@lydynCan you put the link for the Chatroom up, I need to save it for my computer. Been using my 2DS until right now.

@Raijinslayer

"The police office had no evidence that the Incubus had actually been taking illegal substances, but Oerba had a feeling about it. The Naga, however, would not make any moves and risk being wrong."

I think Cobra was saying that Oerba THINKS Ian does drugs, based off her own assumptions, not that he actually does. However

@Queen Cobra
"The snake woman said, her red eyes glinting malevolently as she brought up his little relationship with substances."

Is a very assumptive line that suggests she knows Ian does drugs, which is borderline forcing information onto another player. I would recommend you rewrite that line to avoid confusion.

Sorry everyone my computer is done so my progress might be really slow now. It won't even start.

rumors are rumors, guys.

Speaking of officers, are you going to create any NPC officers?

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It's the way you phrased it. You didn't say "His rumored use of substances." or "the belief that he had used substances." it was his "History with substances." It's a flat statement, not a speculation. I can see why Raijin was confused, it even confused me when I read it. Just alter it slightly, for me, please.

EDIT: Thank you snakebutt.

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Probably at some point yes. You can make some as well.

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How are you here

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..... It's called a phone. And my wife will let me use her comp because she loves me.