Kiri said [Snip]

I'm going to hold off on approving this until we get the first characters settled into the story, but I don't see any problems.

manapool1 said [Snip]

I suggest reading the OP a little more closely, as well as checking out the example sheet I posted.

Also, I'm unsure that your writing meets the minimum requirements for the casual section.

Kiri said [PICTURES GALORE, OMG.]

Those are really awesome.

I'm working on a post now, btw.

manapool1 said
haha, if my character really was accepted then isn't he now the smallest?

Assuming that, then yeah. Ralts are barely smaller than Cynaquils, though just by 4 inches/.1 meter.
Surprisingly, Gardevoir is 4 inches/.12 meters shorter than Typhlosion.

Edit: Wow! I can't believe I missed those drawings, they're great!

Thanks Explosive and Ampharos ;u;

On the note of Zee and Caliburn, I find it a rather amusing point-of-fact that the latter is nearly twice as long as the former is tall, with Cubone. And further:

• For the 4" matter between Enthen and Ryner, it actually extends the entire line: Ralts is 4" shorter than Cyndaquil, Kirlia is 4" shorter than Quilava, and Gallade and Gardevoir are 4" shorter than Typhlosion.


• Since Freya's just an Eevee right now, she's actually the smallest at just 1'00", and tied with Zee as the second-lightest. (Cal is the lightest of anyone.)


• Enthen and Caliburn will tie for second-tallest once fully evolved. Goran will be largest and heaviest by that point.


• I keep a table to quickly reference this kind of info.

Posted.

Geoffrey, I didn't include you in the teams since you said you might have to drop. If you're still able, you can be the first to go on a solo adventure.

Kulero~



Cuz i was so happy that teams were set up here's the great alakazam for you Ampharos c:

An64fan said
On the note of Zee and Caliburn, I find it a rather amusing point-of-fact that the latter is nearly twice as long as the former is tall, with Cubone. And further:

Haha, yeah. I was thinking about that just the other day... working it into a post now, actually. o_o

Oh, and for future reference; Cal is a Shiny. Meaning his blade is red with the blood of his foes!!!!!!

Or perhaps he yearns for equality among social classes.

I'll try to get a post done when I get back from Texas City, which should be in about... 4 hours.
Actually, I'm going to be stuck typing it out on my phone.

So, the awkward lonely pokemon is grouped with the even MORE awkward, MORE lonely pokemon (me) and an extremely violent, possibly elitist and/or racist sword larger than the other two combined?

Looking at this carefully, Enthen is probably the one who will *have* to develop the most, but I can get a good idea how just by looking at my evolutionary line and its behaviors. Might not be unique in concept, but execution should hopefully turn out good. At the end of the day, this actually looks like the team that turns out to be the determined, infallible fighters later on.

And if Enthen and Caliburn get tied for height at their final evolutions, then it sounds very likely that the two will eventually find some way to get along and wield one another.
yay~

An64fan said I keep a table to quickly reference this kind of info.

So do I, actually.

Penultimate_Pi said
So, the awkward lonely pokemon is grouped with the even MORE awkward, MORE lonely pokemon (me) and an extremely violent, possibly elitist and/or racist sword larger than the other two combined?

What could possibly go wrong? Hehe.

Caliburn should also be able to float, so I imagine it wouldn't be too difficult for Zee to wield him if they work together to control the swings.

Plus, the combinations were somewhat necessary. Zarapth, Enthen, Vulpix, and Streel can't be on the same team since they're all Fire-types, and Caliburn and Monaghan can't be on the same team nor can Zarapth and Monaghan because they share similar types. Lixy and Zee can't be on the same team either because Zee's Lightning Rod would attract Lixy's Electric-type attacks.

I also wanted at least one male and one female on each team.

Oh, and I just liked the idea of Zee and Caliburn together on a team. That drawing was just too much awesome for it not to happen.

Also, I really enjoyed your post.

Awesome drawing ^^

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Double post
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About time the guild starts working. If there's anything weird about the post, it's either because it was all written on the phone and swype sometimes misinterprets gestures, or because it was written while laying down on the back seat of a car at 4 in the morning.

Card Captor said
Oh, and for future reference; Cal is a Shiny. Meaning his blade is red with the blood of his foes!!!!!!

See! I knew i remembered reading that one of us was a shiny, i just assumed that it was Iatos's Eevee for some reason. If I ever color for future drawings then i'll make sure to remember that Cal is blood red c:

Iatos said
Awesome drawing ^^

Thanks ;u; my Zaraph is on the same team as Freya, btw, and she's a girl. I thought Lixy was male, though.

Ampharos said
Plus, the combinations were somewhat necessary. Zarapth, Enthen, Vulpix, and Streel can't be on the same team since they're all Fire-types, and Caliburn and Monaghan can't be on the same team nor can Zarapth and Monaghan because they share similar types. Lixy and Zee can't be on the same team either because Zee's Lightning Rod would attract Lixy's Electric-type attacks.I also wanted at least one male and one female on each team. Oh, and I just liked the idea of Zee and Caliburn together on a team. That drawing was just too much awesome for it not to happen.

Zee and Cal as partners are my fave. Because easily Cal could be so abusive verbally to her and in the middle of a fight she could just start bawling- it'd be adorably funny.

But yeah, my friend and i were discussing possible teams and he said that the best fit for my Houndour was with the Leafeon because she could take care of all my weaknesses (which are ground, rock, water, and fighting). But he also pointed out that almost everyone would get thrashed by a Golem, hence why i threw in Goran. My friend says that Goran and Tekken would make a boss team, too. So i'm okay if he's meant to show up later on in the game.

Btw CardCaptor i read your CS's to him and he says you have really awesome characters. "Leroy Jenkins" got him laughing for about 5 minutes straight xD

Kiri said
Hey Mana quick word of advice, check out Ampharos's first post in the OOC so you can see just what you need for the CS. Its at the very bottom c:

hey so i tried again, sorry I didn't get a few things but I got it now, Could you maybe look it over again

Well it's a good thing that Honedge's can learn Autotomize. It would cut his weight in half. Also, he doesn't realize he can float yet.

Well Mana i can't approve your CS because im not GM nor am i Co-GM. But i can give you a few pointers om how to strengthen your CS.

For starters: Raltz can be male or female, its not a gender neutral species or gender specific.

2) By abilities Ampharos meant, you know, the actual abilities that the pokemon knows: for example Houndour knows Blaze and Early Bird. You can pick both abilities that your pokemon will typically know. The OP provides a link to bulbapedia for you to look these up c:

3) Ampharos is looking for phrases that describe your characters concept and troubles, for example: "Lonely Warrior" as a concept and their trouble is "Fretful Hypochondriac" and then a description following both, describing what you meant by said phrases.

4) And this is kind of major: you have a few spelling mistakes and grammar issues in your CS, but a quick read through is all you need to fix them. We understand people may rush when posting and make mistakes, it happens to everyone, but in a CS like for this RP we want as much clarity as possible. Ampharos wants the CS's to be on point when it comes to grammar and the like.

And finally the limit for each approach is 3. So you can't give one of the approaches a 4, you feel me?

Fix these few things and im sure Ampharos will accept you once they get back online. Good luck~

Lixy is a male.

Kiri said [Snip]

Couldn't have said it better myself.

Redrose640 said
Lixy is a male.

I think I made this mistake at least once, haha.

Which is why I now have a gender column on my gigantic excel sheet of game info.