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Done.
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A'right, you can put him in the character tab. If you need anything, you know who to call.
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<Snipped quote by RPGSlime>

I'm going to be honest here: we all hate that character type. lol


Says the guy who's made, like, three of them? :P

@RPGSlime: So what about people? Like, can Ivan turn living things into gold? If so, that seems a tad unbalanced to me.

EDIT: Also, what is the gold mixed with? Iron? Zinc? I hope it's not Titanium or your character is Iron Man. I recommend zinc, as it's fairly lightweight will remaining strong from what little I know of metals.
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alright I significantly lengthened the personality and bio as well as fixed the list format of the powers section. The bio still might be a little short, so let me know if you think it could use a little bit more to it. If there is anything else please let me know and I will be happy to fix it.
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@Wintergrey Personality section checks out, I'd like a little bit more in the history section, but eh. The weaknesses you noted aren't weaknesses, they're limitations. And didn't you say that she was fireproof? So why would her body temperature bother her...? Plus, my Co-GM noted that her power is literally the same as Diego... while I said I didn't care (And still don't), I should note that she's pretty redundant compared to him.
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Funny that Astrid's and Diego's powers were so similar. I hadn't even read through that part of his app. Thought of a couple things to make Astrid unique from him. Her center is like the core of the earth. Its heating the rest of her body, acting as a primary source of her fire. To continue to live she has to keep it "alive" by keeping it warm and constantly fueling it. If the temperature drops or she swallows too much water into her lungs it could extinguish it. Instead of having a need to constantly release her fire like I previously said, maybe she only has too if she overheats the core. When she overheats it, instead of the body temperature bothering her, though it would still rise, her veins glow a red orange, as the core shines through the semi-translucent skin of the veins, kind of like shining a flashlight through your hand. Would something like this be better for my character?
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@Wintergrey I don't get it. What really makes her stand out from Diego rather than a few small background things?
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... I guess besides where their power comes from, Diego with Agni and Astrid with her core, not much in terms of powers. I can't think of anything else, suggestions?
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On second thought, you should probably go for another power. It's for the best.
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hmmm, give me a while to think of one
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hmmm, give me a while to think of one


I have ideas if you want to know them.
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please do share. What i could come up with in the last 20 min was a water/ice power and a speed power, which would tie in really well with her ADD. What ideas do you have?
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Ice might be cool. We already have a water bender, but it'd balance out the few heatbased metas we have.
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i'd prefer not to step on anyones toes again, so perhaps i'll avoid ice. Though it's not quite the same i think it's close enough that it might be intruding.
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What if you went with smoke powers? Maybe ash powers? Or both, who knows.
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alright, all edited up again. Thanks for being so patient with me, I hope everything is okay this time!
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@Wintergrey Astrid is accepted.
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I just thought of something: with Heathen gone, we need another healer.

Unless you bitches want your characters to shut up, sit down, and take their god damn advil.
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Oh yeah, @Wintergrey, @RPGSlime, if you need help with how to introduce your characters to the RP (Or any other question), let me know.
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