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Hidden 10 yrs ago 10 yrs ago Post by Agent B52
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Guys I don't mean to come out as a prick or to point at specific people, there are many scattered over the guild that do this and I've caught this sickness and am guilty of doing this myself on occasions, but it can get kinda infuriating the longer these segments get. Have you ever seen something like that in a book? XD
"No you still have time, But some guy just wrecked everything that was on the table we were at, so you might wanna take an umbrella or something. The place is minutes form a food fight. Unless you're happy with vending machines. I'll treat you! Need to go get a new carton anyway." Diamond offered. “Thank you but I will take my chances. Vending machine food is not really my idea of a filling lunch.” Marcus said as he scanned the crowd. It seemed that for now the imminent crisis was averted.
Do you think it would be possible to write in a way that would not make me read some PARAGRAPHS twice? XD consider this:
When Diamond warned him about the mess in the food court, Marcus scanned the crowd. “Thank you but I will take my chances. Vending machine food is not really my idea of a filling lunch.” he said as it seemed that for now the imminent crisis was averted.
Isn't that a bit more comfortable to read?
I had my doubts about that segment. Thank you for taking the time to actually critique my post.
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Ahh, the old trick where they copy and paste your speech word for word instead of typing out their reactions to it. I know that, and It irritates me to no end.
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Sorry guys, I've gotten real busy as of late. Won't be able to post for a while.
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Ahh, the old trick where they copy and paste your speech word for word instead of typing out their reactions to it. I know that, and It irritates me to no end.
I feel like I'm guilty of this. I copy and paste spoken words and then type up reactions and responses...right?
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Sigh~ I too am guilty of this, when trying to make my posts appear longer....
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I also find it pretty annoying and being honest here there isn't any point in doing so because people will read about four words realize it's something they already read and skip over it completely.
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Also MODA, how often are you checking our pad? XD
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Mostly every day.
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Also, Happy Chinese New years, everyone! It's the Year of the Ram/Goat/Sheep! (*Which ever you prefer)
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Also MODA, how often are you checking our pad? XD
I should probably check it more in light of this statement.
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Also, Happy Chinese New years, everyone! It's the Year of the Ram/Goat/Sheep! (*Which ever you prefer)
Being Chinese myself, I am forced to celebrate Chinese New Year with my parents. It's alright, I guess.
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Hey, Lug, you have any objections to someone playing two teachers? If need be I can fill in for practice, too. I post this here so other people can jump in if they want the spot XD
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So, team MODA, any missions you'd like to take on? I personally think the convoy escort would be perfect.
I made that one with us in mind xD Diamond will advocate it for sure because of the lien payout.
I also vote we take up this mission when the time comes. Tank OP pls nerf.
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Thanks for the insight, Forsythe. That's a badass teacher, Narc. Post him into the Characters tab. If you feel up to it, Kaithas, sure.
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Also Grimm studies class is ready when needed =3
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So, team MODA, any missions you'd like to take on? I personally think the convoy escort would be perfect.
I made that one with us in mind xD Diamond will advocate it for sure because of the lien payout.
I also vote we take up this mission when the time comes. Tank OP pls nerf.
I do not folow, it has yet to even make an appearance. Let alone pull off enough to get the OP label.
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So, team MODA, any missions you'd like to take on? I personally think the convoy escort would be perfect.
I made that one with us in mind xD Diamond will advocate it for sure because of the lien payout.
I also vote we take up this mission when the time comes. Tank OP pls nerf.
I do not folow, it has yet to even make an appearance. Let alone pull off enough to get the OP label.
It's a tank. With quite a few interesting shells to fire. Then again, you're right, it has yet to make an appearance. I guess time will tell.
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Also, Happy Chinese New years, everyone! It's the Year of the Ram/Goat/Sheep! (*Which ever you prefer)
Being Chinese myself, I am forced to celebrate Chinese New Year with my parents. It's alright, I guess.
Normally, I'd be forced to celebrate it too, being Vietnamese. But, I live my own life away from my family so, SCREW IT!
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So, team MODA, any missions you'd like to take on? I personally think the convoy escort would be perfect.
I made that one with us in mind xD Diamond will advocate it for sure because of the lien payout.
I also vote we take up this mission when the time comes. Tank OP pls nerf.
I do not folow, it has yet to even make an appearance. Let alone pull off enough to get the OP label.
Yeah, and when Unsubtle does make an appearance, an enemy A10 Warthog will appear out of nowhere to rip your widdle tank to shreds with its BRRRTTT!!! of Grate Justice.
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