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Sad Anna post up. :p
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@lydynCan you put the link for the Chatroom up, I need to save it for my computer. Been using my 2DS until right now.
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@lydynCan you put the link for the Chatroom up, I need to save it for my computer. Been using my 2DS until right now.


Lydyn is busy right now I think but here http://us19.chatzy.com/84770423160283
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@onenoteThanks a mil, Bill
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Posted a link in my last IC post, to help visualise Dulla-chan's pose.
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Dullah is funny. ^^
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@Queen Cobra Not sure if this was intentional or not, but In didn't say anything about drugs or his use of them when he was talking to Sophie, so I'm highly confused by that.
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wut

Oh it's because earlier when you were talking to Eliza you mentioned drugs and Oerba would likely know about this

by ''Think about that next time you speak about your little trips'' I mean that she is threatening him by dangling prison over his head and to make him on edge because she's likely heard of the rumors circulating around about Ian and his drug abuse
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@Raijinslayer

"The police office had no evidence that the Incubus had actually been taking illegal substances, but Oerba had a feeling about it. The Naga, however, would not make any moves and risk being wrong."

I think Cobra was saying that Oerba THINKS Ian does drugs, based off her own assumptions, not that he actually does. However

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"The snake woman said, her red eyes glinting malevolently as she brought up his little relationship with substances."

Is a very assumptive line that suggests she knows Ian does drugs, which is borderline forcing information onto another player. I would recommend you rewrite that line to avoid confusion.
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@Raijinslayer

"The police office had no evidence that the Incubus had actually been taking illegal substances, but Oerba had a feeling about it. The Naga, however, would not make any moves and risk being wrong."

I think Cobra was saying that Oerba THINKS Ian does drugs, based off her own assumptions, not that he actually does. However

@Queen Cobra
"The snake woman said, her red eyes glinting malevolently as she brought up his little relationship with substances."

Is a very assumptive line that suggests she knows Ian does drugs, which is borderline forcing information onto another player. I would recommend you rewrite that line to avoid confusion.


rumors are rumors, guys.

It's a threat Oerba is making to make him squirm. She doesn't have solid knowledge that Ian does meth and neither do any of the other officers. Considering that Ian would be in prison if they did.

Speaking of officers, are you going to create any NPC officers?
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@Queen CobraOkay, got it. The way you phrased made it seem like Ian hd brought it up, my bad.
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Sorry everyone my computer is done so my progress might be really slow now. It won't even start.
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Sorry everyone my computer is done so my progress might be really slow now. It won't even start.


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rumors are rumors, guys.


It's the way you phrased it. You didn't say "His rumored use of substances." or "the belief that he had used substances." it was his "History with substances." It's a flat statement, not a speculation. I can see why Raijin was confused, it even confused me when I read it. Just alter it slightly, for me, please.

EDIT: Thank you snakebutt.

Speaking of officers, are you going to create any NPC officers?


Probably at some point yes. You can make some as well.
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It's the way you phrased it. You didn't say "His rumored use of substances." or "the belief that he had used substances." it was his "History with substances." It's a flat statement, not a speculation. I can see why Raijin was confused, it even confused me when I read it. Just alter it slightly, for me, please.

EDIT: Thank you snakebutt.

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Probably at some point yes. You can make some as well.


Step up your game, slowpoke.
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How are you here


..... It's called a phone. And my wife will let me use her comp because she loves me.
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..... It's called a phone. And my wife will let me use her comp because she loves me.


Watch out for all the porn viruses
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@Konami, would you be alright with having a nurse/assistant? Please Pm me if you would consider it.
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Not that anyone really cares, it seems, lol ... but I'm able to use my wife's computer for now.
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Everyone cares, it seems the chatroom is used more than the OOC now though.

For sake of convenience, we're going to call the current date late September.

EDIT: Everyone say hi to Sanbe. I approved his CS via PMs, make him feel welcome everyone.
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