@Hebigami Shiho Character evaluation.
First off, appearance. I reacted to the fact that she has boats on her arms and ladders on her boots (obviously inviting little people to climb in), but also her pale skin. What we've seen of people from Kumo (as far as I know) is that they are noticably darker than people from other villages.
While on the subject of Kumo-stuff, creds for following the naming tradition.
History, might be nitpicking, but a Chuunin leading an elite force? Seems far fetched, but again, details. Rest is all good.
Jutsus, I count only nine.
"Cloud Style Flame Beheading" from the description I get the mental image that there is a short delat between the sword and the flames, is this correct?
I think you have a decent balance and understanding of the ranking system.
Good points you make here. Will edit accordingly (maybe later, cause I'm about to head to school)
@Hebigami Shiho
Hey! Hey! I have a picture for you to use if you want it ^^
Oh, thanks a lot! :D Still, I think I have a perfect image for her, tho, but thank you anyways. :D
And on that note, it is really hard searching for a girl in anime with dark skin and find an image without them being almost nude. -.-'
EDIT: Changed appearance already. Will change the description and story after getting to school.
