hmm... since he is showing off this stuff, I think that might be more reasonable than most of these other characters. Accepted!
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I think I may have to pause the RP at this point, and make a few forced changes to characters. Perhaps the twins are too much. I'm thinking I should say there should be no psychopaths at all, since everyone seems to be abusing them until the point of being getting crazier and crazier. This is actually a plot RP, not an arena. I've made these monsters extremely powerful, because I want the battles with them to be rare, and eventful. I've always ended up in RPs where a dragon comes along, and everyone is having this amazing battle with it... then one guy comes along and tosses a booger, and the dragon implodes. It's no fun when you get these crazy people that make absolutely no sense, and when battles don't feel like battles. It is possible there might be more enemies... hehe... that won't be the same as these monsters, so combat is always going to be changing... but it's always going to be hard.
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Oh no! Did Kristov just die!? Great. Now I'm officially mad, having one of my favorite characters killed off! RAWR!
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Also, I never said this, but I'd like people to keep all of their apps on the characters section under one post per RPer, and possibly hide their apps within hiders. It's getting too hard to find anybody, or who owns who. I'm going to edit the rules now, creating a new specific section related to character limits.
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