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For now, I'll rule it half-orc's dont exist. Orcs and Humans are two completely different species. It'd be like dog and cat. I'm still not sure how many(if any) of the other fantasy races I want to introduce to this world.


Works for me.

I've done some chewing and the concept I'm going to work with is a young thief from the Empire with a bounty on her head (thus why she's not in the Empire). Still not done yet, but will post tonight.
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Okay, so though I now see that I am not the only person who thought of making a young female thief, this is the character I've been working on. I guess I would be open to changing it if it becomes an issue? However, this is all I have at the moment...



Let me know what you think.
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At this time, I am no longer accepting interest for this RP- any player that has expressed interest prior to this post may still post a character. final character feedback will be given out tomorrow, and the cast should be picked sometime tomorrow night or sunday.
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Okay. I'm REALLY unsure about the last part of the backstory, and I'll happily change it if you don't like it.

Also... Well, crud. Should I make a different character so we don't have two thieves? Hn.

...They have a lot of similarities too. Not physically, and their backgrounds are slightly different, but they're pretty similar otherwise.

EDIT: Made a small edit to the personality section.



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I unfortunately like to rescind my application to this roleplay due to circumstances, however seeing the many detailed characters written here so far I'm consoled by the fact that it won't impact too much on the show of interest.

Have a fulfIling time all!
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@XSilentWingsX A very roguish personality to fit a roguish thief, nothing wrong with what I see.

Your background is detailed and gives me a good summary of her happenings before the start of the RP. Tragic, but fitting.

Regarding skills, while I'm really iffy about allowing anyone to have 'professional' level skills- most of them make sense because 8 years is a lot of time to be doing stuff. An all-round good character, not much for me to nitpick.

@Inlaa, like you said, both characters are fairly similar in style. Her personality is fairly expected for a roguish character, if a bit on the megalomaniacish side.

Regarding her father's death, why did no one bother pursuing her? Even later on in her life? I'd imagine witnesses are the last thing a criminal organization needs.

Skills, as stated previously, I'm not a fan of allowing people to have professional level skills, but again, 10 years is a lot of time to do things.

Regarding her items- I'm really against giving people magical items at the start of the RP, but I guess if it all it does is glow...
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Thanks for the feedback. I was slightly unsure as to what to do for skill levels, so if you'd prefer that I change any down, I'd be completely open to it.
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@Inlaa, like you said, both characters are fairly similar in style. Her personality is fairly expected for a roguish character, if a bit on the megalomaniacish side.

Regarding her father's death, why did no one bother pursuing her? Even later on in her life? I'd imagine witnesses are the last thing a criminal organization needs.

Skills, as stated previously, I'm not a fan of allowing people to have professional level skills, but again, 10 years is a lot of time to do things.

Regarding her items- I'm really against giving people magical items at the start of the RP, but I guess if it all it does is glow...


She's definitely intended to be a nastier character than usual. I figured this was as good a thread as any (given the request for flawed characters) to make someone that could be a decent person, maybe, except they've got a nasty combination of ambition, greed, some feelings of superiority, and some bad decision making skills in the mix. Smart, clever? Sure! Talented? Definitely. But she's liable to do things she knows are bad ideas because of pride or wanting to prove she actually is awesome at what she does.

Concerning nobody pursuing her: they did, for a time. The trouble was the man that saw her didn't get a great glimpse of her, and while the organization knew her father had a daughter, they eventually called off the search because: 1) months went by and nobody found her, 2) she was a merchant's brat that might not even survive the streets, and 3) if she did eventually turn up, they could off her. They certainly wouldn't have thought some punk thief was actually the man's daughter.

(Oh, and you'll notice I've been referring to her by her nickname. I should've written that part in, but: she originally went by Gabriela, but was told "hey, just cut it to Gabby and you'll be safer" by the guild.)

Now, all that said: I'm more than happy to go back and make changes if you think I should. The same goes for the dagger and the skills; indeed, I toyed with it not having been enchanted yet, or her having failed to even get the dagger... but I decided to leave the dagger with her in case some headhunting RP was desired. She has a shiny knife and she's darned well going to keep it, even if it's a giant signal that "HEY! There's a wanted lady over here!"

Skills: I'd be happy to drop those to Adept, but I thought along the same lines you did. Maybe I could just leave Thievery at Professional? It basically covers cutting purses, picking pockets, picking locks, that sort of thing. Stealth would be her ability to actually hide from bad things, and given her personality... I feel like it's something she'd be fairly, you know, counter to her personality.

Worst comes to worst? I can either make an entirely new character (so you don't have two thieves on the table) or revise her to be something different. A few changes in backstory could leave her a character I'd enjoy still. For instance: she could be a young merchant that happens to have a few black market connections through her father; she could be a fledgling mage that thinks she can do whatever the Hell she pleases; or she could have fled to a nunnery (heh) and become a highly learned scholar but one that didn't take to the whole "God / the gods have a plan for all of us" thing too well.

Thoughts? Make edits or change the character? It's not too much work either way.

EDIT: As an aside, whatever I do with this character, she won't be one of the "heart of gold" types. The point is to have someone that is definitely useful to have around, but is self-centered in the end. She could, potentially, go through character development that makes her more of a, you know, decent person... or she could have her beliefs that everyone else is awful solidified. I just want to have someone that is all about "me" on the onset at the least.
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@Inlaa I'd be fine with you dropping stealth down a level. Also, I'm taking a sudden beach trip tomorrow, so if you really want, you have time to rework your character however you like.

To all:
Due to said impromptu beach trip, I shall be holding off on choosing cast until tomorrow night. Make any edits and ask any questions you'd like, and I'll try to get back to you ASAP.
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I made that change. I'll see about writing up an alternate version of Gabby by tomorrow night. I just have to choose what the alternate version will be.

Once that's done, I'll let you choose which version you like more if I'm given the green light to participate.
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To all:
Due to said impromptu beach trip, I shall be holding off on choosing cast until tomorrow night. Make any edits and ask any questions you'd like, and I'll try to get back to you ASAP.


Can't wait :)

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@vietmyke I'm mostly going for the former. I think what I'll do is reduce his age more, make him just a decently competent hammer user tanky sort, and later have him slowly start learning some dark magic. I'll remove the experiments altogether and just have him kept as a political prisoner, and since a younger apprentice could have been sent off to the caravans without issue, I won't kill off the other Slayers and just have them left behind.

Thank you for working with me on this character despite your initial reservations. Even if I do not get picked, I wish you luck with the rp. :)
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Okay. This is Gabby, mage edition. I picked this so the character wouldn't clash with others TOO much.

Some of the personality was just edited; other pieces were stricken out completely. History changes at the point where her father and mother split.

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Thank you for waiting everybody! Cast selection will be coming out sometime today!
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After much thought and consideration... I've decided to stretch my character roster from 5 to 6 characters. With that being said I have selected the cast as follows:

Submitted via PM, our first character will be @Pietra as Elya Aven, the heir of the Kingdom.

We will also be welcoming @Marx as Askeladden, the quiet bastard slave.

Alongside him, we will be bringing on @OneEyedChurro as Dalsarad, the passionate but down to earth farmhand.

We will also be taking on @Inlaa as Gabby, the clever but selfish mage from Varya.

There will also be @Vesuvius00 as Vitoria, the kind hearted healer from Edessa.

And finally, our final cast member will be @McHaggis as Mhairi Bugarric, the brusque and rough hunter from the Welds.

---- Edit: While looking through the character roster, I realized that I forgot a role, and as such will be expanding my roster by one additional person. @XSilentWingsX as Corra Valerrus will also be accepted.

I would like to extend thanks to everyone for their wonderfully written characters. Everyone had very well written characters, and I appreciate all of effort people have put in.
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Oh snap, I made it in.
Can't wait to play with y'all and look forward to being a part of this.
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I can't wait to start! This should be loads of fun.
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Happy gaming everyone!
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I honestly didn't expect to make it in, so this is a very pleasant surprise. Giddy and anticipating a good game.

And I honestly am surprised one person in particular didn't get in instead of me. I enjoyed reading other players' applications. So, yeah, again: giddy about this roleplay.
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