@Inertia and Pacemaker sorry but you'll have to wait for tomorrow for judgement. Been busy today and can't really give you a fair read over at the moment.

Well, sweat if you are running from lions and tigers and bears but otherwise we can wait.

@Pacemaker Your character looks good Ill accept it as it is you are free to add the character to the list.

@Inertia the character looks good for the most part. The only gripe I have is your magic level, I wanted those who would start at a Sorcerer level to be solely mages giving them some nice spellpower to make up for their lack of strength with a blade. with your character learning of this magic only after is separation from the brother, which if I'm reading right was only about a year of trying to learn magic, so with that much time to learn I would say your still on the Apprentice level.

The two days passed smoothly, and he arrived in Alvina. Departing the ship he could see Dragon's maw in the distance. Seemed to be about a few hours walk, he smiled cause he loved to see new things and places. "Excuse me handsome," He heard a call of a woman voice from behind him. He turned to see a beautiful woman approaching him. "We don't get many priest around here, especially one from Talos. You looking for fun?" Recca smiled at her, "I really have to get to Dragon's Maw..." "Oh come on, it won't take long, maybe." She placed her hand on his shoulder and leaned in. With a smile on her face and a wink and brush of her hair, he smiled back. "Okay sure, Lets go have fun. But only for a little while?" Recca laid there in a pool of his own sweat. The breeze blowing across his skin and he was huffing and puffing. "Wow, That was fun." He aid with a smile on his face. Never have I experienced such joy, and fun with out laughing. And this Feeling feels great. What do you call his act?" The woman looked at him, I call Yoga, it help builds your core and give you a wide range of motion. Your a natural, I am glad you like it your my first student. I am hoping it will catch on. Thank you for your time."

I laughed. Thank you.

I laughed. Thank you.

I'm glad you liked it. After reading it again i made some grammar changes. Glad you were able to understand it. I was sleepy as hell when i wrote it.

Inertia with the changes your good you can add your character to the list

Hydra not to burst your bubble or anything, but if Silus ' trip to the shadowlands was a months journey by sea how would you make a trip twice the distance take two days. Granted looking at the map if my journey took a month then the land is huge. So I'll switch mine to about two weeks. :)