[OOC] Naruto: S.E.T.U

[Hebigami Shiho]

@Hebigami Shiho Character evaluation.
First off, appearance. I reacted to the fact that she has boats on her arms and ladders on her boots (obviously inviting little people to climb in), but also her pale skin. What we've seen of people from Kumo (as far as I know) is that they are noticably darker than people from other villages.
While on the subject of Kumo-stuff, creds for following the naming tradition.
History, might be nitpicking, but a Chuunin leading an elite force? Seems far fetched, but again, details. Rest is all good.
Jutsus, I count only nine.
"Cloud Style Flame Beheading" from the description I get the mental image that there is a short delat between the sword and the flames, is this correct?
I think you have a decent balance and understanding of the ranking system.

@Halvtand

Good points you make here. Will edit accordingly (maybe later, cause I'm about to head to school)

@Hebigami Shiho

Hey! Hey! I have a picture for you to use if you want it ^^

Hider

@Shadowcatcher

Oh, thanks a lot! :D Still, I think I have a perfect image for her, tho, but thank you anyways. :D

And on that note, it is really hard searching for a girl in anime with dark skin and find an image without them being almost nude. -.-'

EDIT: Changed appearance already. Will change the description and story after getting to school.

[Shadowcatcher]

@Hebigami Shiho

Ah okay glad to help. I love picture searching XD

[Keanto]

@Shadowcatcher if you like you can search one for me. I like what I have for my character now. But maybe you can find one that is better :-)

[Shadowcatcher]

@Shadowcatcher if you like you can search one for me. I like what I have for my character now. But maybe you can find one that is better :-)

@Keanto

I'm on it!

[AgentFallenSoul]

IM ALMOST DONE T.T I hope my spot is still there, my laptop died on me and I just finally fixed it

[The Red Seelie]

nearly finished oh boy XD

[Hebigami Shiho]

Finished up my CS edits. Let me know if that is better :D

[The Red Seelie]

well that was a journey and a half...
Finally onto the last part
the best part
the bibliography

[Shadowcatcher]

@1Charak2

I'm pretty sure you can post it as a WIP XD

Do you need a picture!? *~*

[The Red Seelie]

Somebody has a picture addiction XD no i do not mainly because i have a idea of immigration
and i have a picture

(family are not native to kumogakure but immigrated their while my character called Nathaniel (oh boy more on that soon) was barely a year old)

[The Red Seelie]

Character sheet posted XD its wip while i work on the Biography

I need to get up and walk my legs feel dead XD from the work

[Shadowcatcher]

@1Charak2

I know how you feel. My CS was some real work. I did it all on my phone x.x

[The Red Seelie]

@1Charak2

I know how you feel. My CS was some real work. I did it all on my phone x.x

@Shadowcatcher

Well i am taking a short hour maybe 2 hour break while my mind is conceptually scheming Xd because i have learnt if you project to long on a single thing you go insane XD or it gets tiresome so yea it will probably be only a hour Xd

[Keanto]

@1Charak2Excellent we will read your character asap

[The Red Seelie]

question keanto now i am back working on the bio
is their anything i need to change about my character?

[Bright_Ops]

I will finish my CS tomorrow. Sleep now.

[The Red Seelie]

okay i have finished the history i am just revising over it now to refine it Xd

[Halvtand]

Looks like I have a lot of catching up to do. That's what you get for leaving your internet unattended... I'll head over to the character-tab right away.

Also, introducing a new co-GM: The mad hatter. We go waaaaay back in Naruto-RPGing, The had matter knows almost as much about Naruto as I do (which is about as much as your common snail). Anything that has to do with the rules of the world, The matt bladder is there for you.

[The Red Seelie]

XD
okay

I know my fair bit cause i was someone who stuck with it till its 700th chapter ...

*best fight*
in my honest opinion was kabuto vs sasuke and itachi.
IDk why but I liked kabuto,

XD

[Halvtand]

@1Charak2 It's a WIP, but I have two things to comment on. First off, I think that you're giving yourself an unecessary flaw with that kekkei genkai. As far as I'm aware there is nothing that says you can't summon multiple "subjects) with the normal kuchiyose no jutsu.
Also, I'm of the firm belief that a summoned creature must either come willingly (like with Naruto and his toads) or be forced (Pein and all of his/their summons). So I'd like a good explanation for how he's able to summon so many creatures.

Also, best fight was Lee vs Gaara in chuunin exam.